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  • D.I.E. Round 2 Epic Scriptz Vs Prototype

    D.I.E. Round 2 "Neck Breaker"

    Now your skills shall be tested.



    Scores from Round 1 and every round will be posted In a seperate link I'll go through every track and give my feed back and score.

    Concept:

    Its all pretty simple a party track right? Well yes and no. Your gonna Be rapping in the Bartenders or Bouncers Point of View. You have to explain all the fun of the party while doing your job at the same time. Also, your promoting your club or party because the hypeness of your party will be placed up against anothers. Basically your opponents party is your competitor. You too are hyping up your parties to be the best between each other as a Bouncer or Bartender. I seriously dont know why i come up with this shit but if you ever need a concept I guess I'm the person to see.


    Epic Scriptz Beat: Believe it or not you got the beat you wanted "Vice president"
    Prototype Beat: Mobb Deep ~ Hey

    Kansas
    City Chiefs: 5-3

    Los
    Angeles Lakers: 7-0

  • #2
    check
    Southern Intellect
    Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

    Prototype

    http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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    • #3
      koo.. im feelin that beat.. gl prototype
      should be a good one
      !!!. . .Take Over. . .!!!

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      • #4
        ePiC_sKriPTz

        is my pick ta win the hole shit
        ITS BEEN A WHILE BUT FireChild IS BACK

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        • #5
          http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3768544
          [Hook]
          I can handle wutever u gonna try give me girl
          Im young and experienced, i aint new in this business girl
          Dont underestimate the way i can do it to ya girl
          I kno i talked alot, so now let me prove it to ya girl
          [2x]

          [Verse 1]
          Eyyo guess who comin back wit another remix(Who)
          Forchun Heard the beat so i had flip the bitch and mix it
          Wit my click behind the bar, smellin like a pound
          We in the club now, all ya *****s kno its goin down
          U see black, latinas, blondes,asians, all u can bang
          Shit get in this bitch a boy, ***** u comin out a man
          Hirin *****s so i dont gotta serve all by myself
          But if i have to, it's all good, i stay packin below my belt
          Servin up drinks, while im lookin fresh rockin my timbas
          *****s rollin up dressed, but im still lookin fresher in my sneakers
          I'll find any bitch and i can make her feel loved (word)
          Im gettin a blowjob while servin drinks, before i leave the club
          Before i take a step out the bar, im gettin messages
          Textin "69", damn bitches just wanna get at this
          Fuck it, i'll let em get it, get jiggy wit it, no questions asked
          So im bout to get behind some bitch, so she can pop it fast

          [Hook]
          I can handle wutever u gonna try give me girl
          Im young and experienced, i aint new in this business girl
          Dont underestimate the way i can do it to ya girl
          I kno i talked alot, so now let me prove it to ya girl
          [2x]

          [Verse 2]
          Forchun rollin in the bentley, and his lambourgini car
          I stay rockin pigeons, and i do it all behind the bar
          My kicks clean and my outfit damn dat shit just fits me
          The checkers on my shirt and fresh streaks on my jeans
          The "bob marley's" here still rockin from my necks
          That baby girl gonna say it, "(damn dude's so fresh)"
          Walkin in my club, no red carpet, but fly walkin on the rug
          Check the club, my hoes shakin, hustlin sellin them drugs
          Then i see her wit the wet shirt, that say hugs and thugs
          Im tryin get wit it, fuck a room, i got the back of the club
          Now if i come and holla, baby girl u gotta promise
          U gotta shake and drop that ass before u up out of this
          Aite i know u ready, so just keep that ass steady
          Bouncin on me so good till i pop out all my babies
          Phone book full, no room to save your number boo
          So amma have to write it on ur chest, (i think that'll do)

          [Hook]
          I can handle wutever u gonna try give me girl
          Im young and experienced, i aint new in this business girl
          Dont underestimate the way i can do it to ya girl
          I kno i talked alot, so now let me prove it to ya girl
          [2x]

          [Bridge]
          All you ladies wit real hairs (put ur hands up)
          All you ladies wit real nails (put ur hands up)
          All you ladies wit full package (put ur hands up)
          We bout to do the ochie wallie so (put ur hands up)
          All you ladies wit fake hairs (put ur hands down)
          All you ladies wit fake nails (put ur hands down)
          All you ladies wit no package (put ur hands down)
          I dont gotta put hands up, cuz they never came down (chyea chyea)
          [2x]

          [Hook]
          I can handle wutever u gonna try give me girl
          Im young and experienced, i aint new in this business girl
          Dont underestimate the way i can do it to ya girl
          I kno i talked alot, so now let me prove it to ya girl
          [2x]
          Last edited by ePiC_sKriPTz; 04-09-2006, 05:19 PM.
          !!!. . .Take Over. . .!!!

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          • #6
            http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3770139


            yep

            uh
            yea

            hook
            i'm gettin pissed gettin drunk i needa slow down
            i'm working but i cant help it so more shots i throw down
            brain goin slow now fuck i'm gettin slugish
            the nights gettin wild u know somebody gettin punished

            lemme tell ya'll a story about this club the other night
            drinks overflowin the cups yep this join was outta sight
            outta this world filled with them hot girls
            bootys shakin bodys quakein
            dance floor was close to breaking
            so i
            step up to the bar started earning that green
            when all of a sudden i see the finest bitch u ever seen
            long blonde hair she had them nice blue eyes
            started lickin my lips man thinkin i want inbetween those thighs
            diggin the beats there pumpin dj had the party jumpin
            aint no compition to this man this the spot they all be bumpin
            man i'm pumped cant wait to finish my shift
            money flowin in quicker then watefalls over a cliff

            hook x2
            i'm gettin pissed gettin drunk i needa slow down
            i'm working but i cant help it so more shots i throw down
            brain goin slow now fuck i'm gettin slugish
            the nights gettin wild u know somebody gettin punished



            this place is fully sick like it was covered with bird flu
            girls in the skimpyest clothes man dudes thinkin what they should do
            take her home dance with her or just sit there and stare
            i cant take it no more man i gotta get out there
            every 3 seconds i take a look at my watch
            but my vision so blury now its hard to notice whats what
            top me up the call from the other end of the bar
            tonight be the hardest i ever worked here by far
            some dudes gettin rody bouncers startin to step in
            hopein none of them be coming back packing a weapon
            its gettin late now no wait its gettin early
            now this girl walkin up and she orders a shirly
            while i'm poorin i try and make some conversation
            now this dude coming up and there a bit of confrontation
            fuck the bouncers i'm drunk think i can handle it myself
            connect his jaw and fuck dude pullin some heat out from his belt
            he's lettin off screaming everybody get down
            i'm off my face feel invincible so i try and take him down
            i take a dive here a scream and then some sharp pain
            but i'll survive another day that dude has a shit aim




            hookx2
            i'm gettin pissed gettin drunk i needa slow down
            i'm working but i cant help it so more shots i throw down
            brain goin slow now fuck i'm gettin slugish
            the nights gettin wild u know somebody gettin punished
            Southern Intellect
            Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

            Prototype

            http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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            • #7
              Originally posted by FireChild
              ePiC_sKriPTz
              is my pick ta win the hole shit
              im gunna guess u either know him personally, or did not pay attention to round one at all...

              ***

              but anyway, my feed on the LYRICs (i can't listen to them atm cuz im at school, but when i get home i'll listen and edit this post if i feel a difference in my opinion is necessary)

              ePiC_sKriPTz
              though i can tell u understood the concept of the round, i think you definately forgot about it on and off throughout the writing process..first ur talkin about serving drinks then ur talking about your "timbas" and sneakers, then ur packing heat, then ur getting text messages (i dont know much about clubs, but i dont think too many girls know the number of their bartender)
              then ur getting blowjobs WHILE serving drinks...and then your rolling in on bentleys and lambourghinis...and so on and so forth...basically it was all over the place and u fucked it up...

              Prototype
              u pretty much did the complete reverse of what your oponent did...he remembered he had to be a bartender/bouncer but the content rambled on about a bunch of bullshit...you on the other hand had creative content, but u forgot you were sposta be a bartender or bouncer...it seems like u were writing then remembered the concept and threw in

              "step up to the bar started earning that green"
              and
              "man i'm pumped cant wait to finish my shift
              money flowin in quicker then watefalls over a cliff"

              which is alright, so long as u did stick to the concept, which u indeed did...

              ***

              u read my feed...i dont even think i need to say it..but i will for those of who who are slower...

              Vote: Prototype
              PS: i also liked it cuz it seems like mine and your thing happened at the same club but from 2 different points of view...on some "one shot 2 shot" type shit...pretty crazy
              Last edited by Retro Fo; 04-10-2006, 07:43 AM.
              Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
              Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
              Don't Sleep.

              ***
              LOST

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              • #8
                werd im at school so ill leave feed for you later on
                TakeOver

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                • #9
                  see that's the thing.. u dunno bout clubbin round here nahh mean? u only see it from his point of view.. clubbin for me is exactly like how i explained it.. that's how bartenders here in ny are.. either servin up drinks, gettin numbers(whole lot of bartenders get numbers, and lots of chicks get numbers, that's how u get them drinks, specially under 21 chicks =D.. and i know cuz one of my dawgz is a bartender), bangin hot ass chicks in the back of the club, and timbas and sneakers is really fly round here, specially nike dunks.. dunks are superfly round here.. and the hoes and rocks part thats what hustlas(mostly bartenders) do in clubs.. sell they rock and make money off they hoes and shit nahh mean? i mean like u said "u dunno much bout clubs" and i been clubbin for a while so u woudln't get it.. no hate or nuttin but i dont think u should vote unless u know wut im talkin bout first nahh mean?
                  !!!. . .Take Over. . .!!!

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                  • #10
                    Epic, regardless of all that... you swayed off topic a lot. The whole purpose was to make your party look hype.. most of the time you were jus makin yourself look good. You supposed to be talkin about a party pretty much through a series of events from a bouncer or bartender's eyes.. you kinda was on, but eh, it ain't up to me to decide.

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                    • #11
                      yea aite i get what ya sayin.. wuz jes explainin to evasion tho cuz that's what really does happen round here nahh mean?
                      !!!. . .Take Over. . .!!!

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                      • #12
                        Nadadamean.

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                        • #13
                          ^that's what i meant (what urban said after your explanation)...i never said "that's not what happens in clubs" or "timbas and dunks aint fly" or "bartenders dont sell rocks or pimp" the only thing i said along those lines was that i didn't think bartenders go tnumbers, but thats my bad...

                          my point was exactly what urban said, u wasn't talkin about the party or shit that was goin on or anything, u just talked about yourself and your fly clothes and cars and hoe-mackin ability...that aint the concept dogg...
                          Check My New EP Diversify w. UK Producer Jay Dizla
                          Canada + UK Revolutionary Underground Hip Hop
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                          • #14
                            Epic:
                            Your quality sucked and you could hear air being blown
                            into the mic while you where speaking.Also it kinda sounded
                            like if you where reading off the paper but just a lil and
                            you need more emotion. the lyrics...where okay IMO I wasn't
                            feeling it cuz I aint into that type of club stuff.So it really
                            matters on what type of music the person likes.


                            Glimster:
                            Nice flow but you can't really hear what you're saying the
                            beat is a lil too loud.But over all it's coo kinda have the Obie
                            Trice thing going on..real nice.

                            vote: Glimster his just sounded better and was more on
                            point...kind of a close one though.



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