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    *Sits Down Wit Pen & Paper*

    Fuck it... Here I Go...


    .: I was in primary SCHOOL, much TOO young TO have a fuckin' CLUE :.
    .: I was a fuckin' FOOL, standing by YOU, secretly hopin' you be mah BOO :.
    .: I was always COOL, I took care of YOU never makin' you feel BLUE :.
    .: Both swimmin' in ya POOL, you were happy, baby you know it's TRUE :.
    .: I had no MALICE, I never went off track wit you ALICE :.
    .: I'd have done anything for u, I'd have built a fuckin' PALACE :.
    .: But things got SAD, I bacame a poor LAD cuz we lost sight of EACHOTHER :.
    .: You may have been GLAD, I was MAD cuz of a stupid fight between our MOTHERS :.
    .: For many years, I kept you in mah MIND but only to FIND :.
    .: You didn't give a TOSS, I been payin' da COST, fuck I was BLIND :.
    .: Not long ago, I came back t you, wishin' you'd REMEMBER :.
    .: I recall it was a rainy monday in da first week of DECEMBER :.
    .: You'd changed, you was a woman, a beatiful GIRL :.
    .: We had FUN, that was DONE, you were willin' to cum back in mah WORLD :.
    .: But you still don't give a fuck bitch, and I hate you for THAT :.
    .: You've become the worst WHORE i ever SAW, treatin' me like a BRAT :.
    .: But I'll get you BACK, you don't want me bitch ? that's FINE :.
    .: But don't be suprised if one day I come at you and break ya SPINE :.
    .: Don't be suprised if every one of ya moves is translated in a rap LINE :.
    .: It's TIME for me to SHINE, so live in regret bitch and never gimme a SIGN... :.

    You heard me Alice, never come back Bitch...
    Last edited by MiLS; 04-20-2003, 10:26 AM.

    I won't fight... I won't even complain
    It's gone and it... can't be the same


    Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

  • #2
    Uppin for feedback... (plz)

    I won't fight... I won't even complain
    It's gone and it... can't be the same


    Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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    • #3
      hey yo mils dawg i liked that man its pretty dope dawg,much love ta ya dawg,1

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      • #4
        Thx man, really appreciate you peepin' my shit dawg... you alwayz there to gimme some feedback... much luv !

        Uppin for more feedback...

        I won't fight... I won't even complain
        It's gone and it... can't be the same


        Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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        • #5
          uppin

          I won't fight... I won't even complain
          It's gone and it... can't be the same


          Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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          • #6
            Please gimme feedback people... even if you think it's wack ! c'mon...

            I won't fight... I won't even complain
            It's gone and it... can't be the same


            Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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            • #7
              COME ON YALL DONT SLEEP ON THIS MAN,HE GIVES YOUR ASSES FEEDBACK/ONCE AGAIN MILS TIGHT VERSE KID 1

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              • #8
                aight dawg, thas ma boy, keepin tha shit up, tight shit dawg, mayb we can colab soon, wen i got time??
                LVC BS3

                -->Battle Record<--
                Wins: 25 (KOs: 17)


                (arguingsm

                -->SparxxMC Audio<--

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                • #9
                  C.A.L : lol, thx for second feedback and for tryin' to boost the peeps ! haha

                  SparxxMC : Yeah no pb man... whenever you ready dawg... thx for the feedback Remember we got a crew battle against RAW to do... you ready for that... jus tell me when you'll have time for a collab and the crew battle... mad luv homie !

                  Uppin fo' mo' feedback !

                  I won't fight... I won't even complain
                  It's gone and it... can't be the same


                  Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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                  • #10
                    Re: Alice (freestylin' my thoughts... feedback?)

                    Originally posted by MiLS

                    *Sits Down Wit Pen & Paper*

                    Fuck it... Here I Go...


                    .: I was in primary SCHOOL, much TOO young TO have a fuckin' CLUE :.
                    .: I was a fuckin' FOOL, standing by YOU, secretly hopin' you be mah BOO :.
                    .: I was always COOL, I took care of YOU never makin' you feel BLUE :.
                    .: Both swimmin' in ya POOL, you were happy, baby you know it's TRUE :.
                    .: I had no MALICE, I never went off track wit you ALICE :.
                    .: I'd have done anything for u, I'd have built a fuckin' PALACE :.
                    .: But things got SAD, I bacame a poor LAD cuz we lost sight of EACHOTHER :.
                    .: You may have been GLAD, I was MAD cuz of a stupid fight between our MOTHERS :.
                    .: For many years, I kept you in mah MIND but only to FIND :.
                    .: You didn't give a TOSS, I been payin' da COST, fuck I was BLIND :.
                    .: Not long ago, I came back t you, wishin' you'd REMEMBER :.
                    .: I recall it was a rainy monday in da first week of DECEMBER :.
                    .: You'd changed, you was a woman, a beatiful GIRL :.
                    .: We had FUN, that was DONE, you were willin' to cum back in mah WORLD :.
                    .: But you still don't give a fuck bitch, and I hate you for THAT :.
                    .: You've become the worst WHORE i ever SAW, treatin' me like a BRAT :.
                    .: But I'll get you BACK, you don't want me bitch ? that's FINE :.
                    .: But don't be suprised if one day I come at you and break ya SPINE :.
                    .: Don't be suprised if every one of ya moves is translated in a rap LINE :.
                    .: It's TIME for me to SHINE, so live in regret bitch and never gimme a SIGN... :.

                    You heard me Alice, never come back Bitch...
                    Great shit *thinkin why is there no one writin shit like this 2 me* (tha sweet part) ohhh wellll!!
                    Today is filled with anger, fueled with hidden hate.
                    Scared of being outkast, afraid of common fate.
                    Today is build on tragedies which no one want's to face.
                    Nightmares to humanity and morally disgraced.
                    Tonight is filled with Rage, violence in the air.
                    Children bred with ruthlessness cause no one at home cares.
                    Tonight I lay my head down but the pressure never stops,
                    knowing that my sanity content when I'm droped.
                    But tomorrow I see change, a chance to build a new,
                    build on spirit intent of heart and ideas based on truth.
                    Tomorrow I wake with second wind and strong because of pride.
                    I know I fought with all my heart to keep the dream alive.
                    BY TUPAC SHAKUR.

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                    • #11
                      Oh don't worry girl... someone sweet will cum to u no doubt... thx for da feedback... alwayz apprciated (even more from a femcee)

                      UPPIN for more feedback !

                      I won't fight... I won't even complain
                      It's gone and it... can't be the same


                      Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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                      • #12
                        Ur welcome Mils n no there wont
                        Today is filled with anger, fueled with hidden hate.
                        Scared of being outkast, afraid of common fate.
                        Today is build on tragedies which no one want's to face.
                        Nightmares to humanity and morally disgraced.
                        Tonight is filled with Rage, violence in the air.
                        Children bred with ruthlessness cause no one at home cares.
                        Tonight I lay my head down but the pressure never stops,
                        knowing that my sanity content when I'm droped.
                        But tomorrow I see change, a chance to build a new,
                        build on spirit intent of heart and ideas based on truth.
                        Tomorrow I wake with second wind and strong because of pride.
                        I know I fought with all my heart to keep the dream alive.
                        BY TUPAC SHAKUR.

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                        • #13
                          Why not girl ?

                          I won't fight... I won't even complain
                          It's gone and it... can't be the same


                          Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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                          • #14
                            Nuttin good ever happens thats why
                            Today is filled with anger, fueled with hidden hate.
                            Scared of being outkast, afraid of common fate.
                            Today is build on tragedies which no one want's to face.
                            Nightmares to humanity and morally disgraced.
                            Tonight is filled with Rage, violence in the air.
                            Children bred with ruthlessness cause no one at home cares.
                            Tonight I lay my head down but the pressure never stops,
                            knowing that my sanity content when I'm droped.
                            But tomorrow I see change, a chance to build a new,
                            build on spirit intent of heart and ideas based on truth.
                            Tomorrow I wake with second wind and strong because of pride.
                            I know I fought with all my heart to keep the dream alive.
                            BY TUPAC SHAKUR.

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                            • #15
                              Luck changes girl believe me ! much luvē

                              CAN I HAVE SOME FEEDBACK ON MAH SHIT ??

                              I won't fight... I won't even complain
                              It's gone and it... can't be the same


                              Dirty Dutchess - It's Over

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