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    Just started on this song, not completely finished yet. just workin with it
    anyways, let me know what yall think, an what i need to like improve on as far a writing songs..didn't know if this was the right place to post this, but wasnt getting any feed from others..so my bad if it is..just lemme get some feedback thanx

    (Hook (x2)
    I Couldn't See My Place In Life
    But, My Mind Stay Lit
    Like A Red Blazin Light
    (Whispering Away)
    Light
    Light
    Light...
    (Body)
    I
    Love To Rap
    Which Is Why
    Im Up For Days, To Write
    Doin What I Love
    To Make A Life.
    If I Could Go Back In Time, I'd Make It Right.
    Left School About Right After, Ninth.
    Didnt Do Shit For 3 Years, Now Its 2000 An Five
    No Diploma Or Job, Just Tryna Survive.
    So...
    With The Diverse Knowledge Of Hip-Hop
    I Prepare To Rip Off An Make This Whole Shit Rock.


    (Hook (x2)
    I Couldn't See My Place In Life
    But, My Mind Stay Lit
    Like A Red Blazin Light
    (Whispering Away)
    Light
    Light
    Light...
    (Body)
    Please Believe, When Given The Chance
    To Achieve, I'll Advance Indeed.
    I Don't Have To Repeat It
    Just Let Me Up In This, So I Can Get It Heated.
    Puttin Pen To Paper, To Let Rhymes Flow
    All It Took Was Music, For My Shine To Show.

    Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

    But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

  • #2
    UppiN.. For Feedback

    Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

    But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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    • #3
      UppiN...

      Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

      But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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      • #4
        Shit good mayne...Enjoyed it flowed real nice...Get a nice smooth moderate beat and ya set ta lay vocals whenever ya finish it that is....
        Props
        NBA

        3-1

        http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=156721978

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        • #5
          thanx man, appreciate it...i'll be sure to post final when im done writing it...

          Upp'N..Can I get some more feedback..

          Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

          But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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          • #6
            yea dude flowin nicley..lyrics are ok..good..peace
            Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
            Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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            • #7
              ^agreed nice shiat

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              • #8
                agreein with ak^^..lol..sup ak..
                Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
                Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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                • #9
                  shitz nice clean flow
                  record for 2006:
                  1-0-0

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                  • #10
                    Nice homie... word to what they said.. nice flow.

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