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    im tha type to take your verse, and spin it into reverse/

    spit it back and beat your ass wit your own verse/

    all muh life,people say im sumthing out da ordinary/

    cause i can bring you to destruction in seconds wit only words in my vocabulary/

    your style is just temporary and it will never last/

    so as far as im concerned, you can pucker up and KISS MY ASS! cuz your no where near my class/

    so your ass better start sip'n that liqour, and smoke that dro/

    cause your going to need everything when i crush your flow/

    thats as far as im going to go, because i dont want fake rappers steal'n my flow................

    how did i do peoples, i wanna hear tha pro's and con's of this verse. cuz i need to know what im doing wrong.
    Last edited by verse's; 04-19-2003, 05:36 PM.
    me wit out style is like mustard wit out the heins, i'll leave ya new school you tha busta wit out tha rhymes

  • #2
    alright i'll battle
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    • #3
      u sound like missy eliot with your flippin around and reversing shit
      but check out other battles to see how the shit goes down and try wrtitin another verse

      ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
      ..::ExterminateD::..

      |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

      |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
      |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
      |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
      |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
      |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
      |hero-KO|
      ==========================
      ..::Crew Battles::..
      The Franchize-K0
      ==========================
      ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
      |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
      ==========================
      ..::My Tracks::..
      ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
      ==========================
      Da kinky hoe
      Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

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      • #4
        the new kid on the block does a lot of talk/
        but now his ass is gonna by die by the glock/
        shootin' your ass across the table with the snub shit/
        kicking my foot so far up your ass i'm controllin you like a puppet/
        yo verse your style is so old it's being carried to the cemetary in a herese/
        you gotta ask your question about which is worse a curse or your verse/
        it's time to get off that word i'm gettin a lil repettive/
        knock your ass out like a motherfucking sedative/
        who the hell do you think you were to make this battle/
        your rhyme sounds like it came straight from the words or cattle/
        moo moo moo muah moo moo moo the only think you'll revice is boo/
        you won't have to worry about pros sealing' your flows/
        you probably have someone writing them for you as a ghost/
        i started off a little rude, i'll admit i'm a bad host/
        but god damn at least i got something to boast/
        i should stop now and let your ass roast/


        lol i know shitty but hey what you gonna do,

        anyway one big thing I can see wrong with your verse is rhyeming verse and reverse it's basically the same word but with a prefix so its not a good idea to rhyme other than that all i can say is add in more complicated shit, more metaphors and more word play
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        • #5
          aight!!! that was a good flow you spit. i was look'n around at rapview and started gett'n bored wit it cuz bitchs there suck HELLA!! tha flow you spit could of beat'n everybody at that site all at once!
          me wit out style is like mustard wit out the heins, i'll leave ya new school you tha busta wit out tha rhymes

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          • #6
            really? damn yeah you should hang around here man cause that shit i spit was really wack as hell start battlin' people you'll get better in no time
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            • #7
              im not kidding because i was fucking people up hardcore in that site. bits and peices of that flow before in a flow against people in that site and they were gettin crushed.... i should start learn'n from you guys and go there and start crush'n them even more.
              me wit out style is like mustard wit out the heins, i'll leave ya new school you tha busta wit out tha rhymes

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              • #8
                oh shit, i mean i used bits and peices of that orginal flow against people and they were gettin crushed. but a lot of the people there were probaly white, try'n to act black.
                me wit out style is like mustard wit out the heins, i'll leave ya new school you tha busta wit out tha rhymes

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