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  • a diss to you,yes thats right-to you bitch/feedback????

    hey yo/
    i wrote this,ta make you faggots lose focus/
    i crack ya up,more then ya coke is,you know this/
    lets hang these bitches,tell me were my rope is/
    my words are more holly then da bible/
    when it comes ta flows i got the style/
    im vyle,just like the west nile-sevice with a smile/
    im riled,come wit ya best pile-pervert on file/
    sickle an ebert,give me two thumbs up/
    im an expert,an you faggots bum fuck/
    i drop more bombs then nassa,white caspa/
    you on the freeway,i just passed ya/
    you such a gangsta,why you were aeropostel?
    a burst of anger,i rip ya brain ouit threw ya left nostral/
    why so hard but got mom on ya bysept/
    an i got fuck you, on my left,just exept the fact/
    you wack,im wastin my breath,im finished wit that/

  • #2
    are all your spits actual freestyles cause thats good man...


    ONE1
    DYNAS
    TY

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    • #3
      hi thats really cool

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      • #4
        yo thanx dawgs an ya man i only spit freetsyles,i dont drop pre writtin shit on the net unless it says its one of my songs/i just dont like to waste my time pre writtin,when i can freestyle/

        uppin for more feedback????

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        • #5
          hey yo uppin this please????

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          • #6
            hey cal i've read every one of these things, but i haven't gave feedback, sorry about that, but could you give feedback on the lyrics to my song?


            now about yoru rhyme it was pretty good although i didn't understand the part about the coke the punches were hard flow was good and the worldplay was excellent
            Signature are useless.

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            • #7
              well the line ment things in a few diferant ways like crack an coke what ever,an cracked you up,like when you high an shit an itll make you that way more then coke/
              u get it now dawg?
              an thanx for the feedback homie ill make sure to check it out 1

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