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  • My Choice (Last Spit For A While Can Yall Please Give Feed On Last? Feed=Rep)

    yo time to spit words that just bounce off the wall and hit em where it counts/
    just use an ounce of my skill to pounce on them so my name they cant pronounce/
    my love for this game has taken over my brain and has gotten me strangely insane/
    no point to complain as long as my name ends up like stars in hall of fames/
    so im writen my last spit for awhile to show you fuckers that alex is through/
    i dont mean to do this just think its right that i kome bak like mase wit a hot debut/
    i dont mean to spoil yalls fun but i think its time to kick up my feet and run/
    ive been hot before i begun to write spits off the top and shine like the sun/
    ive been straight with all the feed i get from great spitters who have high rates/
    but as i cross through the country state by state ill put up "numbers" like a "license plate"/
    so just to let yall hear this im not leaven cause of beef theres just no service/
    im an immortal yall could never hurt this but im leaven cause im gettin extra nervous/
    ive been spitten rhymes for a long time and on the way i was watchin how my skills climbed/
    and noticed that wen the my mind unwinds lines of criticism people love em cause they mine/
    it dont matter what i do because people always think what i say that im always playing/
    bloobalasoubacommmasoe just like how people dont give a fuck bout what im saying/
    im alerting peoples minds wen im converting rhymes and my mind neva stops hurting/
    i cant help it that my brains always working always diverting no fuck it im still learning/
    so its time to put this freestylin to the test and put it to rest or at least thats wut i suggest/
    hope there aint no protest as i impress words off my chest with one of the freestyles of my best......




    just to tell yall im gonna try and stop freestylin for awhile so this is gonna be a last spit for awhile.............and i liked to say thnx 2 urban aka given me explanations on how to make my stuff better......so props to him.....but ya im gonna take a break IM NOT leaven the board im just taken a break from freestylin............anyways can i get feedback on my last spit?
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

  • #2
    nice flow, great multis and word placement and usage, id say bout 9 outta 10 man, and fuck a rep vote in my tourney
    The Underground

    SpRaYeD sO mAnY sHeLlS aT yO cLiCk LaSt NiGhT, yOuD tHiNk It WaS "AlL hOlLoWs EvE"-- AKtiviTy

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    • #3
      ight thnx 4 feed and ill go vote.......uppin this....
      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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      • #4
        pretty good alex id say 9.5/10 go give me feed in my freestyle in the freestyle board plz

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        • #5
          thnx 4 feed....uppin this....
          ~Lyrical Bloodz~





          when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
          the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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