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  • LIFE LESSONS (Sniper113 solo verse, feedback please)

    (Talkin) Yo there are so many bitches on this site who want beef, we'll let em have it. It's hard to notice the real people behind those lines, but they're here, they here, Dom,BD, Brick, King QB, whole of IOM, everyone i'm cool with, ya'll in. This is my nerve relief and ya'll who deserve it know it. Fuck ya'll

    I wanted to chill from battling, i took a BRAKE/
    next thing i see is FAKE gangsta ridinck my dick, swearing they was always there when i was baking the CAKE(metaphore)/
    but i couldm't just watch from the side, i couldn't RESIST/
    bitches like Verbal talk shit, then don't want beef, dawg I INSIST/
    or anotha ****** adds me on his LIST, it all gets me PISSED/
    Ya'll wave around the barrels but scared to fight with FISTS
    2 weeks on this board taught me whole life LESSONS/
    after 1 night of battling, i passed through my ADOLESONCE/
    believe me i got more skill in me than rhyming about Smith n WESSONS/
    I learned LESSONS life couldn't TEACH ME, who's my real dawg and who's just out to IMPEACH ME/
    Shit if we got beef, u know where to REACH ME/
    I'm tired of bitches doing SUBLIMINALS, say it to my face, talking shit don't make u CRIMINALS/
    u WEAK-pussies, can't even SPEAK u QUEEK like u was a fucken bird that no one has heared for over a WEEK/
    Fuck THA ILLEST u make me SICK, saying my name, bitch, i know u'z tryin to ride on my DICK/

    I'm screaming ya'll got me in a RAGE/
    I wouldn't finish expressing my anger if i was writting PAGE after PAGE/
    They tell me wisdom comes with AGE, but i got wise-DOM- together we get the mic ripped, all we need is a STAGE/

    Remember Darwin? let the fittest SURVIVE/
    cuz not after every battle, the strongest will stay ALIVE/
    a good dawg is gone, all his files left in the ARCHIVE
    So what's life worth if it can all be written on a piece of PAPER?/
    And if they got 2 lifes, they will be joined by a plastic STAPLER/

    I can pour sirup on this verse so it won't look like a DISS/
    But that would make me a fake rapper, like Benzino or BIS(canibus)/
    But if ya''ll didnt read than i'll tell you THIS:
    A little wind to a bullet, is a guaranteed MISS(methaphorically)/


    Aight ya'll that's just me releasing on paper everything that's going on round me now. PLEASE give me some FEEDBACK, it's my first solo verse lol
    Peace
    Last edited by sniper113; 04-21-2003, 01:23 PM.
    Snipe's MySpace
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  • #2
    dope verse man, keep the shit rollin
    Who would Jesus bomb, yea who would Jesus kill?
    The double talk is past surreal!

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    • #3
      uppin fo feedback, even if it sucks ya'll
      Snipe's MySpace
      SONY BMG

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      • #4
        Looks tight and thx for what you said
        Shout outs

        BIG proof-fayza-Dee-Annastasia(luv you homegurly)Daphne-Djaydee-Armand(to my concert chicks Anastasia-Semmy-Jet(it was nothing but fun with you girls)-Kady--Ryan-Lesley aka L-boogie-EL CHOMBO-ma1ne

        D12board shout outs
        Sniper
        Izzy
        Brook
        EMS_bitch
        Cap
        EMS_girl
        Aphyna
        Dom
        Brick
        Smashman
        Dominion(ur still cool)

        oh men who else???

        Luv ya all sweety's nomatter what peace

        And offcourse to all the dope people here on d12 world

        ps: Don't play with me

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        • #5
          yea that was some nice shit son
          *SacredSkriptZ*

          Dynasty
          Record
          46-4 (33 KOs)lllll lllll lllll lllll lllll lllll lll

          " crabs betta than bloods betta get dat out ya head, yea jordan wore blue to but he was a star in red"

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          • #6
            ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

















            I SMELL HOT SHIT...props
            "Playa I was born on Sugar Hill and raise on New Jack City//
            Grew up as a Boy N the Hood now Iíma Menace II Society" //
            ::Jae Millz::

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            • #7
              looks tight as in u haven't read it lol thanks BD, respect. Peace
              Snipe's MySpace
              SONY BMG

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              • #8
                Good shit man, good rhymes but U could've mayB squeeqed sum mo' multies in there but it woz still good
                www.myspace.com/treeuk

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                • #9
                  ur welcome
                  Shout outs

                  BIG proof-fayza-Dee-Annastasia(luv you homegurly)Daphne-Djaydee-Armand(to my concert chicks Anastasia-Semmy-Jet(it was nothing but fun with you girls)-Kady--Ryan-Lesley aka L-boogie-EL CHOMBO-ma1ne

                  D12board shout outs
                  Sniper
                  Izzy
                  Brook
                  EMS_bitch
                  Cap
                  EMS_girl
                  Aphyna
                  Dom
                  Brick
                  Smashman
                  Dominion(ur still cool)

                  oh men who else???

                  Luv ya all sweety's nomatter what peace

                  And offcourse to all the dope people here on d12 world

                  ps: Don't play with me

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                  • #10
                    yo King_of_qb, Joe, Aphyna, and Desert thank you all. it means a lot for me. i agree bout the multies, but i wasn't doing much style i tried to get shit off my chest u know. Thanks ya'll, appreciate it loads. Peace
                    Snipe's MySpace
                    SONY BMG

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                    • #11
                      is cool girl i'll call you tomorrow ok
                      Shout outs

                      BIG proof-fayza-Dee-Annastasia(luv you homegurly)Daphne-Djaydee-Armand(to my concert chicks Anastasia-Semmy-Jet(it was nothing but fun with you girls)-Kady--Ryan-Lesley aka L-boogie-EL CHOMBO-ma1ne

                      D12board shout outs
                      Sniper
                      Izzy
                      Brook
                      EMS_bitch
                      Cap
                      EMS_girl
                      Aphyna
                      Dom
                      Brick
                      Smashman
                      Dominion(ur still cool)

                      oh men who else???

                      Luv ya all sweety's nomatter what peace

                      And offcourse to all the dope people here on d12 world

                      ps: Don't play with me

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                      • #12
                        yeeeeee thats cool i'm comin with ya....
                        Shout outs

                        BIG proof-fayza-Dee-Annastasia(luv you homegurly)Daphne-Djaydee-Armand(to my concert chicks Anastasia-Semmy-Jet(it was nothing but fun with you girls)-Kady--Ryan-Lesley aka L-boogie-EL CHOMBO-ma1ne

                        D12board shout outs
                        Sniper
                        Izzy
                        Brook
                        EMS_bitch
                        Cap
                        EMS_girl
                        Aphyna
                        Dom
                        Brick
                        Smashman
                        Dominion(ur still cool)

                        oh men who else???

                        Luv ya all sweety's nomatter what peace

                        And offcourse to all the dope people here on d12 world

                        ps: Don't play with me

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                        • #13
                          uppin, hey girls don't turn my thread into your conversation please peace
                          Snipe
                          Snipe's MySpace
                          SONY BMG

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                          • #14
                            tite man...seriously keep it up
                            SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
                            +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

                            TURTLE POWA!!!
                            skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


                            BaTtLe ReCoRd=46-13 (33 KO'z)

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                            Master Minded=5-3||Protege420=KO||JbUdDeNz2k3=5-2||
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                            DIV=KO||Konkluzzion=5-4||BadBoyKila=KO||
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                            Jnr=KO||Shogun=KO||Narcotic Python=KO||
                            BeastX=4-1||Tenacity=KO||Capital P=10-6||
                            Noxshus=6-1||G-unit DLT=KO||Capital P=KO||
                            D-12 Jon Shady=KO||MC Fader=KO||Conceptz=5-4||
                            Killuminati=KO||rapgame=5-3||Jayí Anims=5-4||
                            Spookie=KO||Dgree=5-3||BIG BOY=KO||
                            C.A.L=5-3||CRYSTAL=KO||ChiTownsOwnMac=KO||
                            tab=KO||Noxshus=KO||BIG BOY=KO||
                            hot-Glock9=KO||Holl-a-kiss=5-3||Flex=KO||
                            KG a.k.a Skills=KO||Kanman=KO||Lil Magician=DQ/Biting


                            Cat & Skillz :~: 705 rep's :~:

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                            • #15
                              thanks CatInTheHat. means a lot. Peace and uppin for more feedback
                              Snipe's MySpace
                              SONY BMG

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