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  • ROTM: Round 1 Beatz vs. Swifty-ILL

    4 bars
    House Rules
    Blind Spits
    48 hr. deadline after check in

  • #2
    Check'n IN...

    Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

    But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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    • #3
      uppin all rookie battle threads
      I'm running from nothing, my stomach is touching
      What I'm clutching, to give you more then a concussion
      End of discussion (Lloyd Banks)
      ..BreathEZ..


      5-1 (4 ko)

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      • #4
        My Drop..

        I'll "Beat" You Down, With These Frequent Sounds
        Each "Beatz" Should Sound, As These Do Now..

        Then Teach You How, To Beat Peeps Down.
        I'm Cleanin This Crowd,While I Sweep This Klown.

        Theres "No Holding Me Down", I Shake Like Rubble
        I Roll Like The Olsen Twin's, Lines Come In Double's.


        I Just Put 4 Bars In Ya Chest, I'm Lookin To Kill
        Better Hope To God That Ya Blessed, Cause I'm Swiftly Ill.


        Let Me Know If You Cant Understand Somethin, And Need Explanation..

        Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

        But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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        • #5
          nice shit swiftly

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          • #6
            check, il drop my spit
            .::Text::.
            3-3

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            • #7
              Even if you were sick, you couldnt be 'ill'//1
              you the reason bitchs get sars, n 'killed'//2
              il fcuk this cat leave him 'Swiftly Still','Swiftly Skilled'//3
              Not, you been 'Swiftly Killed'//4
              You show signs of ~Symptoms~ of 'death'//5
              Like the time he killed ya leaving ya out of 'Breath'//6
              Il creep on ya like freddy vs. 'Jason'//
              Leave ya with one way to explain you, 'Dazing'//
              You small theres no need of 'tryin'//
              cuz when it comes to my rhymes, only thing it does is leave ya 'cryin'//

              1*self-explanatory
              2*sick-ill,sars makes you illn n killed
              3*play on his name
              4*play on his name
              5*he faced symptom
              6*n got killed
              .::Text::.
              3-3

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              • #8
                Syptomz Is A Girl.. Retard...
                Realizin' priorities and droppin dead weight,
                the kings cornered, but it ain't a checkmate.

                -kidNA$TY

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                • #9
                  lol^ where the hell u come from lol

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by beatz
                    You show signs of ~Symptoms~ of 'death'//5
                    Like the time he killed ya leaving ya out of 'Breath'//6
                    Lol Denasty Is Right..
                    So Beatz If You Had Done Your Homework Correctly
                    And Being How Its The 1st Battle Ive Done Here,
                    You Would Have Also Seen That He Is A "She", And That
                    I Won That Battle..
                    But No Beef Here Homie, Just Tellin Ya Wahtup

                    Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

                    But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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                    • #11
                      UppN..

                      Gained a couple fans had to make a transition

                      But i'm still in the hood like a transmission

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                      • #12
                        ^^^my bad, neva new she was a girl, i dont go lookin into there profile n shit, just thought she was a he, but my bad, uppin for votes
                        .::Text::.
                        3-3

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                        • #13

                          Swiftly
                          I'll "Beat" You Down, With These Frequent Sounds
                          Each "Beatz" Should Sound, As These Do Now..
                          Nothing Here, Dont Say Its Name Play Cuz You Said His Name Either...Was No Wordplay Or Punch With his name, filler Bar....1/5 For Multies neways
                          Then Teach You How, To Beat Peeps Down.
                          I'm Cleanin This Crowd,While I Sweep This Klown.
                          Nothing Here But Flow N Multies, No Punch...1/5
                          Theres "No Holding Me Down", I Shake Like Rubble
                          I Roll Like The Olsen Twin's, Lines Come In Double's.
                          No Punch Here, Self Boasting Both Lines....1/5
                          I Just Put 4 Bars In Ya Chest, I'm Lookin To Kill
                          Better Hope To God That Ya Blessed, Cause I'm Swiftly Ill
                          Nothing Here Wtf... You Didnt Throw a Punch...0/5



                          Beatz
                          Even if you were sick, you couldnt be 'ill'//1
                          you the reason bitchs get sars, n 'killed'//2
                          Played Punch Bar Altoghether...1.5/5...
                          il fcuk this cat leave him 'Swiftly Still','Swiftly Skilled'//3
                          Not, you been 'Swiftly Killed'//4
                          1/5...Nothing Here Really...
                          You show signs of ~Symptoms~ of 'death'//5
                          Like the time he killed ya leaving ya out of 'Breath'//6
                          2/5 ...Threw a Lil personal, not special...
                          Il creep on ya like freddy vs. 'Jason'//
                          Leave ya with one way to explain you, 'Dazing'//
                          Nothing Here.....1/5...
                          You small theres no need of 'tryin'//
                          cuz when it comes to my rhymes, only thing it does is leave ya 'cryin'//
                          1st like, nothing 2nd line like...nothing....1/5 for writing a bar....


                          Swiftly=3/20
                          Beatz=6.5/20


                          Flow/Structure-Swiftly
                          Multies-Swiftly
                          Punch-Beatz(Punch..not punches...)
                          Personal-Beatz
                          Wordplay-Noone
                          Enjoyment-Tie...
                          Overall-Beatz
                          Kinda Bored with this battle....no real punches...
                          keepspittin
                          .
                          .
                          BreathEz

                          "In This Rap Game Im Nobody(Why?)Nobody's Perfect"

                          .
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                          • #14
                            punches-beatz
                            flow-swift
                            multies-not much but swift
                            personal-beat
                            enjoyment-tippin on beatz

                            vote-beatz
                            I'm running from nothing, my stomach is touching
                            What I'm clutching, to give you more then a concussion
                            End of discussion (Lloyd Banks)
                            ..BreathEZ..


                            5-1 (4 ko)

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                            • #15
                              ok, uppin for more votes, 1-0 uppin
                              .::Text::.
                              3-3

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