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    a little something

    im fresh to the block but u cats better know this
    i stand for no shit and i do the incredible like jesus and moses
    fuck all the cats claimin the hustlers and killers
    i stay busting up lyrics and carry guns that take out busses and limos
    i strike out kids but i aint no baseball pitcher
    and the way i squash clowns id make this baseball fit ya
    but to face all pictures i snap like kodak
    my raps so sick industry cats be like 'you sure a netcee wrote that'
    watch as the illest of ill stand up and quote this
    and these pussys is weak its like im fucking about with some broke bitch

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    Get punches in it or it sounds like shit and some wordplays, the flow was fallin off but ima stop here just get a good picture in ya mind and just do it like u said in the bar bout the kodak iv seen alot of em but u'll catch up don worry

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    • #3
      show me some of your texts

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      • #4
        make it more direct, aiming at some1
        #1 Ohio State

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        • #5
          but i wasnt aiming at no one, so why would i make it aimed at some one ?

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Atrac
            show me some of your texts
            check my posts lol

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            • #7
              how about we just battle

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              • #8
                ahhh if u want a good ass kickin set it up

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                • #9
                  its set up

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Atrac
                    a little something

                    im fresh to the block but u cats better know this
                    i stand for no shit and i do the incredible like jesus and moses
                    fuck all the cats claimin the hustlers and killers
                    i stay busting up lyrics and carry guns that take out busses and limos
                    i strike out kids but i aint no baseball pitcher
                    and the way i squash clowns id make this baseball fit ya
                    but to face all pictures i snap like kodak
                    my raps so sick industry cats be like 'you sure a netcee wrote that'
                    watch as the illest of ill stand up and quote this
                    and these pussys is weak its like im fucking about with some broke bitch
                    damn you suck...
                    DECIBEL

                    Making that Noise We Call Music


                    ..BreathEZ..


                    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...m?bandID=65763

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                    • #11
                      yo atrac...if u want help il help u out...my msn is..roberts_john9 or aim jnodice
                      Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
                      Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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                      • #12
                        well u asked what u can improve on i just said aim ur shit at ur opponent just a lil advice, i didnt say that ur verse was a battle verse dumbass
                        #1 Ohio State

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                        • #13
                          well i aint gonna aim something at someone (wich is what your said) if its not a battle or a diss now am i

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                          • #14
                            did i ever say that ur verse was a battle verse...no... u dumbass it was just a lil advice cause some rooks like u dont do that...
                            #1 Ohio State

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                            • #15
                              startin shit with the new guy^^...lol..
                              Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
                              Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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