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  • *Seriously I Need Everyone To Read This* (Its a Poem I got to turn in for school)

    i need to know if its good enough to turn in....will give reps...

    if i had a dream what would it be how would i handle it
    sitting here meditating, lights off, with the candles lit
    im wondering what my goals are if I'll get any chances
    take any glances away from a victim of circumstances
    deaths approaching me seems the devils coachin' me
    try getting on with life but struggles keep provokin' me
    got to stop it but my heartbeat is the only thing stoppin'
    rain dissappeared it's only the blood and tears droppin'
    growin' up to see the teenagers not making it to college
    its not their knowledge coffins are being acknowledged
    if we could stop the hate we could easily stop the crates
    filled up with innocent people blown up or killed by .38s'
    my vision of being in prison are leaven my dearly wishin'
    that me and drug incisions never have a type of collision
    if i ever pick up that needle i know that my life will crash
    mind will get picked up and moved like a tsunami's blast
    it's hard to ask for what has been asked for days and days
    am i really the only man on my knees who prays and prays
    hoping for the crazed and insane to leave go separate ways
    cause everyone knows god is lookin' for a desparate praise



    edit: my vision of being in prison are leaven my dearly wishin'
    that me and drug incisions never have a type of collision

    that line right there is from my sig KINDA i re worded it...im just tryin to make this sound good so dont think im recycling or nethin yall would call it 1o1

  • #2
    nice man real deep u gonna A's on this shit fo'sho lol


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    • #3
      yo that was great man, if u dont get an A i just might come and whoop ya teachers ass

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      • #4
        thnx yall 1o1

        uppin

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        • #5
          you might wanna get rid of the ' on the ned of words like stoppin' and droppin' and just put a g, unless you did that for some reason, but the poem itself is great.
          Steelers+Penguins+Panthers=Pittsburgh
          HAIL TO PITT

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          • #6
            ya i did that cause i dont like putting G's thats why 1o1 thnx for feed though...uppin

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            • #7
              tht was sick, if u dnt get an A for tht thn ur teacha needs an eye check ( an 2 go 4 anothva uni degree init)
              ... or for anyone who's ever been through shit in their lives, so they sit and they cry at night, wishin they die ...

              NIKKI 4 D**
              EMINEM IZ BUM!!!

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              • #8
                yo real nice n deep.......def hand it in.peace.
                ~AsSaIl~


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                • #9
                  thnx yall i appreciate it....uppin

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