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  • Life Little Story (Untouchabs first solo track)

    Intro:
    your about to hear a tragic story about gettin rich and die trying its about the reality of life

    verse 1:
    drinkin my bacardi..smokin my blunt.. walkin down the block ..all i see are these dirty scunts..
    those are the cards that life handed them.. maybe im blessed wit the art a lyricalism..
    see the cars drive by poundin they rap..i still aint made a buck..maybe i should sell crack..
    on the corner slangin rocks..just got jacked by these wanna be thugs..left bloody and bruised..
    i should just pop my head with a lead slug..lifes so hard sometimes we cant go on..but pick
    ya head up life can be bright as the sun..

    Chorus:
    u think life is hard well think again...hardest shit youll ever see just hand me a pad an pen ..
    i fire ink bullets..filled wit lead..become an interior decorator with the insides of ya head..
    but the drugs kick in and get me relaxed..whos this whore beside me..did i wax that ass??..

    verse 2:
    better days have come and gone..wrote some dope shit..now ya minds got blown..got the deal..
    makin the cash..got crews beefin..threatining to cap my ass..shrug it off..im still breathin..
    just did a collab wit a rappa..shits lookin tite..then he lays out some lines of the good ol white..
    fill up the nasal cavitys..thinkin back picturing the tradgedys..homeless crackheads chillin on the block..
    i shouldent be doin this..FUKK I GOTTA STOP..im hearin all these voices inside of my head..
    i shouldent have started rappin im better off dead..

    Chorus:
    u think life is hard well think again...hardest shit youll ever see just hand me a pad an pen ..
    i fire ink bullets..filled wit lead..become an interior decorator with the insides of ya head..
    but the drugs kick in and get me relaxed..whos this whore beside me..did i wax that ass??..

    Verse 3:
    wake up early morning to the sound of rap..pull the covers off..roll in a pile of dog crap..
    better get my ass downtown an start makin more cash..my career is gone.. im addicted to crack..
    why do i deserve this life..all i wanted was to rap..have a family and a beautifull wife..
    dig through the trash and pull out the paper..front page..crack kills a rapper..
    so now everyone thinks im dead..all i need is some cash and a rock..then i can lay a new track..
    and pick my self up..but then i see this young boy walkin by head up..reppin his crew..
    he dont even give me a second look.. daaaamn

    Chorus:
    u think life is hard well think again...hardest shit youll ever see just hand me a pad an pen ..
    i fire ink bullets..filled wit lead..become an interior decorator with the insides of ya head..
    but the drugs kick in and get me relaxed..whos this whore beside me..did i wax that ass??..


    Feedback would be appreciated ,this my first track so be nice

    ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
    ..::ExterminateD::..

    |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

    |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
    |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
    |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
    |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
    |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
    |hero-KO|
    ==========================
    ..::Crew Battles::..
    The Franchize-K0
    ==========================
    ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
    |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
    ==========================
    ..::My Tracks::..
    ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
    ==========================
    Da kinky hoe
    Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

  • #2
    i think that shits ill and the hook is dope as fuck

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    • #3
      thanks man

      ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
      ..::ExterminateD::..

      |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

      |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
      |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
      |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
      |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
      |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
      |hero-KO|
      ==========================
      ..::Crew Battles::..
      The Franchize-K0
      ==========================
      ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
      |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
      ==========================
      ..::My Tracks::..
      ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
      ==========================
      Da kinky hoe
      Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

      Comment


      • #4
        no prob,,,anytime

        Comment


        • #5
          feelin that hook, that shit was sick untouchab- good stuff for your first time
          keep it comin dawgpeace
          South Perth Crew
          T-Dot Madness

          $Elemental Realm$
          Da Culprit
          Urban AKA
          G-Unit_DLT
          CAL
          KristalMeth
          CatInTheHat
          Chilli
          Capital P
          Sniper


          Crew Battle Record:
          3-0
          The Frachize (KO) // Street Justice// The Realm


          D12world Battle Record:
          20-10


          Wins
          CAL// Hava Gess (KO)// Javarino(KO)// Tha Tiger (5-4)// Untouchab(5-4)(KO)// DJ Sleek(KO)// Emcee Falcon(KO)// Blayze(KO)// Mizfit Monstar(KO)// KonKluzzion(KO)// MC Dean(KO)// LyricalAssAssin (x2)// Face OF Death(KO)// Forcified// G-UnitDLT(KO)// DIV(KO)// Alpha Omega (5-0)// Dominion
          Defeats
          Dgree// Pistol Whip// Tennessee// KG tha Kid// Xternil// L'il Magician (x3)// Sniper113// BKJ1216(2)

          Respects go out to: Dgree, TO menice, To my crew of course, Tennesee (tight rapper), KG THA KID, Shaday's Lady (got her shit together), Famous420, $ilk & Jools(do ya thing Goup Home), RealPlatoon (ILL), Cre3P,

          Da Culprit's Audio Page

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          • #6
            uppin for feedback

            ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
            ..::ExterminateD::..

            |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

            |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
            |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
            |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
            |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
            |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
            |hero-KO|
            ==========================
            ..::Crew Battles::..
            The Franchize-K0
            ==========================
            ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
            |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
            ==========================
            ..::My Tracks::..
            ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
            ==========================
            Da kinky hoe
            Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

            Comment


            • #7
              yo cmon feedback would be nice ya no

              ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
              ..::ExterminateD::..

              |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

              |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
              |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
              |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
              |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
              |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
              |hero-KO|
              ==========================
              ..::Crew Battles::..
              The Franchize-K0
              ==========================
              ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
              |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
              ==========================
              ..::My Tracks::..
              ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
              ==========================
              Da kinky hoe
              Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

              Comment


              • #8
                uppin

                ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
                ..::ExterminateD::..

                |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

                |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
                |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
                |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
                |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
                |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
                |hero-KO|
                ==========================
                ..::Crew Battles::..
                The Franchize-K0
                ==========================
                ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
                |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
                ==========================
                ..::My Tracks::..
                ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
                ==========================
                Da kinky hoe
                Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

                Comment


                • #9
                  hey man, dope shit for real. as everyone else i was feelin the good structured and complex hook. Keep at it. The situation with our battle is a little unclear to me dawg. Lets talk on msn or something, cuz i don't want u to think i cheated.
                  Holla [email protected]
                  Snipe's MySpace
                  SONY BMG

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