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    i havent dropped nuhtin in a long while and this like came to me.. and well no one ever read shit so if you read.. tell me what ya think

    i got emotionally fatal weaknesses and i got fears//
    i got profound depths of depression and i got tears//
    I got unexpected confessions in me yet to confess//
    i got an obsession for self expression and for success//
    im accepted but i still feel like im lookn in from the outside//
    i crave and thirst for attention but i still run and I hide//
    each and every temptation always leads to a sin//
    like every peice of paper always meets its death to a pen//(murder this paper with this pen)
    sweet dreams still leave you haunted and scared by nightmares//
    i couldnt buy my way to heaven even if I took the stairs// (led zeppelin "stairway to heaven")
    EVIL is everywhere and its just the way that i LIVE//(evil spells live backwards)
    i dont live the religious life but i do always forgive//
    ------------

    well i kinda had to stop bc its time fo me to go find somethin to eat mah tummy is rumblin. im out
    ặmōů420


    ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
    ... Empty ...
    ... Suicide ...
    ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
    ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
    ... Deceased ...
    ... Reminisce ...
    ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


    AOL: pinkpanther72089
    MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

  • #2
    I gots ta say dis was deep i mena i was feelin it and it was nicely laid out good drop
    Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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    • #3
      really deep syd- i love reading your stuff- always have good vocab and thoughts
      keep it up
      u should post more often

      outtie
      South Perth Crew
      T-Dot Madness

      $Elemental Realm$
      Da Culprit
      Urban AKA
      G-Unit_DLT
      CAL
      KristalMeth
      CatInTheHat
      Chilli
      Capital P
      Sniper


      Crew Battle Record:
      3-0
      The Frachize (KO) // Street Justice// The Realm


      D12world Battle Record:
      20-10


      Wins
      CAL// Hava Gess (KO)// Javarino(KO)// Tha Tiger (5-4)// Untouchab(5-4)(KO)// DJ Sleek(KO)// Emcee Falcon(KO)// Blayze(KO)// Mizfit Monstar(KO)// KonKluzzion(KO)// MC Dean(KO)// LyricalAssAssin (x2)// Face OF Death(KO)// Forcified// G-UnitDLT(KO)// DIV(KO)// Alpha Omega (5-0)// Dominion
      Defeats
      Dgree// Pistol Whip// Tennessee// KG tha Kid// Xternil// L'il Magician (x3)// Sniper113// BKJ1216(2)

      Respects go out to: Dgree, TO menice, To my crew of course, Tennesee (tight rapper), KG THA KID, Shaday's Lady (got her shit together), Famous420, $ilk & Jools(do ya thing Goup Home), RealPlatoon (ILL), Cre3P,

      Da Culprit's Audio Page

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      • #4
        i replied in the other forum
        I killed Lit

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        • #5
          Great Shit but at the end it seemed like you were jus tryna get threw the free.. i think you should slow down and keep talkin about the same thing cause the first 8 lines were OFF THE HOOK.....i hope you know what i mean and im not jus blowin smoke...... PEace
          THE J UNIT
          FEATURING
          NOXSHUS
          JOOLS

          J Unit Anthem(REMIX) FEAT BROOKLYN, FAMOUS, CATINTHEHAT

          Shoutouts To :
          CAP P
          Britonic
          C.A.L
          CATINTHEHAT
          Da_Culprit
          Famous420 (femcee)
          Brooklyn

          ..:Wins Worth Talking About:..
          SicjohnnyB..KO

          C-A-N-A-D -A


          Catch me on MSN ~ [email protected]

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          • #6
            nice nice,,,i liked the wordplay and it was deep,,,keep it up,,you should drop more often,,,,1one

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            • #7
              420 check mine out babe here
              I killed Lit

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              • #8
                That was real good... i liked reading it...post some more of your stuff up...you got mad skilllz
                PeAcE
                Hooded Soldiers -- Parental And KonKluzzion

                Battles: Won 15 Lost 1 (TEN K.O.S)

                Won

                1st Battle: Catinthahat 5 - 4

                3rd Battle: Miz_fit Monsta 3 - 1

                4th Battle: Dirtydiabolic 4 - 0 (KO)

                5th Battle: Da SaVior 2 - 0 (Pulled Out KO)

                6th Battle: Da SaVior 3-0 (KO)

                7th
                Battle: Chitowns Mack 3-0(KO)

                8th
                Battle: BEAST X 7-4

                9th
                Battle: Chitowns Mack 4-1

                10th Battle: V919V 3-0

                11th Battle: RapGame 5-4

                12th Battle: Big Boy 3-0

                13th Battle: BANE 3-0

                14th Battle: HavoC 4-0

                15th Battle: Jay'anims 3-0

                16th Battle: ((JaCk~FrOsT)) 4-0

                Lost:

                2nd Battle: Da Culprit (KO)

                Originally posted by Sniper113
                KonKluzzion- let me put it this way, i'm very fucken impressed, that shit just blew me away.
                "Your To Confined Even If I Mimed I Could Still Spit Better Than You, Hope You Dont Mind That Im Combined With Lyrics Entwinded In My Spine, Make You Resign From Tha Grind Cause Ive Redefined Mankind, So Jus Rewind, Youve Now Been Fined Ive Shined, All I Hear Is You Whine."
                Holy shit man tha line was amazing, the rest was the same just can bpther pasting it all, but i think u took it hands down, and u had a mathafucken brilliant verse .

                Originally posted by MiLs
                Kon (You had some crazy shit homie)
                ...~Imma Predispose Of This Hoe With One Of My Blows, How Do Your Suppose To Flow When You Compose Throws About As Hot As The Snow, Imma Expose This "PRO" Cause Everyone Knows, This Guys Is More Fake Than A U-F-O...~
                ^^ That was hot homie....

                Originally posted by Jay'anims

                And then to Konkluzzion, your style's dope, you got a little bit of Eminem
                With the multies, your ingenuise with lyrics, love chatting wit you on MSN

                Imma Start By Ripping Your Arms Apart, Grab A Blunt Dart And Stick It In Your Heart, Fuck A Restart Your Stats Will Be On A Hospital Chart, In Bold Letters Will Say "Versing KonKluzzion Aint Very Smart!!"

                You Know Im King Kong Cause I Got Tha Biggiest Schlong

                Shout Outz

                Sniper113, Dominion, Jay'anims, Parental Guidens, RapGame, Dgree, Urban AKA, HavoC, KG Tha Kid, Catinthahat, Chitown, V919V, G_Unit_Dlt, Blaze S, King Lax (AKA Can-I-Bus, Can-NY-Bus)

                You All Should Read Canibus, His Lyrics Are Dopaliscious

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                • #9
                  skep- thanks where ya been i havent see you on here lately

                  da culprit- thanks sweetY!! ahh yes ill try to post more TRY

                  jools- lol ok. thanks ... maybe its because ima HICK... just maybe lol..

                  scribe- thanks.. are you Lit??? cuz that link to me to Lit

                  lyrical assasin- yes i shall try but thanks

                  Kon- thankies
                  ặmōů420


                  ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
                  ... Empty ...
                  ... Suicide ...
                  ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
                  ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
                  ... Deceased ...
                  ... Reminisce ...
                  ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


                  AOL: pinkpanther72089
                  MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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                  • #10
                    yea I just wanted a 2nd name
                    I killed Lit

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                    • #11
                      deep man,
                      holy fuck scribe your Lit?
                      speaking of scribe can anyone vote on my battle with him?
                      Signature are useless.

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                      • #12
                        NIIICE Famous, that was pretty ill I'd say...I like that evil-live thing haha I never noticed that before! Really metaphorical at parts, likin the wordplay


                        R.I.P J-Unit



                        I.D


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                        • #13
                          thankies NOX!!! do ya got MSN or AOL by any chance
                          ặmōů420


                          ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
                          ... Empty ...
                          ... Suicide ...
                          ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
                          ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
                          ... Deceased ...
                          ... Reminisce ...
                          ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


                          AOL: pinkpanther72089
                          MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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                          • #14
                            Wow thats dope shit. Im feeling the flow and wordplay on this one. Man I just love deep shit. keep spittin the hottness...
                            theDynasty
                            Nek 9
                            D. Dutchess-You will always be Dynasty Mami. Your big brother will always have ya back.
                            Brymstone
                            RIP
                            Clue
                            Red-Out
                            I.E.
                            i.k.
                            Tenn
                            **van*illa**
                            D-UNIT !!


                            It's the DAWN of a NEW ERA ...

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                            • #15
                              why yes, mz famous, yes I do!
                              [email protected]
                              there ya go! msn hit me up girl!


                              R.I.P J-Unit



                              I.D


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