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  • Open Callenge

    i just got back from florida, and i wanna battle, so drop here
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  • #2
    this is a challenge, to anyone who dares to battle,
    my rhmes are gonna knock you from New York, to Tokyo, to Seattle /
    your style is faker than britney spears’ breasts,
    im carrying on freestylin, while you out cold, takin a rest /
    that shit you droppin is bitten from bizzare,
    you couldn’t be ‘phat’, if you were a cuban cigar /
    you couldn’t drop a beat, even if you were a heart,
    even before you drop, I know im gonna tear you apart /

    I cant feel your rhymes, its like im missing a sense,
    your so wack, youll struggle to complete a single sentence /
    so don’t come out here thinkin you a samarai warrior,
    im ready to blow some shit, now that im back from florida /
    you think you’re a big film star, like robert de niro,
    even before you’ve dropped, I know ive won fife, zero /
    its cos im physic that I know the future,
    but I don’t need powers to know that you ride a scooter /
    probably with your pre school friend,
    trading pokemon cards and playing with army men /
    so fuck off now or youll taste a slug,
    tell your friend, you were smoked by firebug /



    fireb u g
    SAIGON - The Greatest Story Never Told : Coming Soon

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    • #3
      I ACCEPT!!
      .: Ruban Bates :.
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      (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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      • #4
        Yo dawg here my verse!!

        NO BEEF

        Ima takin u to tha cleaners and stringin ya dry\\u couldnt hit me hard even if u try\\and i aint gonna tell my friends i was smoked by a bug, dat'ly be a lie\\just like an ant ima step on u and cause u great pain\\crush all yo bones in yo skeletal frame\\all i see is blood as i look through this red salafain\\i came with tha double barral and fired off 2 palets\\took out my malet and shatta ur skull\\u cant destroy someone who is imortal\\throw u in a portal and watch u fade away as u dissolves\\ima evolve\\transform into a ghost and estrack ur soul\\place my hand through yo chest and ripe out a lung\\and stop yo from breathin, u deserve to be hung\\bring my fist back swing out and swung\\and conect to tha right check bone\\justl ike E.T ima sendin u home\\ima crumble u down to lil pieces like i would do foam\\tear out yo hip bone and snap it ova my kneez\\ima squashin u like u were a bee\\and makin u spin out just like u slipped Ez\\ill cut ur wrist with my house keyz\\and make ur vains spil blood all down ur arm\\breakin into yo ribs like it need its own alarm\\u betta stay calm\\as i throw this dagger straight through yo palm\\and pin u like jesus\\ima ghost dat emerges from tha darkness and u cant see us\\u make a big fuss\\as tha X to tha C slices u up lib by lib\\knock yo tooth so loose its like a door hangin off its hindge\\u knew u shouldnt fuck with me and tha 7 deadly sins\\theres no more need to battle cos we all know who winz\\

        PEACE dawg

        (EDIT)
        spellin errors!!
        Last edited by X-TACY; 08-15-2001, 05:57 AM.
        .: Ruban Bates :.
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        (BattlE RecorD - 25/12)
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        • #5
          UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          SAIGON - The Greatest Story Never Told : Coming Soon

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          • #6
            yo.

            I'm at work right now...about to go out and smoke a cig. I'll vote when I get back.

            Just wanted to say...Ill Rhymer...that was a really, really dope verse. I'll read X's when I get back.



            I'm a stuck, starving artist.
            Vincent Van Going nowhere.
            Sold my silver souls to the devil.
            Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
            Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
            Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
            Into the full view.
            Do you see me as suitable...
            to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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            • #7
              thanx man,
              that will show them haters who sayin im the worst mc on the boards,
              thanx man
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              • #8
                both good verses, but mah vote goes to................Ill Rhymer cuz his hit harder, and he had some good lines

                your style is faker than britney spears’ breasts,
                im carrying on freestylin, while you out cold, takin a rest /

                you couldn’t drop a beat, even if you were a heart,
                even before you drop, I know im gonna tear you apart /
                X-TACY's verse was good also, but Ill's was betta, no beefin, jus votin
                DertyHarry.CJB.Net

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                • #9
                  y0.

                  Vote = Ill Rhymer

                  X, you said a lot, but said little at the same time. No disrespect...just criticizm.


                  Favorite lines...

                  "you couldn’t drop a beat, even if you were a heart"

                  "I cant feel your rhymes, its like im missing a sense,
                  your so wack, youll struggle to complete a single sentence"


                  "probably with your pre school friend,
                  trading pokemon cards and playing with army men /
                  so fuck off now or youll taste a slug,
                  tell your friend, you were smoked by firebug"



                  I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                  Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                  Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                  Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                  Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                  Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                  Into the full view.
                  Do you see me as suitable...
                  to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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                  • #10
                    thanx for votin peeps,

                    ILL RHYMER 2-0 X-TACY

                    uppin for votes

                    when they grow up freestyle-
                    http://www.d12world.com/board/showth...&threadid=6077
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                    • #11
                      ill rhymer ,

                      i was feelin his verse slightly more mainly becuz of the heart line which won it i think , plus the 1st few lines on xss verse were weak ,

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                      • #12
                        3-0
                        i win
                        good battle dawg
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