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  • D.I.E. Round 1 Pheature Vs Retro Fo [Beat: Unfinished]

    You are given 4 days till from this day including this day. Friday at 11:59pm PST is the deadline.
    Intro:
    You Only get 10-15 sec. for an Intro the rest must be music (you know what I mean).
    If your done early I sugguest you listen to it and perfect it as much as possible. I will be listening for everything.
    Good Luck.
    I will post the link for this in the Stickie above to prevent page clutter.
    So please people no unessascary post.
    Your requierments are to feed in 4 different rounds with construcitive critizism.
    Last edited by Mizfit_Monstar; 03-28-2006, 12:49 PM. Reason: title

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  • #2
    my shit is done. waiting on pheatch to at least check in 'fore i post it up.
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    • #3
      what up Fo, i'll start writin
      Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
      True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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      • #4
        aaaight, good luck bruh
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        • #5
          fuck it, im gettin anxious

          http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=507050

          ch-check out my melody...lyrics posted there too

          pheatch, dont listen yet till youve got yours done

          peace & good luck
          Last edited by Retro Fo; 03-29-2006, 05:34 PM.
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          • #6
            gave u my feed on msn dude. . .keep it up
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            • #7
              dayum nice flow and everything man
              tight shit gon be a nice little battle here
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              • #8
                where u at pheatch!
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                • #9
                  here you go homie - rest..

                  www.myspace.com/pheature
                  Last edited by PheAturE; 03-31-2006, 12:12 AM.
                  Dude listen...my biggest of muscles put yo significant others under seventy-two inches...
                  True Sickness has got me spittin punches too sick that they can't understand so dudes lose interest!

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                  • #10
                    haha, this is finna be somethin...what the people been waitin for....

                    ladies and gentlemen, cast your feed
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                    • #11
                      So this shit aint for dissin? Both had quality shit so I'll let other people be the judge.
                      Thug Motivation 911

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                      • #12
                        Retro Fo:
                        Surprisingly, you rocked this. I didn't think you'd put that much pressure on Pheature. The beginning hook part was nice. The way you delivered to the background violins was nice, creative indeed. Flow was on point. Delivery was ill, you came like a beast on this shit.

                        Best bars
                        "Time for all yall to take looks, cuz i dont play shook,
                        And i dont front, rappers say how they push cocaine cooked,
                        But they is bitches, uh, never sayin "stick em up",
                        And i dont hafta get my listeners with fake nate hooks,
                        Homie im makin progress, and i aint about frontin,
                        I got concepts, yall drop mixtapes about nothin"


                        The subliminals in that were nice. You served the purpose of this concept perfectly. They could be looked at as disses towards Pheature and they could just be looked at as disses to other rappers period. You came real nice on this. Only thing I wish you would have done better was make it longer. Shoulda used ALL the time you were allowed to use to make this. You would have really drop something serious.

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                        Pheature:
                        You kinda did the same thing that Retro did. But I think you did the beginning better. Doing 2 bars and then stopping, then doing 2 more bars and stopping was better than going straight through in my opinion. You delivered real well in the beginning.

                        Best bars
                        "Lets box rounds, leave you little faggots knocked down
                        Pac's gone, Em's weak, who you gonna mock now?"
                        "When I look back in the days in retrospect,
                        I know I wasn't that impressed wit Techno tracks
                        You the type thats product of incested sex
                        If you think you hot, you dreamin like Inspectah Deck (Sandman)"


                        Your verse was nice, subliminals wasn't as subliminal as Retro's but the retrospect line was nice. Your flow was on, like it always is, delivery was nice, lyrics was nice. You took advantage of all the time you were given so that's gonna help for you. The ending of your song was nice too, it was a different style, showed some versatility. Your mic presence on this track was the best I seen.

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                        It's gonna be mad hard to vote on this.
                        I think Pheature had the best hooks, meaning the parts where he changed his flow to match the beat. The way he delivered them, and the lyrics used for them were different, and the "airplane, army" line during that part is what took it for him. But I think Retro had the better verse. His delivery was more nastier and he hit the subliminals more/harder than Pheature did. So it really just comes down to who had the best flow/delivery on the track.

                        Consistancy- Damn, I don't know who to vote for. Tie.
                        Flow- I think Retro had the best flow on the verse and Pheature had the best flow on the mini-hooks. So again, Imma have to put down a tie for this.
                        Delivery- Tie for this too. Retro was nasty, Pheature came wit a cockyness. It's a fine line between which one was actually better for this beat. So, Imma have to say tie for this one too.
                        Lyrics- I dunno who had the best lyrics. It seemed like they both had the same number of quotables in the track. Hard to vote for. Tie.

                        I can't pick a winner. I've listened to each track atleast 5 times.
                        I don't know who the hell won.

                        Vote- Tie.
                        Last edited by Urban; 03-31-2006, 11:06 AM.

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                        • #13
                          props on the good feed urb...i told yall this battle wasn't gunna be as one sided as the prediction thread made it out to be...uppin for more feed
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                          • #14
                            Ok. Wow. Never heard Retro before... Nice shit dude.

                            Was impressed wit Retro's... Dude flowed real nice to the beat.

                            But. Pheature flowed even better to the beat, AND put more feeling into all of it.

                            Pheature came better with the subliminal punchlines, the multies were on point. I'd have to give this one to Pheature.
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                            • #15
                              well, first things first....holy fukk to both of you. i dunno how the hell you both dropped straight fire and made it this close to vote on. just so you know, i think this battle is probably gunna be better then the final battle for first place. but lets see...

                              Evasion.

                              at the very start you came in hard. straight to the point, a hype hook, and sikk delivery.



                              But they is bitches, uh, never sayin "stick em up",
                              And i dont hafta get my listeners with fake nate hooks,


                              probably the best subliminal in the trakk. when i first heard it i couldn't help but laugh. very hype.

                              overall your trakk was too crazy. your subliminals killed it, lyrics was amazing. your flow was sikk...damn even your voice was hype as hell....and it even helps being the underdog, but you showed errone up.

                              but then there was pheature's hook.

                              pheature, your flow....god i could marry it. when you first came in like urb said, bar by bar... shit was crazy.


                              When I look back in the days in retrospect,
                              I know I wasn't that impressed wit Techno tracks


                              this was probably your best subliminal, and even your best didn't match retro fos...

                              your flow killed the track. but i seem to agree with urban about retro having a better verse. he seemed to come alot harder . but your flow held down your side.


                              but then when i read the lyrics....i sorta wondered what you were talkin bout....green-blonde hair...
                              not to sure what oyu were gettin at.


                              so overall....retro's verse was better. your flow was tight as fukk. but he had those hard subliminals that just made his verse better.

                              vote - retro
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