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  • Open Challenge

    I'm new and my guns are loaded....lol.... rules:


    30 bars. u drop first. first to 5 votes. no dick ridin, crew votes, and MUST GIVE REASON WHY U VOTE FOR SOMONE.

    peace
    The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

    Peace,
    e

  • #2
    i'll beat you, i mean battle you, uner one condition, you post first! Since you opened the challenge, you post first!
    “See to live is to suffer but to survive
    well that's to find meaning in the suffering.” ~ D.M.X.

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    • #3
      Battle RAP

      Who are you? Quiet STORM,
      *Wheather Report*, No STORMS have FORMED
      Answer my call? Fuck *Off*, 'Cause I'ma turn it *ON*
      It seems you haven't been RAPPIN' 'cause your rhymes have got HOLES
      Got no control, I'm steady CRACKIN' your SKULL,
      "See to live is to suffer but to SURVIVE,"
      See to battle me is to suffer the pain of TEN KNIVES
      You say you're cool but it's useless to DEFEND LIES
      I smoke 5 blunts and END up with TEN HIGHS
      Quiet Storm, for sure, we got clear *SKIES*
      A *storm* that's *quiet*? What's wrong, *SHY*?
      Pull out my out brain and still I don't DIE
      Just found out I'm a demon sent to make you CRY!
      I just smashed some in your face--a lyrical PIE
      You suck more than your mama, and still you ask WHY?
      The *cost* of this *exspense* can't be DENIED
      You stuck under a lyrical BRIDGE, drinking some BOOZE,
      Face startin' to CRINGE, nothing to LOSE
      You attracted KIDS, Attracted to FOOD
      You fuckin' rapin' lil' Phil, While I'm makin' the MOVES
      You fuckin' some RIBS, While I'm fuckin' the BOOBS
      I've put up with SHIT, got something to PROVE
      Hate is in me, I must ATTEST,
      I bust the *NETS*, *76* years, don't DETEST,
      I'm a baller, player, I REDIRECT,
      But I'm like the AIDS virus, dawg, I REINFECT.
      Your mom is like a polygraph, SHE DETECTS,
      When I'm lying, and I can't BEAT that TEST,
      I'm backwards, for instance, I FEED her BREAST,
      Make her scream, having HEATED BREATHES.
      The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

      Peace,
      e

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      • #4
        uppin............where ure verse??.............
        The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

        Peace,
        e

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        • #5
          Aight I'ma be away for 11 dayz from Friday morning at 4:30 AM. If you haven't dropped by then, I assume you quit.
          The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

          Peace,
          e

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          • #6
            fuck u

            u take to fuckin long pussy ass
            The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

            Peace,
            e

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            • #7
              You say you expencisve but thats in a dollar store//
              That be no more, cuz you a whore//
              wit oily pores, and taste worse than overburnt smores//
              Battlin you is like an exhibition//
              Of submission, wit a sin commision//
              Dat be puttin you out of position//
              I practice drills, wit kills, and spills//
              guts and ya gills//
              Open like a window, smokin endo//
              givin an innuendo, to you, the bent ho//

              You say i'm shyt, compared to the next guy//
              that'll die, witout a cry, and livin a lie//
              I'm cold blooded with a heart that does no bleeding//
              Cuz my lyrics be intervening, and and interceding//
              and you supposedly hooked on phonics, but you stuck on phonics and still ain't reading//
              Wit a dick(Andy Dick) for a brain//
              My rain, above like a crane//
              like Major Payne, so don't complain//
              Broke finger, can't answer the ringer//
              sound like a broke singer on a record winger//
              I'm breaking you down worse than Mariah//
              Got Smokey the Bear a pyro cuz my words b on fire//
              Blwoin you out faster than a set of firestone tires//
              but i'm more dangerous like water wit a live wire//
              So after you been deceased, my record increased//
              And the crowd is pleased, i'll bring the lyrical onslaught to a cease!
              “See to live is to suffer but to survive
              well that's to find meaning in the suffering.” ~ D.M.X.

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              • #8
                umm.... well i'll say this.... you battled ok? you both need some high improvement in areas if you ever wanna make it on this board. rhyme structure and punchlines are the main things. also use metaphors and shit. you can be dope if you put ur mind to it. battle was tight, i like how you both stayed on topic somewhat but i feel quiet storm rambled on about nothing. plus it took you forever and a damn day to respond, that's not good homey, peeps think u pre write.

                vote = exspense
                ------------------------------------
                "He Who Makes a Beast Out of Himself, Gets Rid of the Pain of Being a Man."
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                • #9
                  i'ma be away for 11 dayz... uppin...

                  1-0

                  peace see yall when i get back
                  The next person I see with a dictionary definition of there name in there signature is gonna get kicked in the balls.

                  Peace,
                  e

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