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  • k sikotik lets do it

    20 bar max
    no dick rydas
    no crew votes


    ill drop first or we can just run it tomorrow whatever get at me and let me know... i never had any beef lets run it
    -WINS-
    bigbonger <3-0>
    sikotik <4-2>
    cochillin<3-1>
    -LOSE-
    ill rhymer<4-0>
    eggnoj<3-1>


    Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

  • #2
    its 4:15 am and im fallin asleep, but heres my verse....

    aiyo POKE-AND-CHOKE like barrymores dickryder did //
    off sexual injuries he ended drowning hahaha kid //
    no fuckers expect shit from you your new and wack //
    you lack what it takes to become dope on this board //
    gettin PINNED on your rhymes like MESSAGE on yo chord //
    cus im forward, i dont hide, and ill tell yo the truth //
    shootin like a RUTH-less hoe wen she gets DICK //
    and admits shes a gay teenybopper like rick //
    and bond its a MARTINi yo be SHAKEN and STIRRED //
    and arse fucked by sum homo wen yo gets lurred //
    into his car with sweets like a baby //
    HIV infected hoe wants dick, you said maybe?! //
    but this all this shit is figure of speech //
    get infected with sipheles docs prescribed da leech //
    to suck yo blood and cure yo bitch ass disease //
    cus ur rhymes are just STRIP-ed of tightness //
    then they get TEASED cus theyre lifeless //
    mine are priceless fucking platinum plaque stuff //
    if yo want a fucking win, its called fucking TOUGH! //

    now as i said, its 4;15 am, im so sorry for tha wackness, if any of the above rhyme made any sense in the slightest make sure u tell me, cus i cant read it cus my eyes are shuttin at the mo, anyways, uppin for pokes verse, no beef

    PEACE

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    • #3
      UPPIN FO POKES VERSE, hmmm im just see if ur still logged on, if not soz, just post 2moz, if u are check in or drop

      PEACE

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      • #4
        good one k here i go

        To me you aint nothin but a bitch ass GAY//
        If i want a win its tough you say//
        Bitch you tell stories like MOTHER GOOSE//
        While drug moneys gettin shot with a DUCE DUCE//
        they call you sikotik so what your INSANE//
        My names POKE AND CHOKE and i dont need no GANG//
        Still the same when it comes to writin my rhyme//
        shit its only like my second time//
        Like BRITNEY SPEARS ill hit you ONE MORE TIME//
        the first i get a revote isnt that bad//
        cause sikotik had dick rydas and i got mad//
        its all good cause i ignored it//
        until your whining ass screamed fine i FORFEIT//
        Im slick like ky all up in your ass//
        Ill smoke you faster then i would grass//
        i told you bitch your done//
        Im fuckin you up this time but just for fun//
        Hows that for crazy.. choke slam you like KANE//
        Put you in a headlock and break your neck PERMANENTLLY//
        Knee you in your fucken kidneys until you bleed ETERNALLY//



        i tried to man i dunno wack or not no beef
        uppin yall dont just fuckin read it vote please

        uppin yall
        -WINS-
        bigbonger <3-0>
        sikotik <4-2>
        cochillin<3-1>
        -LOSE-
        ill rhymer<4-0>
        eggnoj<3-1>


        Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

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        • #5
          sorry bro

          my bad dude nice verse and all im sorry i took so long.....i had to do somethin real quick ................good luck


          uppin for votes
          -WINS-
          bigbonger <3-0>
          sikotik <4-2>
          cochillin<3-1>
          -LOSE-
          ill rhymer<4-0>
          eggnoj<3-1>


          Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

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          • #6
            sok i dnt mind, its 5:45 and i avent slept at all, and im still up, but my verse dint make ne sense at all i dnt think, at least peeps can understand yours anyways

            UPPIN

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            • #7
              man its my first or second time on here so im not all that good at rhymin but i try you know tell me what you think
              -WINS-
              bigbonger <3-0>
              sikotik <4-2>
              cochillin<3-1>
              -LOSE-
              ill rhymer<4-0>
              eggnoj<3-1>


              Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

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              • #8
                what tha voters think or what i think? well this is what i think...

                4 words:
                1)Diction - rhyme longer complex words
                2)multis - i cnt giv a good example of these but what your menna do is find a word that you can break down - actually ill just show yo my wack example

                'tha rhymes RACKING cus im the RAP-IN-KING'
                so it rhymes like that, that was wack cus i dnt really know these either

                3)Metaphors - basically a simile without using 'like' or 'as' heres a similie that you used which is over-played
                'Like BRITNEY SPEARS ill hit you ONE MORE TIME// '
                as a metaphor that cud be
                'ima be BRITNEY SPEARS and hit you ONE MORE TIME//'
                i think, if ne dope emcees see this and want to help feel free

                4) punchlines - the big one, funny sometimes, wordplay, i aint good at these at all, so i cnt really giv u any good examples, look at sum of purple hazes stuff and tha more dope mc's

                well theres my newbie lyric lesson of tha day sorry fo that, i ave nowt better to do, hehehe, UPPIN

                PEACE

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                • #9
                  uppin

                  uppin yall dont read just give us a vote please

                  thanks for the tip sikotik good lookin

                  uppin
                  -WINS-
                  bigbonger <3-0>
                  sikotik <4-2>
                  cochillin<3-1>
                  -LOSE-
                  ill rhymer<4-0>
                  eggnoj<3-1>


                  Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

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                  • #10
                    vote on this yall please

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                    • #11
                      come on

                      i didnt care bye the way about that dude votin on you there was no need for a revote but i dont care anywayz ...... good luck anyhow


                      uppin yall dont just fuckin read vote is it that hard like 30 reviews and we are the only ones replyin fuck that vote


                      UPPIN FOR VOTES
                      -WINS-
                      bigbonger <3-0>
                      sikotik <4-2>
                      cochillin<3-1>
                      -LOSE-
                      ill rhymer<4-0>
                      eggnoj<3-1>


                      Your fat your ugly and your mom dresses you funny FUCK OFF

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                      • #12
                        ok lets make this fair and square, cus in my opinion your battle verse this time round was bettr than last, so im gonna delete you off ym defeated list and forget about that whole battle, and start again, which is also why i deleted my shit list, im tryin as hard as poss for a new start but i dnt wanna change name and stuff cus im in a great crew wiv sum tight dawgs, now anyone who votes must giv a valid reason else it wont count, im just go and change my sig now, UPPIN YALL

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                        • #13
                          sik got my vote he just hit harder that the only advantage he had over pokeandchoke
                          and poke, you gotta use a wider spread of word's dawg, holla

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                          • #14
                            ok ur off defeated list, thanks for voting hotacid, appreciated,

                            pokeandchoke = 0
                            sikotik = 1

                            first to 3

                            PEACE

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                            • #15
                              yo sik go vote on ym battle against the invincible
                              thanx [email protected]

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