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    dad's always been there to support-my-beliefs,
    now he's on the chair, coughin'
    got to make it up to him, before-he's-deceased
    always soar-with-his-speech,
    stopped me, from bringing roar-to-the-streets
    first day of high school, he wrote-me
    now relax and listen as i read what he told-me


    Dear Son,


    it's here, the one time in your life where-it's-real
    be careful out there, beware-the-steel
    stop with the rap, concentrate, go spare-ya-deals
    time to open your eyes and realize,
    you got life ahead of you, and it's still comin' alive
    get mind off those harsh-decisions
    cause next time you see steel, is the bars-in-prison
    and all the cars-you-wished-in gettin'
    they will be sitten' in another driveway out chillen'
    fillen' up spots, know it sounds crazy
    but maybe, if you look past it all, it'll be conjugating
    nothin' stays the same, it's-the-choices
    that you make, get in trouble, and say it's-the-voices
    son everyone has conscience in their head
    up to you to fight them off, if not, you better off dead
    keep your grades up, open-your-books
    stop tryin' to pretty yourself, skills aren't spoken-by-looks
    tryin' to keep you alive-in-this-bitch,
    guess it'll be hard to survive-in-that-bitch,
    don't ride-with-a-clique,
    it'll just bring danger,
    money will kill you, because you'll die-to-be-rich
    don't let your heart be pumped, or you'll live-by-the-gun
    or have it backwards, and you'll be a kid-on-the-run
    don't make a choice you're goin' to regret,
    concentate on school, it'll be sumtin' you'll never regret
    stay strong, don't let kids do-you-wrong
    it'll all add up after graduation, then all the fools-be-gone
    keep your head up, life-will-be-hard,
    don't be a gambler, make a choice, where sight-won't-be-cards
    got to twist the tables before you turn-em'
    my father told me that, passin' it down, now you learn-em'
    Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

  • #2
    nice shit V...Flow was on some..i lost it on some places but its all good..
    Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
    Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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    • #3
      nice shit homi the flow always there keep at it 1

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      • #4
        like how u gettin deep and flow was there, keep writin mayne
        Check Da Beats Out www.myspace.com/invisiblesetrecords

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        • #5
          props

          uppin'
          Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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          • #6
            yer its all good! flow went slighty in bits tho!
            ~*~Daze~*~

            last killz: Big One-Memphis

            good Repz for good repz

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            And switch from a six to a sixteen inch blade
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            • #7
              thanks im out

              -1-
              Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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              • #8
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                Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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                • #9
                  how come your dad has better rhymes than you?
                  download the newest Helmz mixtape...
                  http://www.datpiff.com/Helmz_Benefit...l.m182731.html

                  tweet @ewhitsHelmz

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                  • #10
                    lol^ umm good job you have really good flow
                    probley one of the best song writers on da site
                    keep it up man
                    -silent
                    -=|578|=-

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                    • #11
                      Flow lost just before the middle, structured good but kinda fell off. picked back up well.Good topic, Stayed on.
                      Another small thing is the - between multies...kinda slows down and parts tha flow..but minor.
                      nice piece.
                      Dynasty
                      In This Cartoon Rap World, Rappers Playin Rivals
                      Fuck Cars And Jewels Im Stashing Tinned Food And Rifles


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