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    if there ever was a time to write a rhyme
    then this is the time,
    cause every line that comes outta my mind
    will be better than ever,
    and i can guarentee it this time
    maybe it's a sign from god,
    tellin' me that this time I've reached my prime
    so let me take a breather,
    and jot down a few of my wonderul lines


    what is success?, success is what
    relieves the stress that you possessed
    from tryin' to conquer one of your goals,
    but ended up acheiven' the rest,
    maybe it's a test, to test your abilties of stress
    if you can conquer a goal,
    when you weren't even tryin' your best?
    sorry, had to get that question off my chest,

    now what is respect? respect is what you expect
    after given' it to someone you like or neglect,
    but it's a certain type of respect,
    it's the respect like a "What is up?",
    somethin' that is way different beyond an original set
    maybe it's a bet? to where as your life is a bet
    on your rep or the respect you give,
    and you hope for the best?
    sorry, had to get that wonderin' off of my chest,

    ok so what is love? love is somethin',
    that you wish could happen' from a sign up above
    given' you the trust in a woman,
    that you've never even thought of, the type of love
    where you would slice your wrist, and count
    each drop of blood as a times 10 for your love
    let me give you a message for love,
    let's see, love is like a maze,
    once you're in it, it is hard to get out of....or is it?
    it's your choice not from up above,
    if you believe in love, then say it and become one of us,
    sorry, had to get that out my heart, it was pumpin' with love....
    Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

  • #2
    nice flow... long read tho lol.... but also a nice one

    P.S. we got WU yay yay lmfao

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    • #3
      thanks

      uppin'
      Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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      • #4
        like i said in the thread of this u posted in the poetry forum, nice, liked the fact it was something different than what people usually post on here, liked the questioning
        Originally posted by Realize
        evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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        • #5
          props man, and i returned your favor
          Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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          • #6
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            Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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