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sween let's rematch, if he isn't i'd like sum comment on my verse

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  • sween let's rematch, if he isn't i'd like sum comment on my verse

    that verse was 2 long I have made it shorter, sween, I'd like 2 rematch you, so if you got some time you can battle me, if you don't wanna then I want some comments from the peeps around here (like what can I do better or sometin)
    peace
    (rulez:
    -15-20bars
    -no dickridin votes, no crew votes, no votes for people who have posted under the ten times, etc.
    -first to 5 votes)

    when I see your name i'm in a blaze/I had 'nough of your shit spitted by your tongue//
    got you slammed in the mud you start 2 daze/I've looked in my mess jus for a gun//
    my lyrical bullet will hit you jus like an ace/and still I can't get along//
    you'll never be as good as mace/while I don't like mace, not 1 song//
    after this battle I want 2 see your face/it'd be pale and even uglier then king kong//
    you think you're great you're callin urselve tha master/your shit you spit is what I call "a lyrical disaster"//
    you're scared of seein my shit cuz its blowin ya motherfuckin mind/i've only put 6 lines 'n you're already startin 2 see blind//
    you start whinin now cuz you can't see anything n the darkness/the situation has made you speechless, hopeless 'n barkless"//
    you are fucked up cuz now you know what's the sequel/the last battle is the last time you have insulted newcomers, new people/now you know you're weak you've only fought with a lower equel/from now on you may not battle newcomers, cuz with this rhyme i have made it illegal//
    probably u're so weak u can't find ur own size only sumone "new"/after you win such a battle u ain't even worth the price:mountain dew/and then thinkin you're the winner, while u used ur dickridin crew//
    I don't want 2 take sum time fo waitin fo your wack verse/ don't make one cuz you're thinkin bout my rhymes which remise//
    so don't make one it ill be wacker then shit from fred durst/don't think that your shit is makin you rise//
    this time the newb has overloaded you with lyrical artillery/compared 2 you my rhymes hit the hardest//
    don't forget I'm Nameless, the only one who's your true mystery/after this rhyme you're only a bust-up//
    no beef
    **StIlLmAtIc**
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    ħħ18-12-2001ħħ

    "Put it together, I rock hoes, y'all rock fellas." NaS

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    peace

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    Hi

    Hi Nameless,

    good verse but I can't vote cause Sween hasn't dropped his verse yes and the rulez say that people with less than 10 posts r not allowed to vote. I think you have a good voc and the mets are better than your first verse


    cya
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    • #3
      thnx fo givin comment blouis, but still I can't believe there is only 1 reply, there r 32 people who have read this , wh'ever

      peace
      **StIlLmAtIc**
      http://www.stillmatic.com/images/image1.jpg
      ħħ18-12-2001ħħ

      "Put it together, I rock hoes, y'all rock fellas." NaS

      http://members.home.nl/bartrikers/chrisje.jpg

      CrAzY pRoBz 2 Bullet 4 my avatar and banner...

      peace

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