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    Last edited by Ian; 01-11-2003, 03:52 PM.
    "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

  • #2
    OH...

    AHHH THAT WAS SO CUTE

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    • #3
      I want to jump through this computer and comfort you.

      That was so beautiful and heart felt.I have felt that way and I've made people feel that way too.I know the happiness you wrote and the sadness too.Hey!Your one in a million.She must know because it's so clear to me!She may be scared to
      share her self.Love is scary and thats what your offering her.Everyone has had heartbreaks and she is probably scared to get close and then lose you later.She may have scars and even some open wounds that she ain't ready to share YET.Keep the faith your probably the best thing for her.BUT protect your self and don't be alone while your waiting because she may not change and YOU deserve more than that.God created you and LOVES you.These trails ain't suppost to break you they are ment to prepare us I think. anyway MUCH LOVE

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      • #4
        i think u need to get some fuckin ballz man
        wut da fuck iz dat
        and those gurls who replied to dis shunt be in rap i mean we dont people turnin dat into pop music
        wut next back street boyz are gonna sing their love songs in rhyme

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        • #5
          ok i deserved da newbie comment
          i wanna apologize dawg
          at dat time i said dat shit i got dumped by ma gurl so as u cud see i didnt wanna read about ne other guyz bird
          gud rhyme but u shud keep dat shit close to you and people shunt have da privilage of readin it
          pnce again upmost respect
          and i hope u accept ma apology
          holla bak
          no beefs
          PEACE

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          • #6
            come on people

            Accepted

            Feedback. Just read it and tell me what u think y'all. I know its long.. but its important to me. Hell, there are almost 30 people on here.
            "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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            • #7
              aight this was nice, had some emotions involved and shit, good flow, creative, overall a nice piece......kinda long tho', its a turn-off to the readers eyes....

              pz
              playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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              • #8
                Highly Intelligent Feedback...

                To DJ Phat:

                You know you my dog and your rhyme-flow is cool, but I couldn't make it thru the third verse without stopping and running to the bathroom for a swig of Pepto B. The whole concept was nauseating. Check this out...

                DJ Phat, what you crying fo? What you sad fo?
                Why you sittin with yo head down surrounded by candles?
                What's on your mind bro? Damn, are you dying? (No..)
                Well what's wrong? (She's gone, Marcel she left my ass) So?
                What line did she give you? (She said sh...) Oh wait!
                Let me guess, classic bullsihit, she need some mo space?
                (Yep) Well now you free, enjoy yourself, go date
                Strap some game on yo waist and trip Bahamas for 4 days
                Don't ever let me see you sheding tears over no chick man
                Fuck commitment! From now on, women are just friends
                And I'm willing to bet she left your ass for another brother
                Another lover, and what? You crying like busta sucker
                I tell guys all the time, no matter how well you treat a chick
                Feed her shrimp, eat her clit, it ain't guaranteed to keep the bitch
                She probably was playing you, little cards and kisses
                While all the while thinking of "Tim" and how large his dick is!
                Don't ever believe a lame excuse like "I need some space"!
                Usually that's fake and means "I found someone to take your place"!
                I can't believe you so naive, pathetic and vunerable!
                Starting love threads, gettin all emotional, over a hoe!!!

                Now pick yourself up and bring your ass back to the OI2 After-Party! I got some butt-naked scrippers waitin for you!!!
                Last edited by Marcel Lee; 08-22-2001, 02:20 AM.

                www.marcellee.com

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                • #9
                  hey dawg as u know i got dumped by ma gurl yesterday so i'm gonna write a short verse
                  damn we shud call dis hi i got ditched thread

                  ....and u said u still wanted to be freinds/ fuck that we cant b friends cause this whole in ma heart will neva mend/ so everytime we meet u can laugh at wut u see/ wantin to be friends damn u obviously neva knew the real me/ and after tuesday hell i thought everythin woz goin fine/ i guess i neva saw da warning sign/ u neva had da guts to say shit to my face i had to read it off ma cell fone it felt like some1 had strapped a bomb to ma mind/ neva givin me a real reason/ i didnt do shit because of u all of this summer season/ is it because i thought ur best mate was a slut/ bitch i hate u and i want to 4get but i'll keep bein reminded because this whole shit is fucked

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                  • #10
                    Well, I feel like a shit for posting that whole thing now. I wasted a lot of time on it i guess, coz its not like she'd appreciate it. Gonna chop it down to one verse now. The third one, coz its my fave. Any more comments still welcomed

                    holla
                    "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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                    • #11
                      Not A Waste Of Time

                      Yo, that wasn't a waste of your time if it came straight from the heart. Everyone expresses themselves differently, and if that's how u felt then that makes it all the better. You can't be stressing about how others feel about your rhyme, just because they express things in a different form. Hell it takes a real man to let out their true emotions. It's when u keep them bottled inside that'll kill ya. As one starts to mature, that's when they realize the power of LOVE Da313Diva says make love not war
                      You're so poor, I came into your house, dropped a cigarette, and the roaches came out clappin' their hands and stompin' their feet, singing, "Thank the Lord we got heat."

                      http://www.cartoondollzhome.homestea...s/couple04.gif
                      REV & DA313DIVA sittin' in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g, first came love, then came marriage, then came the baby in the baby carriage

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                      • #12
                        This is the last time i UP this thread, honestly. I just want some feedback from peeps who ignored it first time for being too long.

                        holla back
                        "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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                        • #13
                          Aiyo

                          Marcel Lee that first you dropped was mad ill! Fuckin tight shit, PM me with more of your stuff thats mad, yo do you do audio at all? Or jess text?
                          Comin' up wit a new signature.

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                          • #14
                            To DeVour...

                            Thanks for the complement. I do both text and audio (I'm trying to get signed!). Check out more verses from me at "The Official OI2 After-Party". Read below...
                            Last edited by Marcel Lee; 08-23-2001, 11:12 PM.

                            www.marcellee.com

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                            • #15
                              fuck man that shit was touching

                              man, ur shit was real Phat , i loved it, i have jus broken up on bad terms wit my gal,so it was,comforting,to see dat i was not alone in mah pain,

                              ur cool man

                              peace

                              props to-
                              #Marcel Lee
                              #Dj_Sleepy
                              #Funk Docta
                              #Emin3m_2001
                              #MC Maximus Primus
                              #DJ Phat
                              If I cArEd...YoU'd Be DeAd....HeHeHe....I aint eva gone let y'all run me!
                              I'm da muthafuckin' Pheonix!
                              1st fuckin' trick tah end dem all!
                              Pheonix A.K.A DA_LYRICAL_GLOCK

                              Eminem-Scytzophrenia!How many ofya got it?how many muthafuckers can say they're psychotic?

                              Tupac-I got ya ass in my sights *****,like a dynamite,we screamin'"WESTSIDE FA' LIFE!"

                              RUN DMC-It's like that , and that's the way it is...

                              I never said my rhymes were good...I never really understood....
                              I never really gave a fuck....
                              mosta my life is down tah luck....
                              i never ate that baby whole....
                              just had a few nibbles before the skull.......

                              PrOpS-
                              #KK~420
                              #Funk_Docta
                              #DJ_Sleepi
                              #Illest_Spitter
                              #Da_Hood
                              #My fucking crew(u know who u are)

                              D.A Crew 4 life!
                              Dissin' Angry Crew

                              God Bless The Dead-
                              Tupac Amaru Shakur-2Pac
                              Aaliyah Haughton-Aaliyah
                              Christopher Wallace-Notorious B.I.G
                              Christopher Rios-Big Punisher
                              Eric Wright-Eazy muthafuckin E
                              R.I.P /\ /\ /\

                              hit me up on MSN at - [email protected] aint ever on though sometimes....

                              13th September is coming soon....be prepared....

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