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    i wrote this and i want some feedbakk

    ive been in so much struggle and im only 15,
    its more worst than a tragedy on tha movie screen,
    bashings, getting stuck up and parents getting divorce,
    and more blood spilt than heinz been making tomato sauce,
    and someone's always got a knife in there hand
    and guns, drinks n drugs are always on high demand,
    so what are we gonna do to get our lives on track
    because everyone u trust will stab u in a back,
    and ya start mess with the wrong homies theyll leave ya in a disfigure,
    well thats if your lucky, they might even pull da trigger,
    cause most of these people aint got a clue in life,
    there main ambition is getting pissed and into straife,
    but just give me moment, mah moment to shine,
    as i wanna make it, spit words and rhyme,

    give me feedback. Thnx Peace!
    RiGhT OuTTa AuStRaLiA!


    Hey yo...i cant sing, yeah i cant even hume a tune,
    but ill make this crowd bounce like bedsprings on a honeymoon,

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    deep man deep, - nice drop, n post this in freestyle forum!
    peace
    Fo` REAL

    LIL .M. DJMC

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