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    Dark-Druid, Jehu. Just incase are crew name is Kurrupted Mindz, heres a short verse I wrote for are crew. Ayo people please gimme feedback!!!!

    Get ready for some Kurrupted Mindz /
    Spittin rhymes, tearin y'all apart starting at the spine /
    Cause I'm hell bent, hell sent to dwell on this planet and add my two cents /
    Become a prophecy rippin emcees that are wack like its a philosephy /
    Ha Ha thats right im a Kurrupted Mind spittin this ill shit, I feed on it /
    Plagueing this world with shit like the curses from Egypt, like swarming locusts /
    To rip apart emcees who are bogus /
    So focus /
    On how I take over the earth with ease /
    Carrying a demonic disease and spreadin it /
    Cause no one can match up to the intellect of this kurrupted mind, this haunted soul /
    Taking control and bringing to life whats fictional /
    So all hail me and my corrupted finds, all hail me, a Kurrupted Mind /
    Status:

    [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
    ~ Profanity
    ~ X-TACY
    ~ The Slick Jesus
    ~ DJ Scidazals

    [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
    ~ Prominant
    ~ The Invincible
    ~ Dark-Druid
    ~ PurpleHaze2701
    ~ Eyerone


    My Crew:

    [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
    ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
    ~ Dark-Druid
    ~ Jehu

    [ Other Doggz ]
    ~ Cad
    ~ The Slick Jesus
    ~ Prominant
    ~ Lyrikally Lost
    ~ The Invincible
    ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


    Signature:

    [ PoiZonous E. ]
    ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
    ~ Tha Toxic Death
    ~ I come here to slit wrists
    ~ To strip you of your every last breath

  • #2
    personally, i gotta say that was fucking tight!

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    • #3
      feedback

      its aight... that one line about bogus emcees was kinda corny and the line after that is kinda short but other than that it's aight



      HoLLa................
      Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

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      • #4
        Thanks

        Ayo, thanks fo' the feeback, uppin' fo' more! :D
        Status:

        [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
        ~ Profanity
        ~ X-TACY
        ~ The Slick Jesus
        ~ DJ Scidazals

        [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
        ~ Prominant
        ~ The Invincible
        ~ Dark-Druid
        ~ PurpleHaze2701
        ~ Eyerone


        My Crew:

        [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
        ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
        ~ Dark-Druid
        ~ Jehu

        [ Other Doggz ]
        ~ Cad
        ~ The Slick Jesus
        ~ Prominant
        ~ Lyrikally Lost
        ~ The Invincible
        ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


        Signature:

        [ PoiZonous E. ]
        ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
        ~ Tha Toxic Death
        ~ I come here to slit wrists
        ~ To strip you of your every last breath

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        • #5
          not bad, i'd rip your whole crew without thinking

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          • #6
            lol

            I would ride your dick on every battle you ever do if you could beat Dark-Druid, but news flash ya cant
            Status:

            [ Lyrically Ripped Apart ]
            ~ Profanity
            ~ X-TACY
            ~ The Slick Jesus
            ~ DJ Scidazals

            [ Tha Hot Emcees ]
            ~ Prominant
            ~ The Invincible
            ~ Dark-Druid
            ~ PurpleHaze2701
            ~ Eyerone


            My Crew:

            [ Kurrupted Mindz ]
            ~ PoiZonous ExiZtance
            ~ Dark-Druid
            ~ Jehu

            [ Other Doggz ]
            ~ Cad
            ~ The Slick Jesus
            ~ Prominant
            ~ Lyrikally Lost
            ~ The Invincible
            ~ ShAdY D12 DiVa


            Signature:

            [ PoiZonous E. ]
            ~ I am the PoiZonous ExiZtance
            ~ Tha Toxic Death
            ~ I come here to slit wrists
            ~ To strip you of your every last breath

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            • #7
              Aye

              Uhm, well keep practing, thats all I can say...
              Comin' up wit a new signature.

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