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  • *vote*the invincible vs H0TAciD*vote*

    15 bars....

    my verse

    ~~~~~~~


    your sticking my body with electrical charged bolts//
    taking over my mind, trying to take control//
    little did you know, i gotta sicker mind then edgar allen poe//
    i'd wake up from the project and make the nurse start screaming''OMG HE'S STARTING TO REVOLT//
    i started grabbing the sharpest objects that i could find//
    ima ghost in the devine shadow, fuck i could rewind time//
    the battle tactics im spitting are better then those of eyerone' and MC Maximus prime//
    they'll kill you in 4 bars and no i won't give you a headstone nor a shrine//
    you've just battled the lyrical knife ending ya life in strife, witout even trying tonight//
    you could never get a final vote if you were fantasy//
    nor get a good comment, even if you ask relunctantly//
    with your wack ass rhyme which didn't even surprise-me//
    if i was dead your rhymes couldn't even revive-me//
    you may say that your ass is called the invincible//
    but respect me bitch cause im of higher principal//

    side notation
    final fantasy is a video game in which they made ALOT OF THEM
    *EDITED TO MAKE SIDE NOTATIONS

  • #2
    aight, yur death is slow and PAIN-FULL

    ** warning **

    HAHA! i BOUGHT-GLASSES jas to SEE if illness is HOT-ACID/
    but i guess not, im HARD, son, yur SOFT, like melted PLASTIC/

    *** alert...alert...alert ***

    battling INVINCE, is kinda like yu a washed-up 'FIRE-FIGHTER'/
    dont fucc with these hot-lines, cos yu gotta admit MINE-R-TIGHTER/
    i flip yur neck, DICONNECT-YA-SPINE and make yah 'MIND-RESURRECT'/
    jas so yu can 'RE-LIVE-da-MEMORY', of what my RHYME-LEVEls-AT/
    i guess yur acid is hot, cos son, it misplaced ya FACIAL-FEATURES/
    ya in LEISURE, cos u RETIRED, when yu fight me, its like FACIN-SEIZURES/
    when HOtACID, heard of VINCE, his penis UNGOT-FLACID, im FANTASTIC/
    yu 'STRETCH' the truth about yur BITTEN lines, more then 'ELASTICS'/
    fuccen wit me, is like MESSIN-WIT-A-GOD, read my 1-COMMANDMENT/
    1. if u dont lose here, ima PLAGUE this world wit DISEASE-&-FAMINE/

    ** system shutdown **

    yur flow is 'MELLOW-YELLOW', cause there are SEVERAL-SEEN-'GAPS'/
    rewind yu with the HARDEST-HIT, and leave yah wit MENTAL-RELAPSE/


    ...ahem?
    playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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    • #3
      vote=HOTAciD

      they both flowed really well, both hit pretty hard, pretty good metaphors, reallly reallly close battle hard to judge. props to you both. these lines just got me chucklin' though, so i had to go wit acid.

      with your wack ass rhyme which didn't even surprise-me//
      if i was dead your rhymes couldn't even revive-me//

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Peel Junkee
        vote=HOTAciD

        they both flowed really well, both hit pretty hard, pretty good metaphors, reallly reallly close battle hard to judge. props to you both. these lines just got me chucklin' though, so i had to go wit acid.

        with your wack ass rhyme which didn't even surprise-me//
        if i was dead your rhymes couldn't even revive-me//
        why would i want my rhymes to revive him? im tryin to battle him, not go on a date wit him...lol

        1-0 HOTACID

        pz
        playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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        • #5
          vote

          they were both pretty good... hotacid came wit some pretty funny punchlines and metaphors but... i aint hatin on u hotacid u still a tight rhymer but i gotta say the invincible had better metaphors



          VOTE=THE INVINCIBLE
          Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

          L O S T

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          • #6
            1-1 tie...


            hmmmm, close battle....

            pz
            playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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            • #7
              My vote goes to the invincible...

              the invincible=2, HOTAciD=1

              HOTAciD's verse was corny. Hip hop rule #76: Just because you use metaphors and similes, don't mean they don't have to be interesting.
              Last edited by Marcel Lee; 08-16-2001, 03:16 PM.

              www.marcellee.com

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              • #8
                HIS VOTE DONT COUNT!!!
                MARCEL LEE'S VOTE DONT COUNT ITS CAUSE IM DISSING HIM IN THE OTHER THREAD

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                • #9
                  anotha thing

                  another thing... hotacid had did have some gaps in the rhymes, you could tell where they were... the invincible was... well... flawless and "invincible"
                  Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

                  L O S T

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                  • #10
                    ok coo'....

                    1-1

                    pz
                    playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                    • #11
                      Re: anotha thing

                      Originally posted by Freestyla122
                      another thing... hotacid had did have some gaps in the rhymes, you could tell where they were... the invincible was... well... flawless and "invincible"
                      maybe, they were both blind verses, i didnt read his verse befo' i keyed mine up.....

                      pz
                      playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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                      • #12
                        To the invincible...

                        My vote don't count?

                        Man, I read both verses. My vote was fair and square. Don't you see what he doing?

                        Fuck it.

                        www.marcellee.com

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                        • #13
                          VOTE=INVINCIBLE

                          Both verses where hot and its hard to choose from both verses since im cool wit both of yall it was hard to pick one>>>iight hotacid had some nice shit but 2 bars look like they where used from eminem,,had some simple rhymes nothing to nice but it was good i like it>>the lines i where talking bout was.

                          i started grabbing the sharpest objects that i could find// this sounded like the sharpest object i can grab come back the next week and reopen ur scab

                          screaming''OMG HE'S STARTING TO REVOLT// sounded like brain damage

                          but some hot lines were+++they'll kill you in 4 bars and no i won't give you a headstone nor a shrine//
                          you've just battled the lyrical knife ending ya life in strife, witout even trying tonight//shit was nice
                          anyway invince had some alrite shit and some hard shit in there that was damn pretty tight but he also could expand his rhymes more instead of 2 bars,,but shit had a nice flow to it====

                          i flip yur neck, DICONNECT-YA-SPINE and make yah 'MIND-RESURRECT'/ ++=shit was hard

                          when HOtACID, heard of VINCE, his penis UNGOT-FLACID, im FANTASTIC/
                          yu 'STRETCH' the truth about yur BITTEN lines, more then 'ELASTICS'/ ++++that was nice

                          overall vote goes to invisible
                          Last edited by emyhr; 08-16-2001, 03:21 PM.

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                          • #14
                            MARCEL LEE FUCK YOU, FIRST OFF YOU NEVER VOTE ON BATTLES AND ME AND YOU GOT BEEF YOUR VOTE DONT COUNT
                            2-1 INVINCIBLE UPPIN

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                            • #15
                              ight......coo'

                              2-1 invince

                              pz
                              playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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