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    Yo here's sumthin I came up wit las nite tell me wat yall think:


    This shit aint nothin//
    Someone call Florida, tell em' hurricane Jay is comin'//
    Yes! I am the best cuz i put the rest to rest//
    take the breath rite out ya chest and ask who's next//
    That's why I aint even gonna stress you or test you//
    rite next to you is where you rest dude, God bless you//
    See I aint even started and I already have half these nigas joinin the dearly departed//
    Understand man you and your crew bout to end up like Diddy's band, dismembered//
    remember who sent ya straight to hell//
    might as well give it up cuz you aint doin nothin wit it//
    aquitted with a couple rhymes//
    and spitted a couple lines of truth to destroy you and wat u use to be//
    came here to break up the manotany of whats gotten to be annoyin to me//
    I gotta be the next best MC//
    cuz i aint no 1 hit wonder//
    make you wonder how I make 1 hit afta anotha//
    Spit like no otha//
    My flow is jus so hot//
    I got the best ho on the whole block//
    She could suck the gum out a blow pop//
    Vengence is in my nature//
    so naturally I got a shit list longer than toilet paper//
    I demand attention everytime I ryhme//
    and my rocks can light up a room so fuck it I dont need sunshine//

    tell me wat yall think of that

  • #2
    yoo people i need sum feed

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    • #3
      aight.

      first you should diversify your rhymes, I can't really tell you how. Except it'll really just come thru more writing, more battles. Pretty much more experience.

      work on your flow, an you'll be good to go.

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      • #4
        thanx for da feed..come on ya'll i need more feed

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        • #5
          come on ya'll i need more feed

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          • #6
            hmm i liked it nice spit

            i like the hurricane line 1o1
            ~Lyrical Bloodz~





            when you hear the bottle top pop off you know im coming
            the sound in the backround aint the beat its the people running

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            • #7
              thanx

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              • #8
                still uppin for feed

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                • #9
                  yo give me sum feed

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