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    my intuition to rhyme definition has gotten me into position to start an expedition
    but my ammunition is runnin on empty like a tank of gas without haven an ignition
    yall want me to give ya word~plays well all i do is play with words anytime of the day
    so dont try and tell me how to do my way because this shit will outline ya like an essay
    im gettin unstable my rhymes are losing power like a poor person not afforden for cable
    wanna start my own lable but to busy "rackin up" bitches like the "balls from a pool table"
    so dont play me like no fool as i rule through school growin up shining like un found ***els
    all im doin is"lyin people 6 feet" underground have them feelin like they in a "swimming pool"
    im sick of this non~sense if i had sum sense i would predict that my shit would be so intense
    but shits getin to dense in suspense that the feed im gettin is "terrible" like the "dolphins offense"
    ive been dashing any wanna be smashing mc's who think what they write is cashing bills
    well like 9/11 they shit is crashing they rhymes im slashing look at me im the one flashing mills
    but still i steal any rhymes i kan reveal off my mind that are so unreal hopen they will be ideal
    but as people seal my deals to try and appeal my work i got em sayin im "electrifying" like "eels"
    well as you kan "see" fuck it you kant see cause you keep "blinking" with lines im thinking of
    im shrinking up this place now because i "affect more teens" than the "average of drinking does"
    so heres a little part of my lecture its gettin more confusen than "kobe bryants" case of "conjecture"
    no ones elevaten better than me and will never forever cause "no letters" can step up to my kind of "TEXTure"
    so through all this sorrow my brain is gettin hollow of writen so many spits hopen people will follow
    so sit back swallow rhymes ya borrowed and remember that i "give more storms" than "the day after tomorrow"
    ~Lyrical Bloodz~





    when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
    the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

  • #2
    damn foo you killed it with them multis nice shit homeboy

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    • #3
      thnx 4 feed homie.............uppin
      ~Lyrical Bloodz~





      when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
      the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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      • #4
        nice drop, loved the multis
        www.facebook.com/rekne6
        www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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        • #5
          thnx 4 feed homie.....uppin this....
          ~Lyrical Bloodz~





          when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
          the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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          • #6
            yooo that shit was tight....you killed dawg...

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            • #7
              yoo...i jus started rappin and i need people to let me know if i spit good...can some go check out the lines i posted...they in the rookie battles forum

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              • #8
                yo alex tight shit... but your shits always tight so nothin new...keep it up
                NOVICANENOVICANENOVICANE

                RECORD:
                WINS:1
                LOSSES:1

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                • #9
                  thnx 4 feed yall and ya jay ill check ur shit wen i have time im bout 2 go 2 bed....uppin this...
                  ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                  when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                  the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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                  • #10
                    fuckin awesome man nice work

                    only thing I have to say is the flows a little down to me, but who the fuck am i? lol keep it up!

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                    • #11
                      i lik this shit again as i usually do
                      but do u ever do any audio cos you write so much shit but i never hear your stuff.
                      but i dont go on the audio forum so u might be on dere
                      just wonderin

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                      • #12
                        nice drop man
                        Fo` REAL

                        LIL .M. DJMC

                        22 5


                        touneyz won: 2

                        Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                        • #13
                          like the opener
                          Fo` REAL

                          LIL .M. DJMC

                          22 5


                          touneyz won: 2

                          Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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                          • #14
                            nah djmc i aint got audio dawg 1o1 i want it sooooo bad though but dont worry one day ill get it then ill show yall wussup!!!......thnx 4 feed yall...uppin
                            ~Lyrical Bloodz~





                            when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
                            the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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