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  • ***vote*** Dj Phat Vs Sikotik ***vote***

    rules, as many bars as you like
    first to 3 votes
    no crew/dickrydin/hate votes
    the normal rules

    My Verse: 21 bars long

    my lyrics are a perfect example of demoralisation //
    without warnin i spit a verse in our conversation //
    yo living in HELL but yo cud neva be SATAN //
    id chop off my tongue and still win leavin yo hatin //
    creatin verses, whilst im out enjoying matin //
    wit your girlfriend and yo mom in a mass gang bang //
    till she sang her fucking orgasm till my ears rang //
    yo cudnt make yo g.f cum, not even through saddistic torture //
    she swallows my load, you walk and shouts 'CAUGHT YA' //
    yeah bitch, she caught me, it was a fucking bullseye //
    a direct hit then she sank to her knees and turns bi //
    cos you cudnt hit tha SPOT if it was marked wid a CROSS //
    its yo loss, cause she cums runnin STRAIGHT to tha boss //
    cos u cudnt decieve if yo was in a credit card fraud //
    tha cops fly in and all yo can hear is m16 bullets bein poured //
    through yo window, at midnight wen all yo drugs been stored //
    yo got coke like CHALK spread all over yo BLACKBOARD //
    crumbled off, and da bag o pills unda da floorboard //
    you look fo them find 100 pilled up rats that ave gnawed //
    cos u cant hide yo drugs like yo cant hide wack verses //
    curses burst all ova yo first rhymes lyrical nurses //
    and there purses be stowing away all the punchlines //
    all pre-written, not to mention bitten made up at lunchtimes //



    DJ PHATS VERSE:

    U read my style and it was *Love at First Bite*/
    ya postin 50 times a night/
    But ya rhymes wouldn't *stand out* if i shone them through a 10,000 watt light/
    Coz ya talkin shit, shit this is barely a battle/
    My response makin u more *mad* than a CJD infested 1000 cow cattle/
    Like a snake without a rattle, ya rhymes make no *noise*/
    I'm the *THRILLER* that everybody avoids/
    Michael Jacksons killer, with my full arsenal deployed/
    U couldn't make ur rhymes *phat* if u OD'd em on steroids/
    and u wouldn't rain hard, if u were a fuckin sea of asteroids/
    wait, i remember, I'm gettin demorilised, shit, I'll be gone til November/
    But Sikotik couldn't serve me up, coz he's like a limbless bartender/
    The only way you'll defeat me is if I surrender/
    Or if i decide i don't want my three votes, and i lend-em-ya

  • #2
    it was originally from 'I Wanna Battle Someone' but i put it into a proper thread, anywyas, first to 3 and UPPIN

    PEACE

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    • #3
      UPPIN

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      • #4
        UPPIN

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        • #5
          Vote.

          Vote = DJ Phat

          U read my style and it was *Love at First Bite*/
          ya postin 50 times a night/
          But ya rhymes wouldn't *stand out* if i shone them through a 10,000 watt light/


          That first line had me laughin' hard, and the rhyme scheme was nice.

          Sikotik..you have the wordplay going on and all, but it's just not really anything special. I mean no disrespect, but you should try and get a little more creative with your verses. Rack your head for a hot minute before you spit. The object of the game is to come up with lines that make people stop and think for a second, then when it hits 'em, they're like "OH SHIT, that was ILL." Seriously, if you can come up with like..3 or 4 really dope lines, that's all you'll really need to win a battle. Just don't completely slack on the rest of ya verse. Keep doin' what you're doin'. Like I said before, you'll come into your own soon enough. Just keep it up.

          By the way, you're doing the right thing by putting this battle in a new thread...unlike A LOT OF THE OTHER MOFUCKAS ON THIS BOARD.



          I'm a stuck, starving artist.
          Vincent Van Going nowhere.
          Sold my silver souls to the devil.
          Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
          Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
          Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
          Into the full view.
          Do you see me as suitable...
          to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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          • #6
            aiyo thanks fo da advise 2/3, its appreciated, i understand where ya coming from, i was just a lil annoyed that id lost like 3 battles in one day, and i cudnt sleep and i wrote it at like 1:30am, although i did actually try to be creative, hmmm, ah well, no beef, thanks fo voting

            PEACE

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            • #7
              votin

              vote = dj phat
              i liked da way he used complex metaphors and made them rhyme
              sikotik thanks for votin 4 me against yeroc
              cant wait to battle u in da tourni
              get more people to join
              ~* DEFEATED *~
              D-Burna (2-3)
              Bigbonger (1-3)
              Bigbonger (0-3) rematch


              TOP EMCEES I'VE BATTLED (PROPZ)
              1. HOT Acid
              2. Yeroc
              3. Peel Junkee
              4. Prominant

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              • #8
                UPPIN

                UP WE GO

                DJ Phat = 2
                Sikotik = 0
                "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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                • #9
                  ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

                  Uppin this mother
                  "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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                  • #10
                    vote

                    dj phat had some tight ass metaphors. sikotic your shit was straight i bet if you waited like three days and put all your shit together u would start winning like u did at first its probably cuz u battle like ten times your fucken brains goin crazy and shit.

                    vote=djphat
                    click here to make money doing nuthin

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                    • #11
                      aiyo nice battlin ya dj, i am takin a couple of days outta battlin yall, but ill still try and vote as much as possible, thx fo votin yall

                      PEACE

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                      • #12
                        Thanx 4 the votes y'all... it was first to 3 right?

                        Thats me..

                        Laterz

                        Thanx for the battle Sikotik
                        "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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