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  • 4 verses of confusion

    yo, I just wanted to write sumthin and thats what came out, its more like a freestyle, cause I just wrote. Please feedback

    My words fall down on ya/ like heavy rain drops
    Insane like I do not/ care about hip hop
    I drop my tracks/ so you notice that im back
    To get the respect that I earn/ for wreckin the rest
    My words land in ya chest/ and cause a main damage
    Its nessecary for the planet/ to see my advantage
    Can it be/ that I aint allowed to be me
    Donít you see that I flee/ from the pain that you causin here
    We are free/ so that we can do what we wanna do
    What would you gonna do/ when everybodys gonna sue
    You wit the intention/ to be dancin
    On your grave/ you apologize now itís a lil late
    Feel the hate/ that I feel maybe than you feel my skill
    Taste the pill than your as ill as me/ and than you will
    Know what its like/ to be hated and white
    Naked and blind/ getting laughed at all your life

    The flow comes outta me/ Im as loud as I can be
    Plan b, I make it louder/ yeah Im proud to be
    From the Frisco/ what ya think about checkin this yo
    I got no doubt/ nothins hotter than this flow
    I gotta diss yo/ theres really no way out
    This layout/ no doubt, itís the pay out
    This here is a mastermpiece/ faster than disaster of peace
    I rather bother you/ wit tellin you to please
    Keep out/ of the things you cant handle
    Defend ya/ but you be burned down like a candle
    And will/ get smashed back to the whole youre comin from
    Cause youre trash im stunnin you/ youll keep less than none of ya
    Brain cause Im too insane/ to let you get away wit that
    I say it like that/ yall shut your face or I hit back
    The counter strike/ wil be like goin through the night without light
    No mercy during the fight/ your victorys outta sight


    Yeah maybe/ yall just come to think about the message
    Less rage against me/ man Im fuckin restless
    You guessed it/ but belive me I aint finished
    Rap, I been in it always/ think about, what a sin is
    Cant you just leave/ me alone, are you too phony
    Im a grown person/ Im on earth and yall owe me
    And you trina blow me/ wit all the hate against me
    Use your fancy cause you cant see/ that Im an excellent MC
    Damn he/ is just a fabolous rapper
    I just wanna hear that/ be back wit the respect ya
    Wont let it be/ but clearly yall see
    How fuckin mean I can be/ when it comes to leave me
    Indeed, lemme show you/ that Im commin for you
    Everybody gonna get their ass whipped/ even before you
    Be able to say dat/ yall didnít mean to offend me
    I say be all you can be/ kill me or represent me


    Not everythins said/ and Im not dead yet
    Ima rhyme till I pass out/ or until I am fed
    Up wit this whole shit/ yo, I could quit
    Admit that Im shit/ and go back to my pit
    Or I just keep spittin/ and goin on like that
    Fight back/ like that and find out where yo at
    Cause Im mad/ and I face you and say whut I gotta say
    You better pray/ cause now its time for you to pay
    Back for all the shit/ you ever done to me
    Free your mind/ cause you donít need it when you see me
    Yall listen to my words/ I spread my voice round the whole globe ya
    I aint dissin but Im back/ the bad times are over
    Who would Jesus bomb, yea who would Jesus kill?
    The double talk is past surreal!

  • #2
    u-u-u-u-uppin
    Who would Jesus bomb, yea who would Jesus kill?
    The double talk is past surreal!

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    • #3
      DEEP stuff man, i luv it, the last verse is DA BOMB< keep at it, IOM forever dawg. Peace much luv
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      • #4
        thanks for the constructive feedback bro

        uppin
        Who would Jesus bomb, yea who would Jesus kill?
        The double talk is past surreal!

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        • #5
          looks tight brick realy tight tight tight
          Shout outs

          BIG proof-fayza-Dee-Annastasia(luv you homegurly)Daphne-Djaydee-Armand(to my concert chicks Anastasia-Semmy-Jet(it was nothing but fun with you girls)-Kady--Ryan-Lesley aka L-boogie-EL CHOMBO-ma1ne

          D12board shout outs
          Sniper
          Izzy
          Brook
          EMS_bitch
          Cap
          EMS_girl
          Aphyna
          Dom
          Brick
          Smashman
          Dominion(ur still cool)

          oh men who else???

          Luv ya all sweety's nomatter what peace

          And offcourse to all the dope people here on d12 world

          ps: Don't play with me

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