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  • Need someone to tell me if i spit good

    Hey, I wanna noe if i can spit good... ppl told me that i can spit good...but i neva really got a reaction.
    Aiight these are some line that i jus came up wit:

    I ain't even trying this shit is to easy//
    I always got a bitch on ha knees trying to please me//
    please believe me//
    they dont understand how I'm flowin'//
    I got girls confused they don't know if they coming or going//
    better get to knowing//
    cause rite after I'm cumming I'm going//
    showing my skill to kill//
    still stompin these nigas out like this shit is gettin Jurassic//
    the only cars these nigas collect, is the ones that come in plastic//
    break their necks//ya noe my flow is mad sick//
    who is next?//the 1st one to step forward is the one thats gonna have it//
    I leave nigas with bad memories of me//
    honestly ya begining with me is ya end//
    I lyrically kill nigas//
    leave ya smoke//
    and if you do live you'll be to afraid to tell it like a Biggie or Pac joke//
    awoke with a vengence//
    me and my boyz is all I have//
    ho's and cash is how I choose to spend it//
    leave ya'll bitches in suspension//
    ya'll motherfuckers don't give me a dime//
    so I'll have ya'll pay me in attention//
    I'm hard headed, never learn my lesson//
    Shit I ain't even focused yet, this shit is just a warm-up session//



    Yo get at me and let me know how that is
    Last edited by Jay0120; 10-23-2004, 06:53 PM.

  • #2
    dawg, u can spit alright man, make ur rhymez more complex, get better flow, n u should be fine, ull have no problem being succesful here aslong as u keep on elevating
    I got the DVD of your wife gettin killed and raped,
    and everybody peeped it like the Sharon Hilton tape.



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    • #3
      thanx 4 da feed

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      • #4
        yoo come on i STILL need more feed

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        • #5
          u can rapp all right dowg ... i didnt like the flow that much but it worked... juss keep writting and get in some battles and u'll be hott
          NOVICANENOVICANENOVICANE

          RECORD:
          WINS:1
          LOSSES:1

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          • #6
            nice spit, keep evaluateing, extend ya lines out abit more
            www.facebook.com/rekne6
            www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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            • #7
              hi

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              • #8
                stop saying get better flow'..you cant judge flow by text.
                if u did that to talib kweli, you'd say his flow was wack, his lines are long..

                fuckin idiots.
                C.E.O

                .Antics.

                That Average Shit, Wont Cut it...

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                • #9
                  u noe thats wat i was thinkib..but i was like wadeva mayb they noe sumthin i dont

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                  • #10
                    eventually youll see wat they mean by flow
                    The Underground

                    SpRaYeD sO mAnY sHeLlS aT yO cLiCk LaSt NiGhT, yOuD tHiNk It WaS "AlL hOlLoWs EvE"-- AKtiviTy

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                    • #11
                      oo aiight...YO me and unorthodox battled (it was my first battle but wadeva) we need votes

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                      • #12
                        Yo check that out...say ya thoughts

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by ShAdY_vIlLaIn
                          eventually youll see wat they mean by flow
                          U dont know what your saying, shut up rookie
                          C.E.O

                          .Antics.

                          That Average Shit, Wont Cut it...

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                          • #14
                            ...yea can sum one go check out the battle....its under "open rookie challenge"

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                            • #15
                              ya man ur spit was pretty tight u just gotta keep elevating and having battles

                              Peace
                              NormanBates

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