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    X-TACY no-showed,
    I wasted a verse on him,
    dont want it to go waste,

    so rate this out of ten,

    here it is:

    Im Dishing this with Viscioness, your biggest hits are Frivolous
    My 'hot' lyrics over 'wax' got you falling off like 'Icarus' (greek mythology)
    Your ONLY wack and phony. But Ima go and snatch your goatee
    dissing you worse than your bride's dad did at holy matrimony
    ------------------------------
    This is the 'Final Front Here'(Frontier); Last Laugh; Your spit such Comical Concepts
    even 'Spock' thinks your full of 'Illogocal' Nonsense
    Fuck a Psychological Conscience, This is an Astronomical Bombthreat
    to stick my dick in the BigBang and fuck up the Cosmological Constant
    Im Snatching both your eyes out of your optical sockets,
    Your 'Tripping on Sight', cause I just had them dropped in your sox quick
    Meet the League's Judge 'Dread', like the cops caught you in a tropical pot-den (Jamaica, get it?)
    Like a fraud running an auction, loss is your only possible option
    --------------------------------
    Im a cold slob, with the power to devour a whole god
    got this battle 'covered', like when I nutted on your girl during a blow job
    Im the opposite of gravity, all your wack raps get flung back
    Your conversations with 'yourself' are only the time youve had 'comebacks'
    this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

  • #2
    i'll give it 7
    to get 8 u have to b like Em or sumthin
    to get 9 u have to b like Xzibit iz wit wurd play
    no1 has a perfect rhyme

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    • #3
      i give it a 8. i thought it was real good. yo, dude, go fuckin' vote on mah battle i had with 12HAZYD! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! we need mad motha fuckin' votes, dawg!!
      Lyrikally Lost aka Fidel Kastrator


      http://invince.8m.net/dei2.gif

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      • #4
        9

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        • #5
          wtf that was da shit 10, mc dont listen to em peeps they just jealous, fuck i got mad respect for u dawg
          wins: mccoulbomb, freestyla122 TWICE, the invincible, Sweet H

          losses: too many lol

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          • #6
            8.......


            but i dont really agree wit skitzo about EM & XZIBIT, they prolly couldnt do as good as dat....

            pz
            playformore.org , One Year Millionaire Blog

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            • #7
              man if i knw you were this good i woudlnt of faced yu lol

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              • #8
                your wordplay was dope/could have a little better scheme/had a few good punches not too strong tho...
                i give it a 7 the flow was dope/but you had the potential to make it better.

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                • #9
                  skitzo... eminem & xzibit r TIGHT ASS lyricists and emcees but i really dont think they could have done this good... mc maximus prime has potential on da real

                  mc mp: u eva thought of gettin a record deal?!
                  Peep out my new track - "Whaleface (Reintroduction)"

                  L O S T

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                  • #10
                    Ima sorta agree with GRAVITY,

                    looking back, I used wordplay that was just filler cause it rhymed,
                    such as the 'Icarus' line, the 'sox' line, and the 'comebacks' line. It wasnt that deep or special.

                    But I like my judge dread line, jus thought it was clever----
                    plus I kept vocab fluent, and making that middle part is always fun for me.
                    this joke : how many hiphoppers does it take to screw in a lightbulb? .................. three, one to screw in the new lightbulb, and two to argue over how much better the old one was.

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                    • #11
                      no disrespect dog,your flow was more dope than most of these cats but we all gotta evolve.....just concentrate on seeing your rhymescheme more clearly,and put thought into your punches
                      phat rhyme keep it up.... everyone rate my newest flow...open battle,post a style if you get the chance...much respect.

                      EMCEE GRAVITY AVIDLY ADDIN TRAGEDY AND BLASPHEMY.

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                      • #12
                        hahah first of all he is one of the badest mc's on here but your out of your fucken tree if u think he's better then em thats just fucken retarded listen to yourselfs stupid fucks and to put exzibit ahead of em your just stupid so whatever come back when u know what the fuck your talkin about
                        click here to make money doing nuthin

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                        • #13
                          , id give it a 6/7

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                          • #14
                            word.,

                            I dug the Icarus line. I've been playing around with the whole Icarus concept lately in my personal writing. Good stuff.

                            ...don't fly too close to the sun. your ass will fall and drown, and no one will even notice.

                            ...it's pretty darn metaphorical for a lot of today's rappers...



                            I'm a stuck, starving artist.
                            Vincent Van Going nowhere.
                            Sold my silver souls to the devil.
                            Hoping he'll throw up a gold pair.
                            Mostly concerned... with my own interests... as per usual.
                            Foolishly pursuing the fruit of what's removable.
                            Into the full view.
                            Do you see me as suitable...
                            to prove to the world that my beautiful dream is simply doable?



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