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  • My First Audio.. (FeedBack? And Dont Be Harsh:(..)

    Well This Is My First Audio.. Made It In Like 10 Minutes.. So Umm.. Ya.. FeedBack? Keep In Mind THIS IS MY FIRST... So Dont Go Crazy On Me...

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=392206

    Lyricz:

    I Spit-The-Most-On-The-Trek, Im Sick At Audio But Yo, I Don’t Boast-On-The-Net,
    Put The Toast-To-Your-Head, You Should Be Callin It Baseball The Way I Wack-This-Fool, Dawg Up Your Vokab, Go Back-To-School, The Haterz That Talk Shit, Gotta Relax-They-Mood, Cuz The FoFo Don’t Go-Slow Til I Smack-They-Crew, I Stay Strapped-Like-A-Shoe, I Hunger For More, So Rapz-Like-My-Food, I Have Non-Stop Cravinz, Like Crack-Addictz-In-A-Bad-Mood, I Spit Heat Like The End Of June, Still Standin-Tall, Still Rollin’ Sweet Like A Candy-Ball, Linez Bein’ Played? Still Soundin-Broad, Leave Audiences In Awe, You Last On The Trak Im The First-Team, Kinda Funny How You Ripped By Someone Thirteen,
    Realizin' priorities and droppin dead weight,
    the kings cornered, but it ain't a checkmate.

    -kidNA$TY

  • #2
    ight ight. . .flows a lil off i dunno what was goin on wit the mic u were unclear at times. . .but meh keep at it and ulll get betta. . .
    TakeOver

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    • #3
      ok... dont add those sound effects, it sounds a lot better without...
      SpurattiK

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      • #4
        whoooooa!


        fucks wit tha echo bro lyrics ite i didnt listen to audio was to echoy...but lyrics nice
        www.facebook.com/rekne6
        www.youtube.com/rekhedne6

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        • #5
          man that was hott for lyrics but yah words in the audio were a lil off
          -=|57¤8|=-

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          • #6
            back up off the mic a lil gettin' to loud ha,and dont echoe ur whole shi,just do it on sum words that are the main one like the rhyme words,besides that nice...good luck on elevating
            Outlaw ~C~

            ~Wins-3~KO-3~Losses-1~

            Take Over!!!

            Outlaw ~C~ Realize EvilSpecialist Grass Nasty
            We Just Own People

            http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=366475

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            • #7
              too many effects.. lyrics were decent. flow fell off, its real short so the feed sounds bad but, u dont give much to leave feed on.. lyrics: decent.. flow: off.. effects were over the top.. keep comin.
              Treasure Time

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              • #8
                ouch on tha echo... need to work on flow
                \/ Click Here! \/
                .::My Music::.

                "Ain't Noone Believin' U Pleez Bro
                Ma Flow So Retarded Now That Even The Beat Slow"

                -M'Fresh

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                • #9
                  •†•| ®³† |•†•
                  Treasure Time

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                  • #10
                    ehh..not ba id say..just stay away from the animated shit and be less of a robot kindof shit..u know?..lol..just go with the flow..
                    Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
                    Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by DeNasty69
                      Well This Is My First Audio.. Made It In Like 10 Minutes.. So Umm.. Ya.. FeedBack? Keep In Mind THIS IS MY FIRST... So Dont Go Crazy On Me...

                      http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=392206

                      Lyricz:

                      I Spit-The-Most-On-The-Trek, Im Sick At Audio But Yo, I Don’t Boast-On-The-Net,
                      Put The Toast-To-Your-Head, You Should Be Callin It Baseball The Way I Wack-This-Fool, Dawg Up Your Vokab, Go Back-To-School, The Haterz That Talk Shit, Gotta Relax-They-Mood, Cuz The FoFo Don’t Go-Slow Til I Smack-They-Crew, I Stay Strapped-Like-A-Shoe, I Hunger For More, So Rapz-Like-My-Food, I Have Non-Stop Cravinz, Like Crack-Addictz-In-A-Bad-Mood, I Spit Heat Like The End Of June, Still Standin-Tall, Still Rollin’ Sweet Like A Candy-Ball, Linez Bein’ Played? Still Soundin-Broad, Leave Audiences In Awe, You Last On The Trak Im The First-Team, Kinda Funny How You Ripped By Someone Thirteen,

                      for god sakes shorten up those fucking lines i didnt like ur flow...
                      the echos made it sound like wtf is this???
                      ..Breath Ez ..

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                      • #12
                        ^Relax
                        R.I.P. To The G.O.A.T
                        Lamont "Big L" Coleman

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                        • #13
                          Just dont do them echos again..n shorten up the lines
                          ..Breath Ez ..

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                          • #14
                            ^ Better =)
                            R.I.P. To The G.O.A.T
                            Lamont "Big L" Coleman

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                            • #15
                              ..Breath Ez ..

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