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    Yo I'm workin on a new style. Here's a exhibition battle with untouch ab

    untouchab you need some fuckign re-hab, it's like you on Mr. T's gab, when you spit all i hear is jibber-jab/
    your trying to gaine something that you've never had, your just so fucking sad, your ass is still on that quitter-fad/(fad is a trend)
    i've beat you once i could do it again, i koed you and your little friend, let me tell everyone what really-happend/
    you were talking a bunch of shit just havin your lips smackin, your ass was just plain beggin for a slapin, that's when me and magician got the steely-clappin/
    you spit some plain pathetic shit, chitwon try lieing say i rushed it, but we could all see through his wack-bit/
    your little dimpy verse just couldn't hack it, your main problem is that you lack spit, we all know you can't rhyme jack-shit/
    and now your back to be embarrassed even more, reading your rhymes is like a fucking chore, i don't wanna be put through that bad-of-bore/
    my lyrics will be embed in your head forever more, blood oozing out of the hole in your skull they bore, now how's that for a tad-of-gore/
    now it's time to give 2 bars to spray, i love doing it this brand new way, gonna load the clip-in-the-ak/
    have bullets flying every which way, if your smart you won't test me (dont' throw your life away), this is a tip-in-from-BKJ/

    what you guys think? tell me what i need to work on, i thinkt he style itself is pretty self explanitory
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    yo i think it's tight there is a good flow to ur lyrics
    can u vote fairly on my battles with mills and tha_virus?
    peace out
    ~{DiNo}~
    ~{latest battle}~
    ~{Bdizzle-3-0(ko)}~

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    • #3
      no because i hate you lol j/k yeah sure i'll try to get aorund to it
      Signature are useless.

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      • #4
        chears peace out
        ~{DiNo}~
        ~{latest battle}~
        ~{Bdizzle-3-0(ko)}~

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        • #5
          ya im also needin votes in my battle wit slim shadys its been 3 days grrrr

          ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
          ..::ExterminateD::..

          |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

          |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
          |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
          |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
          |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
          |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
          |hero-KO|
          ==========================
          ..::Crew Battles::..
          The Franchize-K0
          ==========================
          ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
          |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
          ==========================
          ..::My Tracks::..
          ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
          ==========================
          Da kinky hoe
          Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

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