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    Crazy Whitey
    I canít help it Iím way to obsessed ,All I wanna do is take a taste of flesh
    I donít care if your mom get upset, Shit you and her will probably be next
    Or you couldíve been first, Iíll eat you while youíre in the hurst
    You think I canít get any worse, I donít suck dick so I canít be Mr. Durst
    I spit my lyrics like poison venom, I tried to eat the same finger again
    They call me the new Son of Sam, People say my flows are sick like Eminem
    Thatís the best rapper out that I wontt deny, I be laughing so hard I think Iím bout to cry
    I get funny tears falling out of my eye, While you got nut dripping from your eye
    Im drop'n a verse but its hard without a beat, with the proper beat, you know you canít defeat
    Go cry in the corner where you beat your meat, Get on your hands and knees bitch and kiss my fucking feet
    Then I might let you live just to see my art, Spread your girls legs and fuck that bitch a part
    Sat on her ugly face a blew a nasty fart, Right in front of you I cooked then ate her heart
    That bitches heart was kinda runny, Her pussy smelled like bacon bits thats kinda funny
    She tried to call me a nasty fucking dummy, Her titties were the biscuits my nut was the honey
    You may think this is crazy, you may think Iím weird, Donít get mad cause you get hit on by a queer
    Get jealous cause every week I have a different beard, You get mad cause this white boyís shits all In your ear
    I donít give a fuck if you canít stand me, Cause my checks are looking mighty fucking dandy
    You get mad cause your girls pussy she handed me, Im just mad at all you broke bitches who try to play me
    So im hitín all yaíll with these ill rhymes, Fucked your girl and mom at the same time
    You wanna a piece of mine, I drink red wine, Got you on your knees beggín all the time
    ďoh man please donít kill meĒ
    all you broke hoes donít thrill me, I canít stand that sorry fuck nelly
    Hey girl wanna a drink, put it on my tab then bill me


    i wrote this last year

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    uppin for feedback, good or bad

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    • #3
      yo0o div dat was pretty good
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      • #4
        thanx money.....lookin for more feedback

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        • #5
          uppin for feedback

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          • #6
            yeah, i agree, that was prety good,
            when did you start writing raps?

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            • #7
              i wrote that in october '02 i started with poems in '99 but i just started really rappin in nov. 02

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