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    Verse1

    wat up gilr oh baby what you doin/
    ill give you tha world if its me you choosin/
    i love you baby a loss of you id be losin/
    my heart an my soul would take an emotional bruisin/
    you see im hard girl how i gotta prove to you/
    you want its hard girl jus tell me wat to do/
    leavin me scared girl its how that you be provin/
    that a due like me is lucky that i be round you cruisin/
    wit my home bois i no you love tha ride/
    as i grab you by your hand an pull you to tha side/

    chorus

    i wanna watch you fuck me/
    i wanna wacth you fuck me/
    baby do you love me/
    becuase i love you/

    verse2

    oh baby girl how you feelin/
    its my heart you be stealin/
    i aint liein but becuase of you ill stop my cheatin/
    you tha 1 i want to be in/
    tha only girl i trust with breathin/
    my breathes be short but as long as you be readin/
    tha wrods that i write an they make you happy/
    it makes it worth for your papi/
    i want you to no tha truth/
    an that is tha i love you/
    and you no i could never hide/
    tha way i feel inside/

    chorus x1

    verse3

    oh baby baby how was i suppose to no that you would be different form them other hos/
    i no that from now on you betta watch out for tha chicks tho/
    cuz if i have to beat a mutherfucker down agin/
    might make this shit right here the end/
    i love but not enuff tosacrifice my life/
    so next time tell me to put down my knife/
    cuz even if no1 wants us together we will continue in strife/
    to live this shit like we bonnie and clyde/

    Chorus x2

    fade out of beat on last chorus



    plz leave feed an a score out of ten
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    I am tha don FullBled

  • #2
    very very weak shit
    4 / 10
    make it longer make it rhyme , spend time workin on it and ask ur buddies to rate it 1st

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    • #3
      ^^^^ I agree with jam. Its pretty weak, it's nothing that hasn't been said a million times before.

      Find your inspiration.

      3/10.... sorry.

      SAHB biatch... we run the ish, yo....
      You look pretty dear..

      So pretty!

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      • #4
        i'm gon give u an advice: dun show this 2 ur girlfriend, she won't appreciate it
        As day comes, and night falls
        For the rest of our lives we miss y'all,
        And even though life must go on
        We still mourn while we should go on...

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        • #5
          lmao x tina hahahhhahahha shit........mace man, well collab on some audio soon, and ill teach you wat ive learned from ppl here, easy shit to
          LastFM

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          • #6
            ^^^wat dey sed ...almost
            sorry dawg but i dont like it....
            i think the corus was the weakest part...i was shockin
            work on it an bring it bak to me!!!!....ILL B WAITIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
            Fo` REAL

            DeCeaST
            DJMC
            lil M




            Realizez- Infinate Soldier


            Originally posted by Pawl Derty
            U got nuts...thats why u gon be great!
            Originally posted by J-Side
            Dcst - Kick ass emcee -- dont fuck wit him

            Originally posted by Dirt Rich
            You definetely got balls

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Derrty X-tina
              i'm gon give u an advice: dun show this 2 ur girlfriend, she won't appreciate it
              LMAO - TRUE.......
              Fo` REAL

              LIL .M. DJMC

              22 5


              touneyz won: 2

              Lil M is the H.N.I.C

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              • #8
                i wont show it to my girl fitz alredy tol me bout it bein pussy hell an thanx fir tha feed yall as soon as i get my comp fixed its gone be villians agin homie
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                • #9
                  do it on audio see if its better

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                  • #10
                    jam dotn diss my skills homie ive koed you like 3 times you dont no tha meaning of punchlines no offense
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                    • #11
                      Wtf
                      Wana Battle
                      ILL BATTLE BUT DEFFINATLEY POST IT TOMOZ

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                      • #12
                        lmao aight homie set it up i hope youve been elevating
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                        • #13
                          Gota agree with tha rest on this... Sounds like you just felt like postin sumthin so you threw some shit together... No beef jus tellin it like it is
                          Runnin Solo

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                          • #14
                            word to what cootiez said

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                            • #15
                              cottiez it was sumthin i jus put together when i got bored
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