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  • To all ya whores dedicated...(Please Feedback)

    It's my 1 rhyme at this site, hope you like it, express your opinions, I'll be waitin', *****z...


    Where you at, ya sucking whore,
    Come over here and give me some more.
    Like when you do a blowjob lying on the floor,
    Itís just so swell, youíre working for the ***** dough.

    Moving on to the bed, feeling the flow,
    Yeah, yeah, letís get it on.
    Iím all up for tight pussy penetrating,
    *****s are better at this that simple masturbating.

    Sex time rules Ďcause thereís just no such fun as this,
    You get the chance of touching a clit with your lips.
    Oh, did I forget to mention squeezing tits,
    And still trying to stick it real deep while the bitch jumps on it and screams.

    Finish it up, ah-ah, shit, Iím cooked,
    Hey, whore, fuck off, dream about getting money from a playa, hereís an option Ė you can get your ass whooped.
    There you go, run, thatís smart,
    Getting away from trouble while being weak and saving your ass Ė I guess youíre not a retard.

    On the other hand, you will come back,
    And in a while continue to suck cock.
    Blowjob is still a job,
    Even though you get beaten up and shot at all over town.

  • #2
    LOL funny shit dawg, respect and Keep it up bro. I bet we be seeing more good ish from ya soon. Peace
    Snipe's MySpace
    SONY BMG

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    • #3
      good creativity man nice flow work on making your rhymes more complexed though they're too simple, don't take it as an insult it's just constructive criticism
      Signature are useless.

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      • #4
        U SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERES THE GUN.........JUST PULL THA TRIGGER

        .:The Dynasty:.
        It's Like That Sonny

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        • #5
          HAHAHA dawg don't listen To Ten yo, he's a pro. Dawg give this dude a credit he's a rook. And yo what do i gotta do for u to put feedback on my ish DAWG. lol Peace
          Snipe's MySpace
          SONY BMG

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          • #6
            lmao...im just kidding dogg...nice stuff....funny too...keep elevatin...sure sniper...wheres some of your stuff ?

            .:The Dynasty:.
            It's Like That Sonny

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            • #7
              LOL Ten, cheers. I have a solo verse i wrote yday out of anger and i do battles, maybe you'll vot some time. Peace
              Snipe's MySpace
              SONY BMG

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              • #8
                Uppin' for more feedback!!!

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