*HAZARD* vs PimpmasterFlex

[*HAZARD*]

aight 3-5 barz
no crew, hate votes, feeding

ill spit first cuz he asked me too,

ill drop soon

[PimpmasterFlex]

5 votes to win
3-0 ~ K.O.

Decided to post this since you forgot.

[*HAZARD*]

yea thats pretty standard,
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the statistics show that my ballistics own your aim./
the logistics of my linguistics puts you to shame./

you know i kill shit when you feel my fist hit your face./
and when the bass hit your face u kno your style shows no grace./

dont you know Hazards are dangerous gaymaster flex./
like when you have buttsex without a rubber wit your boy lex./

you like to rock it tex mex, but shits gay as hell./
you remind me of that dog sayin yo quiero taco bell./

you know what DOG i think your shits aight./
but truthfully i think your barks worse than your bite./

[PimpmasterFlex]

You are just a "hazard" and you're below my plateau~ho //
And it's sad when I could just get a win with a no~show //

You may only be 1-1 but your "skills suck" and that's why you're a free~agent //
You can't write "ill stuff" and people wouldn't buy your shit CD for three~cent //

You're gonna regret asking for a challenge and I'm gonna show~you~why //*
My punches hit so hard the ambulance won't make it to you befo'~you~die //

I'm the rap God comin down to make you a believer //
And your girl catches balls like she a wide receiver //

I know 4 bars should be enough but I guess I'm gonna do~5 //
And leave you with this one last punch and see if you~survive //

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Explanations:
*In his call out thread, he said he wanted a CHALLENGE

[PimpmasterFlex]

Uppin for votes

[*HAZARD*]

man fuck y'all i aint joinin no crew.

[*HAZARD*]

uppin

[Fader]

punches - neither of u punched hard really
disses - pimpmaster flex
multies - pimpmaster flex
flow - pimpmaster flex
wordplay - was none
overall enjoyment - pimpmaster flex

this was a pretty simple battle,neither of u came hard with punches or personals.
but pimpmaster flex won hands down

Vote = PIMPMASTER FLEX

on3

[TupacShakur96]

all cats pimp

[PimpmasterFlex]

I'm up 2-0, uppin for the K.O.

[2_Cold363]

all cats 2 pimp

[PimpmasterFlex]

I win 3-0, nice battle Hazard. Thanks fo the vote 2 Cold.

[Flawless K]

nice win dawg

[Retina]

I dont do text no more but lemme help you out real quick...

You are just a "hazard" and you're below my plateau~ho //
And it's sad when I could just get a win with a no~show //

plateau ho and no show is one of your only 2 real multis... you can't say
your gonna win with a no show when he dropped first*

You may only be 1-1 but your "skills suck" and that's why you're a free~agent //
You can't write "ill stuff" and people wouldn't buy your shit CD for three~cent //

free agent and three cent is NOT a multi...
*you dont have skills so your a free agent*
*open your eyes, your about to see pavement*
thats a multi (nothin good) but a multi.
a multi is when you rhyme each syllable.
[future reference]... also this is a text battle so some-one
buying a 'text' CD is not likely .

You're gonna regret asking for a challenge and I'm gonna show~you~why //*
My punches hit so hard the ambulance won't make it to you befo'~you~die //

the only other multi, nothin nice but its a multi.
not much of a punch... (big cat. to work on!)
that multi only works wit the pronounciation change,
it would be better in audio but i guess it works in text.

I'm the rap God comin down to make you a believer //
And your girl catches balls like she a wide receiver //

nothing nice at all... this bar could be written to anyone,
it is an indirect personal. so it isnt much of a personal at all...
you DEF. need to work on personals... write shit about him,
thats where you base your punches...

I know 4 bars should be enough but I guess I'm gonna do~5 //
And leave you with this one last punch and see if you~survive //

this isnt a multi, isnt a personal, and def. isnt a punch!
1: do 5 and you survive do NOT match in syllables...
*4 bars is enough but i flew for 5*
*ill blue your eyes and see if you survive*(theres a multi, nothin nice but...)
2: Again no personal at all... DIRECT your personals at him, along wit punches... make it about him not about an opponent in general!
3: this is not a punch... I think i used this example before but it works...
*the only time your in a hood is when you put on a sweater*
*watchin BET and ER dont make you urgantly better*
obviously that punch is not directed at anyone. which is wut you should do...
I hope you use this in your next battle... im jus tryin to help you out.
good luck...
REP ME !

[PimpmasterFlex]

Thanks for the tips Retina, it said I had to spread rep around before giving it to you again.