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  • goodson
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    DAMN, i thought i had this shit, then AK gotta do something big and outshine me...FUCK U......j/k. good job AK, i respect yo ass a hella of a lot for beatin me. good job to u too peel, u gots some good skills. anyways, u better watch out next time AK, i'm comin back with a vengence.


    goodjob to all the participants in this tourney....much respect.

    and to the finalist.....i guess we ain't newbies anymore huh?

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  • Peel Junkee
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    ya good job AK47. thanks to the judges and all the other peeps involved that made this happen.

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  • Four Sev
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    OK so I guess that's it. As the winner of the Newbie Tournament, I am now taking a break from battling. I don't know for how long though. But to Goodson and Peel Junkee, you both had hot verses, I got respect for both of ya. Thanx to YEROC, Eyerone and Prominant for judging this. That's about it for now, Peace.

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  • YEROC
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    WOW AS NEWBIES YOU REALLY DISPLAYED A LOT OF SHIT HERE THAT NEWBIES DON'T USUALLY HAVE. EACH ONE OF YOU THREE I HAVE SEEN IMPROVE GREATLY THRU THE TOURNI, I'M PROUD OF ALL THE ACCOMPLISHMENTS.
    STRAIT UP I WILL TELL YOU NOW, I NARROWED THE VOTING DOWN TO GOODSON AND AK47. JUNKIE'S VERSE WAS TIGHT BUT HOMEY, IT DIDN'T HAVE THINGS I WAS LOOKING FOR. IT DRAGGED ON AND DIDN'T HIT STRAIT UP.
    OUT OF THE 2.. I FELT AK47 WENT FOR THE THROAT AND ROBBED THESE GUYS OF THE TOURNI. HE HIT HARD WIT METAPHORS, PUNCHLINES, AND CLEVER SHIT. HE ALWAYS HAS SOMETHING NEW. I LIKED IT A LOT.

    VOTE = AK47

    BTW...
    I'm dirty like YEROC was when he first started/
    LOL NICE TOUCH

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  • Eyerone
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    uppin for other judges.

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  • Eyerone
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    Ok....straight to the point. Lets take a look at Peel junkies lines that need attention:

    "Shit kid you and goodson are spittin' wack subjects and predicates//
    Sets of shit fucked bars that could never be ill needin' med-kits//
    Never forget it bitches you both lost on the 23rd of August//
    I'm gonna be crowned as the victa cuz when I flow I'm the rawest//
    I'm flowin' much sicka like likka it's quicker to smack ya than diss ya//
    I'll miss ya when I leave your newbie ranks and I'm on all of the
    hotlists//
    You can't stop this Peel Junkee the illest emcee always droppin' hotshit//
    "

    Good....very good. Good rhymes there. I thought most of that verse wuz Sorta weak. But those particular rhymes caught my attention. Here are some good lines by Ak 47:

    "See I'll flatten your verses like *pancakes* when *IHOP* em/
    You could have the entire *NYPD* on your album and still no one'd *cop* em/
    See I'm a true emcee with lyrical mastery/
    You're on my dick like a *shadow* yet you're still not *castin* me/
    The odds of you winning this battle is like the Powerball probability/
    You'll have better luck gettin attacked by a shark or lightnin killin me/
    I'm dirty like YEROC was when he first started/
    Your rhymes are like my *trash* cuz every Thursday they get *discarded*/ "

    "Peel Junkee has been wanting me since last month/
    This bitch has no *Street Smarts* cuz all day he rocks the hat *Dunce*/
    I'ma expose you like that kid bmk did with the pics of the video for "Fight Music"/
    It's either a lyrical defeat or forfeit, I'll even give you the right to choose it/
    I'ma fuck you up cuz I'm a straight genius/
    I could give your ass a *mop and bucket* and you still couldn't *clean sweep* this/
    "

    VERY GOOD Ak 47. I think thats the best that i've seen from u. U brought up a current event or 2........thats good....using reality in rhyme.....always good. Heres some some good lines from Goodson:

    "/i'm your *dentist* right now that don't give a fuck about your *feelins*/i'm dropin PJ's and AK's rhymes though cracks, then they'll think i'm some form of medication cause i'm go get some nails and pin-a-sealin (penicillin)/opponents think i'm *epileptec* cause i'm always causin they're raps to have *siezures*/AK couldn't *cut my words* if he was a *lumberjack with twessers*/"

    "now i'm almost done, and i gotta say, beatin y'all 2 was a whole lotta fun/but i got one more diss that is gonna leave u guys stuned/i'm go turn peel junkie clean and AK47 into a bb-gun/
    "

    Excellent closer. I noticed u used a lot of wordplay. Some of it wuz good.....but i think most of it wuz useless.....clever...but useless. This battle wuz more of AK 47 vs Goodson in my opinion( no offense to Peel Junkie). Fact is, i loved both verses....but there can only be one vote on one person...and i believe AK 47 grabs my vote. I enjoyed reading his verse, with its good amount of reference to reality. Goodson, i thought ur verse wuz good, but, after reading thru (what i thought) wuz unecessary usage of wordplay, i thought ur rhyme wuz great, but lacked substance. Good verse indeed, but i think u should spend more time on hard hitting rhymes and metaphors, than wordplay.

    VOTE=AK 47

    Good match all.....and good luck.

    Exit, the Prophet

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  • Peel Junkee
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    uppin' for judges votes. thx.

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  • Eyerone
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    Goodson's verse
    ------------------------------------------
    I advanced to the finals quicker then my opponents intentionally drop the soap/they're rhymes are like a guy who's gettin married to a slut--they're parternering a ho/this battle must be *monopoly* cause these bitches are tryin to *pass go*/after they read this, it's go be like they're runnin away from this batlle magically while gettin opinions about they're rhymes--they must be takin a poor-toll (portal)/i'm go make AK and peel a cross between the *news* and a *30-second segment*, a fuckin
    *info-mercial*/they go be singin pop, goin bop bop bop, like a damn pepsi commercial/and in reality and virtual, y'all asses words are more *clouded* then *fog*/if peel and AK were the opposits of my *cats* they still wouldn't be my *dawgs*/i'm on y'all *balls* like *crabs*, now u havin a fit/i'm go make u sit on the toilet to piss and pull out yo dick to shit/the stuff peel and AK spit stinks like diarrhea, u should ask some tight rappers who carry breath fresheners to give u some good supply-mints (supplyments)/ i think y'all a *old TV show* cause now u know *who's the boss*/i thought peel and AK were clones of bill gates cause they're rhymes are little a squashy, in other words, they are micro-soft/now AK and peel are scared, runnin a election for the best protection/if they were 5 year old angels who did nothin but take pictures, they still wouldn't be the poster-children for perfection/i'm your *dentist* right now that don't give a fuck about your *feelins*/i'm dropin PJ's and AK's rhymes though cracks, then they'll think i'm some form of medication cause i'm go get some nails and pin-a-sealin (penicillin)/opponents think i'm *epileptec* cause i'm always causin they're raps to have *siezures*/AK couldn't *cut my words* if he was a *lumberjack with twessers*/peel junkie's a flunkie who's rhymes are full of boredom and leisure/people wouldn't see him as miraculous if he was in church givin Christ thanks and changin his name to Jesus/oops, look, i just *picked* y'all apart like my name was *the media*/i'm go disect and inject my opponents with poison like a untreatable and unbeatable anemia/i'm makin u two feel like i'm a blanket who lost his cotton but found it, i'm re-lent-less (relentless)/forever puttin PJ and AK to *rest*, damn, i feel like *dr.korvorchian's assistant*/i'm still not done throwin out diss-after-diss/peel and AK tounges are like constipated asses, they can't flow good shit/now i'm almost done, and i gotta say, beatin y'all 2 was a whole lotta fun/but i got one more diss that is gonna leave u guys stuned/i'm go turn peel junkie clean and AK47 into a bb-gun/
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  • Eyerone
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    AK's Verse
    --------------------------------------------------------
    See now it's the fourth and final round with our new judge Eyerone/
    I'll take this battle, you're wallet and then have your girl ask, "What you buyin me?"/
    See but I don't deal with sluts that only ride dick/
    So fuck your girl cuz I'm makin both y'all my bitch/
    You faggots can't rhyme, you both got an annoying stutter/
    I'll kick your ass so hard I'll make your disc slip like butter/
    See I'll flatten your verses like *pancakes* when *IHOP* em/
    You could have the entire *NYPD* on your album and still no one'd *cop* em/
    See I'm a true emcee with lyrical mastery/
    You're on my dick like a *shadow* yet you're still not *castin* me/
    The odds of you winning this battle is like the Powerball probability/
    You'll have better luck gettin attacked by a shark or lightnin killin me/
    I'm dirty like YEROC was when he first started/
    Your rhymes are like my *trash* cuz every Thursday they get *discarded*/
    I'll knock you out like roofies mixed with OJ and vodka/
    I could roll through your hood at noon with a four sev and still no one would know who shot ya/
    Goodson is just a name for a mama's boy times four/
    I've seen your verses, and shit, my neice rhymes more/
    Peel Junkee has been wanting me since last month/
    This bitch has no *Street Smarts* cuz all day he rocks the hat *Dunce*/
    I'ma expose you like that kid bmk did with the pics of the video for "Fight Music"/
    It's either a lyrical defeat or forfeit, I'll even give you the right to choose it/
    I'ma fuck you up cuz I'm a straight genius/
    I could give your ass a *mop and bucket* and you still couldn't *clean sweep* this/

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  • Eyerone
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    The verses are in.....heres Peel junkie's...
    --------------------------------------------------------------
    Its all totally fucked the whole world is a wackjob//
    I'll sock jaws with clenched fists and smack fat broads//
    Who talk shit and fuck wit the one mother fucker not to mess wit//
    Except when I've popped more X than goodson and A-K-4-7//
    My neck twists when I spit shit that attracts bitches like magnets//
    The entrapment of my punches bustin' up ya stomach leavin' rib fragments//
    You both are just some faggots this ain't a fuckin' salad toss//
    You'll need more than your Holy Cross to protect you from my Holocoust//
    Your verse will be lost in the concentration camp that my words have
    brought//
    Just like I thought your losing ya touch you about to get dealt so hang up
    ya belt//
    It's like im Holyfield and your Tyson but your bites ain't gettin felt//
    My words pelt and sting you as they bring you pain that enters//
    Your brain and splinters and hits like the worst blizzards from past
    winters//
    Mentors can help ya get better so you need to pay attention//
    I'm spittin' this lesson your my pupil's you need my direction//
    Detection of my metaphors requires a trained eye eagerly expectin'//
    Closer inspection reveals that the words you bring couldn't win you an
    election//
    Even if you both were Kennedy's runnin' against me you couldn't get a
    vote//
    Your tapped out like some cheap beer to bad the keg had to float//
    This ain't a joke you are both on trial as defendants and I'm the sole
    jury//
    I'll bury you wit my fierce verdict hittin' quick in a hurry like a
    flurry//
    Surely AK you know everyone see's you bit Prominant's Shout Outs sig//
    You think cuz you've won some battles your hard and can start to talk big//

    Shit kid you and goodson are spittin' wack subjects and predicates//
    Sets of shit fucked bars that could never be ill needin' med-kits//
    Never forget it bitches you both lost on the 23rd of August//
    I'm gonna be crowned as the victa cuz when I flow I'm the rawest//
    I'm flowin' much sicka like likka it's quicker to smack ya than diss ya//
    I'll miss ya when I leave your newbie ranks and I'm on all of the
    hotlists//
    You can't stop this Peel Junkee the illest emcee always droppin' hotshit//
    Last edited by Eyerone; 08-23-2001, 11:25 PM.

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  • Peel Junkee
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    ya man good luck to you both too

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  • Four Sev
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    Remember, verses are due by Midnite tonite. Mine's not in yet, it'll be in soon though. This should be a good battle. Good luck guys.

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  • Eyerone
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    i got u....im gonna post both verses soon. Gimme a min.

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  • Peel Junkee
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    yo Eyerone I emailed you my verse last night. Did you ever get it? hit me back and let me know, imma try your email again too.

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  • Four Sev
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    Yes the 3 jusges are Eyerone, Prominant and YEROC.

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