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    aye yo im back bitch
    to attack that wack shit that yall hoes be spittin
    who u kiddin, u aint winnin, that shit u bringin just dont deserve to be record spinnin, u need to go back to the beginin, and put in work
    im tha king of this rap shit,
    its an art that ive masterd,
    a disfunctional bastard,
    who just sits and gets plasterd,
    a walkin disaster,
    tried stoppin my heart but the beat only gets faster,
    i tried suicied but i just couldnt die
    so i sued the word,
    lost the case and got sentenced to 25
    they say the good die young,
    no wonder im alive.

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    not bad "aidy" just put your lines in measured sizes dont do one line short and anutha one long, your shit was tight you might as well elevate and write more lyrical and complex but not bad

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