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    hey sween, I don't know who wo last battle, I hope I've done well in my that battle, I'd like 2 battle u 'gain, but this one is 2 long so jus see this one as a freestyle, I'm still a newb so I like 2 get sum comments,
    here it goes:

    yo yo,
    u think u're great u're callin urselve "tha master"/ur shit u spit is what I call "a lyrical disaster"//
    u're scared of seein my shit cuz its blowin ya motherfuckin "mind"/i've only put 3 lines 'n u're already startin 2 see "blind"//
    ur fucked up shit is goin bout lame things like gettin the "hugz"/let me tell u this *****, I love to beat sween "dogz"//
    u jus a shy boy, u don't know anybody, so u'll never be "dominant"/u probably sittin all day behind the pc, it isn't makin u "prominent"//
    I really had 'nough of u, I'll lock u up in my rhymin "zone"/I don't think u still got a big mouth when u're standin "alone"//
    u start whinin cuz u can't find ur wack rhymes in the grim "darkness"/the situation has made u speechless, hopeless 'n "barkless"//
    don't talk shit like I'm the one who's "cryin"/u jus a fag, weak, and u can't stop "lyin"//
    at the moment I'm full of anger, can u "feel it"?/next time don't come with low level rhymes, do u "hear it"?/"as dope as weed" jus spare me that "shit"/I don't care bout those weak lines one damn "bit"//I'm gettin sick of it yeah I really want 2 "trash it"/seein ur face I'll get mad, I'll "smash it"//
    and it's not me but u who's tryin, u always battlin at ur "hardest"/but if u keep on with this shit u'll never gonna be a true lyrical "artist"/and ur rhymes r never gonna be as tough as Chuck “Norris”/so here's ur solution: go take sum dolls 'n play with them in the “forest”//
    the only thing u do is using tricks fo winnin, I "admit"/this will be the last time i'm talkin 2 a lil "kid"//
    probably u're so weak u can't find ur own size only sumone "new"/after u win such a battle u ain't even worth the price:"mountain dew"/and then thinkin u're the winner, while u used ur "dickridin crew"/don't think u can trick me, I don't like such things that r done by a "fool"//
    the only thing u want is insulting newcomers, new "people"/that's cuz u're so weak, you can't even find ur own "equel"/don't act so gay and prick, cuz u're bout 2 meet the true "sequel"/I'll hit u so hard that battlin for u will be "illegal"//
    callin urself the winner while it was draw, I'm "frenzied"/tell u this prick; bitchtalk is the opposite of what i "need"//
    u're gettin crazy, u're the one who's bout 2 "choke"/and now u want 2 commit suicide, u've had an overdosis of "coke"//
    what's wrong with u? did u run into a "curse"?/I don't want 2 take sum time fo waitin fo ur wack "verse"/it isn't worth of readin it cuz it will be weaker then shit from fred "durst"/after u have met me u can betta stay "alert"/u betta know I don't like 2 be dissed by a "pcnerd"/2 be buggered off by a newb, I think that really "hurts"//
    lookin on the board, seein a new thread, thinkin what a "surprise"/u're dazed cuz this rhyme is what u're seein through your "eyes"/this is the consequent of bein busy makin up many "lies"/I ain't a sweettalker so don't think I'm gonna do "nice"/jus wait for the many rhymes which are bout 2 "slice"/u're thinkin the whole time bout my rhymes cuz they "remise"/don't think bout gettin me back cuz that won't make u "rise"//
    \all those battles u've done and still u're "uneducated"/and what would u wright down if your inspiration has "faded"?//
    the next time u're goin 2 do this wack I'm gonna use my real "artillery"/don't forget I'm Nameless, the only one who's your true "mystery"//
    Last edited by nameless; 08-28-2001, 12:23 AM.

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  • #2
    man that's to fucken long plus sween hasnt been around for a minute
    click here to make money doing nuthin


    • #3

      that was a whole lot of text...and you didn't really say shit. he could drop 6 bars and beat that.

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