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  • Deep poem 'When Tomorrow Starts Without Me'

    just a poem i wrote....peace



    When tomorrow starts without me and I'm no longer there to see//
    If the sun should rise and find your eyes all filled with tears for me//
    I wish so much you wouldn't cry the way you did today//
    While thinking of the many things we didn't get to say//
    I know how much you love me, as much as I love you//
    And each time you think of me, I know you'll miss me too//
    But when tomorrow starts without me, please try to understand//
    That an angel came and called my name and took me by the hand//
    And said my place was ready in heaven far above//
    And that I'd have to leave behind all those I dearly love//
    But as I turned to walk away a tear fell from my eye//
    For all my life I'd always thought I didn't want to die//
    I had so much to live for, so much yet to do//
    It seemed almost impossible that I was leaving you//
    I thought of all the yesterdays, the good ones and the bad//
    I thought of all the love we shared and all the fun we had//
    If I could relive yesterday, just even for a while//
    I'd say goodby and hug you and maybe see you smile//
    But then I finally realised that this could never be//
    For emptiness and memories would take the place of me//
    And when I thought of worldly things I might miss come tomorrow//
    I thought of you, and when I did my heart filled with sorrow//
    But when I walked through heaven's gates, I felt so much at home//
    When God looked down and smiled at me from his great golden throne//
    He said, "This is eternity and all I've promised you”//
    Today for life on earth has passed but here it starts anew//
    I promise no tomorrows but today will always last//
    And since each day's the same day, there's no longing for the past//
    But you have been so faithful, so trusting and so true//
    Though there were times you did some things you knew you shouldn't do//
    But you have been forgiven and now at last you are free//
    So won't you take my hand and share my life with me//
    So when tomorrow starts without me, don't think we're far apart//
    For every time you think of me, I'm right there in your heart//
    SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
    +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

    TURTLE POWA!!!
    skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


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  • #2
    shit man it's so late here and this poem is so deep, so from what i understood from it in my present state of mind it was off da hook dawg. Great job
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    • #3
      lol thanks man....its about me dying basically...uppin
      SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
      +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

      TURTLE POWA!!!
      skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


      BaTtLe ReCoRd=46-13 (33 KO'z)

      BadBoyKila=KO||DJ Collosal=5-4||MC Pyro=KO||
      Master Minded=5-3||Protege420=KO||JbUdDeNz2k3=5-2||
      MC Dean=KO||Alkoholik=KO||MC Dean=KO||
      DIV=KO||Konkluzzion=5-4||BadBoyKila=KO||
      MC Dean=KO||~elixer~=KO||Dankazzsack=KO||
      Jnr=KO||Shogun=KO||Narcotic Python=KO||
      BeastX=4-1||Tenacity=KO||Capital P=10-6||
      Noxshus=6-1||G-unit DLT=KO||Capital P=KO||
      D-12 Jon Shady=KO||MC Fader=KO||Conceptz=5-4||
      Killuminati=KO||rapgame=5-3||Jay’ Anims=5-4||
      Spookie=KO||Dgree=5-3||BIG BOY=KO||
      C.A.L=5-3||CRYSTAL=KO||ChiTownsOwnMac=KO||
      tab=KO||Noxshus=KO||BIG BOY=KO||
      hot-Glock9=KO||Holl-a-kiss=5-3||Flex=KO||
      KG a.k.a Skills=KO||Kanman=KO||Lil Magician=DQ/Biting


      Cat & Skillz :~: 705 rep's :~:

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      • #4
        feedback wanted
        SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
        +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

        TURTLE POWA!!!
        skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


        BaTtLe ReCoRd=46-13 (33 KO'z)

        BadBoyKila=KO||DJ Collosal=5-4||MC Pyro=KO||
        Master Minded=5-3||Protege420=KO||JbUdDeNz2k3=5-2||
        MC Dean=KO||Alkoholik=KO||MC Dean=KO||
        DIV=KO||Konkluzzion=5-4||BadBoyKila=KO||
        MC Dean=KO||~elixer~=KO||Dankazzsack=KO||
        Jnr=KO||Shogun=KO||Narcotic Python=KO||
        BeastX=4-1||Tenacity=KO||Capital P=10-6||
        Noxshus=6-1||G-unit DLT=KO||Capital P=KO||
        D-12 Jon Shady=KO||MC Fader=KO||Conceptz=5-4||
        Killuminati=KO||rapgame=5-3||Jay’ Anims=5-4||
        Spookie=KO||Dgree=5-3||BIG BOY=KO||
        C.A.L=5-3||CRYSTAL=KO||ChiTownsOwnMac=KO||
        tab=KO||Noxshus=KO||BIG BOY=KO||
        hot-Glock9=KO||Holl-a-kiss=5-3||Flex=KO||
        KG a.k.a Skills=KO||Kanman=KO||Lil Magician=DQ/Biting


        Cat & Skillz :~: 705 rep's :~:

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        • #5
          real shit man, i liked how u dove deeper into the meanin of ya words, flowed nice, good vocab, good poem altogether, keep it up!!!
          p.s. check my poem in the poetry forum called "The Dream Of Reality" lol yup, had to plug it haha
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          • #6
            yea man i will check that later...thanks for the feedback but i still wasnt more...this is deep how cna yall sleep on this...you should be ashamed of yaselves.
            SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
            +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

            TURTLE POWA!!!
            skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


            BaTtLe ReCoRd=46-13 (33 KO'z)

            BadBoyKila=KO||DJ Collosal=5-4||MC Pyro=KO||
            Master Minded=5-3||Protege420=KO||JbUdDeNz2k3=5-2||
            MC Dean=KO||Alkoholik=KO||MC Dean=KO||
            DIV=KO||Konkluzzion=5-4||BadBoyKila=KO||
            MC Dean=KO||~elixer~=KO||Dankazzsack=KO||
            Jnr=KO||Shogun=KO||Narcotic Python=KO||
            BeastX=4-1||Tenacity=KO||Capital P=10-6||
            Noxshus=6-1||G-unit DLT=KO||Capital P=KO||
            D-12 Jon Shady=KO||MC Fader=KO||Conceptz=5-4||
            Killuminati=KO||rapgame=5-3||Jay’ Anims=5-4||
            Spookie=KO||Dgree=5-3||BIG BOY=KO||
            C.A.L=5-3||CRYSTAL=KO||ChiTownsOwnMac=KO||
            tab=KO||Noxshus=KO||BIG BOY=KO||
            hot-Glock9=KO||Holl-a-kiss=5-3||Flex=KO||
            KG a.k.a Skills=KO||Kanman=KO||Lil Magician=DQ/Biting


            Cat & Skillz :~: 705 rep's :~:

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            • #7
              damnnnnnn THAT WAS REAL DEEp

              i loved it fer real

              But when tomorrow starts without me, please try to understand//
              That an angel came and called my name and took me by the hand//

              -----
              If I could relive yesterday, just even for a while//
              I'd say goodby and hug you and maybe see you smile//
              But then I finally realised that this could never be//
              For emptiness and memories would take the place of me//
              ----
              And when I thought of worldly things I might miss come tomorrow//
              I thought of you, and when I did my heart filled with sorrow//

              yaa that was the hottness ... whole thing was great keeps it up
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              • #8
                thanks man...uppin
                SkRiPtZ iLlEsT CrEaTeD
                +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

                TURTLE POWA!!!
                skeptikal ~ h2o...HyiGh II ~ Da-SaVioR ~ Spoken ~ Dominion ~ Aphyna ~ bachaka61 ~ Div ~ ShadyGirl ~ CatInTheHat


                BaTtLe ReCoRd=46-13 (33 KO'z)

                BadBoyKila=KO||DJ Collosal=5-4||MC Pyro=KO||
                Master Minded=5-3||Protege420=KO||JbUdDeNz2k3=5-2||
                MC Dean=KO||Alkoholik=KO||MC Dean=KO||
                DIV=KO||Konkluzzion=5-4||BadBoyKila=KO||
                MC Dean=KO||~elixer~=KO||Dankazzsack=KO||
                Jnr=KO||Shogun=KO||Narcotic Python=KO||
                BeastX=4-1||Tenacity=KO||Capital P=10-6||
                Noxshus=6-1||G-unit DLT=KO||Capital P=KO||
                D-12 Jon Shady=KO||MC Fader=KO||Conceptz=5-4||
                Killuminati=KO||rapgame=5-3||Jay’ Anims=5-4||
                Spookie=KO||Dgree=5-3||BIG BOY=KO||
                C.A.L=5-3||CRYSTAL=KO||ChiTownsOwnMac=KO||
                tab=KO||Noxshus=KO||BIG BOY=KO||
                hot-Glock9=KO||Holl-a-kiss=5-3||Flex=KO||
                KG a.k.a Skills=KO||Kanman=KO||Lil Magician=DQ/Biting


                Cat & Skillz :~: 705 rep's :~:

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                • #9
                  that shit was tight man. i likes that. i didnt ever think i could be moved by any ***** on this board. much love.
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