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  • purplehaze2701 .vs. sween dogg

    Sween Dogg - A 'pitch' so high I wouldn't even 'swing' at it

    Sween, Ya only sixteen Ė ya mommy knows its true/
    Who cares but I got pubic hair prolly older than you//
    I could diss you by making fun of myself/
    Ya Started a tornado in ya pants and struggled getting Winds under ya belt//
    I hope ya mic breaks cause you got less flavor than rice cakes/
    Better than me? You'd lose to Vast for Christ Sakes//
    I give you props your a brainiac newcomer/
    But son you take more shorts than Cleptomaniacs in summer//
    Sween Dogg, I ainít fucking feeling Ďem/
    Want some advice - you better stop sucking helium//
    Missing mad punchlines and hits ainít accurate/
    Get paid in manure royalties - and ya still canít rap for shit//
    While I come off harder than Indelible marker stains/
    Your so Outta ya league youíd be eligible for hall of fame//
    Iím achiní to tear micís you think you takiní me ..yeah right/
    Bust my trachea air pipe and that still wonít make it a fair fight//
    Insane-raw-hazardous-painful-passages that affects kids/
    Just like Texas -Chainsaw Massacres/
    Drive by ya Lexus and then paint ball the passengers/
    Wreck so many tracks I cause train car accidents/
    Now Sween makes an album? Heíll never fucking hear props/
    Only way you pressing a copy is hitting the green button on a xerox//


    Peace

    edited for spelling, general corrections
    Last edited by purplehaze2701; 08-13-2001, 02:12 PM.

  • #2
    ok im here

    good verse haze


    wots it to u if im only sixteen, wots a matter r u scared//
    ur jus jealus, that u aint young, and that nobody cared//
    cared for ur life, coz ur by u self, and if u tryed, u never get paired//
    u was lucky that i accepted this challege, coz u'll beat me anyway//
    but only because, ur arse got more dick ryders than freddie mercu-RAY//
    is it my fault, that u aint gettin younger, and u sound like fuckin hear-say//
    it jus goes to show u, u cant beat anyone ur own age//
    and ur jus takin it out on me, coz u will never be ingaged//
    if i had my way, u been tha sort to be locked up in a fuckin cage//
    so everone can laugh at u, and throw fruit at u, and shit//
    u shud know if u fuck wit me, i'll wipe ur face in grit//
    then make u eat the shit, loads of it, an endless pit//
    jus to make me happy, in this fucked up world that i belong//
    i will use ur head as a bell, and ring u on tha hour, ding dong//
    coz u think ur so smart and dope, but i'll take u like a bong//
    fair, enuff, i use to respect ya rhymes, u was a wack emcee//
    but u hav that many dick ryders im suprised u arnt H.I.V//
    but dawg im not sure, u might be, so im cum round yo house to take a sample of ya pee//
    i will get back to ya, as soon as i can, infact rite here rite now, i can tell u, ur feedback//
    oh shit, this shit aint good, wot tha fuck, from yr result i can tell ur a professial, fudge pack//
    so sorry man, im feelin for ya, shit rhymes with quality they lack//
    but dont worry im a be there at the cematemry, so i can see yr gay arse been lowed down//
    but u will get a lot of laughs, coz u were a as good as a clown//
    u thought u knew how to snogg, but u cud'nt see yo love through tha fogg, and u have been lyricly beaten by tha famous sween DOGG//



    ok good luck


    UPPIN FOR VOTES
    Only a few of us left

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    • #3
      vote= purplehaze
      he hit harder with his punchlines and great metaphor's.
      sween, your rhyme was weak as fuck in the begging the it got stronger, if that shit was strong from the begging you woulda had this match
      tight verse from the both of you
      [email protected]

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      • #4
        DAYUUUMMMM!!!!!!! good verses both of you, but PurpleHaze you had me rollin', shit. this line did sween in..........

        Missing mad punchlines and hits ainít accurate/
        Get paid in manure royalties - and ya still canít rap for shit/

        sween good verse though but I just think purplehaze is out of the league us newbies like ourselves are in. purplehaze it flowed well, obviously nice met's, all around excellent verse.

        vote=purplehaze2701

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        • #5
          Heh

          Vote = Haze

          Just too clever and consistent. The "wins/winds" line was dope, along with "clepto" and "royalties" lines.


          But, Sween had the best lines of this entire battle...some of the best I've ever read on this board....

          "but only because, ur arse got more dick ryders than freddie mercu-RAY// "
          - That shit was brilliant... as long as you know who Freddy Mercury was.

          "but u hav that many dick ryders im suprised u arnt H.I.V//"
          - AWESOME.

          Sween, if you'd kept hitting like that, you'd have one this bitch easily. Much props.



          I'm a stuck, starving artist.
          Vincent Van Going nowhere.
          Sold my silver souls to the devil.
          Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
          Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
          Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
          Into the full view.
          Do you see me as suitable...
          to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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          • #6
            yo

            ok, first
            props to 2/3's for tha praise
            props to peel and hotacid for votin

            uppin
            Only a few of us left

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            • #7
              vote

              purple haze u tore shit down again, somebody needs to beat this mother fucker he's on a streak. yours was straight to sween but haze's hit hard and good metaphors.

              vote=purple haze

              i'm kinda new sween so if you wanna battle me set it up i'm 1-1
              click here to make money doing nuthin

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              • #8
                hah

                "purple haze u tore shit down again, somebody needs to beat this mother fucker he's on a streak. "

                ...look at his signature....

                But, unless he suffers some brain damage...i don't think he'll get beat by anyone on this board again.



                I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                Into the full view.
                Do you see me as suitable...
                to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                • #9
                  that will all change in this final hopefully!

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