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  • Climbing A Mountain (Poetry, Feedback Plz)

    I climbed the D12 mountain, blinded by fog and midst
    KO after KO, with a guard high with cocked fist
    Came as a nobody, but now im pretty well known
    As i called out name after name. to finally reach the throne
    I never asked if the crown fit, its the people that placed it on-me
    I was accepted by a crew, but i still felt lon-ley
    Im a lightining bolt, but was built up as a hurri-cane
    The Nas of text-ceeing, yea, you heard-of-my-name
    Theres 2 parts to a battle, the victory and the de-feat
    Winning feels great, loosing hurts, i see why peeps-cheat
    No one wants to be told "Hey your rhymes aint dope-tenn"
    But in your brain after writing, it was so perfect after you wrote-them
    On my journey of climbing the mountain, ive seen lots-of-things
    Friendships broke, friendships made, pure drama, and what-it-brings
    I seen a person I admirred and respect, turn on me like-that
    Seen another friend get pushed to his limit, till he had to fight-back
    Ive been told to burn in hell, than dissed in many free-styles
    One day seen a crew form, next day, seen tha same team-fall
    I seen a greaty attitude, next day bad, than seen it get worse
    Seen someone beg for votes on battle, than 200 views when i spit a verse
    I seen a kid drop a rap, without a chance, he was labeled whack
    Got laughed at trying to battle, cuz people thought you had to be black
    reached a milestone not many did, got all the way to 70 wins
    on top of the world, than just like that, depression, now whos here to help Tenn
    I still climbed the mountain, and finally made it to tha top
    Until there was no more hills to climb and your body is forced to stop
    Once you go up, down is the only other option you-have
    than you see threads from little kids, beggin to get in a crew-bad
    When your number 1, thinks are terrible, everybody tries to take a shot
    Your friends dont look like your friends, they want what you got
    It's too hard to say good-byes, the only way is to diss-a-pear
    you never thought you'd see the day, live the day, when this-was-near
    Ive climbed tha mountain, and its harsh, i cant stand when the wind blows
    They all love you when you win, but its all fake, so u climb down and go

    .:The Dynasty:.
    It's Like That Sonny

  • #2
    thank ya man...and thanx for reading it all..most peeps just skim thru stuff...but thanx again

    .:The Dynasty:.
    It's Like That Sonny

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    • #3
      what da fuck ***** i thought u ain't have time ta battle but u got time for dis man u scared jus say it u scared
      Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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      • #4
        Hey that was really good
        [color=sky blue]~*Battle Record*~[/color]

        ShadyLuv (KO) 99.999% (KO)

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        • #5
          ain't u dis bitches sister?
          Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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          • #6
            thx 4 da feedback cap and manduh...and skep..we wasnt going to text battle...but audio battle..and i dont wanna do that nemore...but thx 4 da feedback yall

            .:The Dynasty:.
            It's Like That Sonny

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            • #7
              yeah like i thought u scared little hoe it's cool
              Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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              • #8
                oh is that right..well here i'll give you something to beef over aiight

                why dont i stand you behind your dad so when i pull tha trigger u can both go to hell....how you like that playboy....

                .:The Dynasty:.
                It's Like That Sonny

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                • #9
                  Hey skep didn't tenn already beat you??
                  [color=sky blue]~*Battle Record*~[/color]

                  ShadyLuv (KO) 99.999% (KO)

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                  • #10
                    um bout 4mounths ago when i first came here in like my 1st ever text battle
                    Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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                    • #11
                      funny thing was it was when i first came on here too...hes just a bitch fuck him...a lil wayne rip off lol

                      .:The Dynasty:.
                      It's Like That Sonny

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                      • #12
                        um dude u would never kill me u be dead befor u got close to me
                        Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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                        • #13
                          again wit da lil wyane shit man what dat fuck dat ain't a diss get over it nobody has ever heard u spit on a beat man when we do then u can talk about my voice
                          Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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                          • #14
                            oh thats right...your a bad ass huh...is ths tha same pussy that IMed me crying cuz we went into war and he thought he was getting drafted lmao

                            .:The Dynasty:.
                            It's Like That Sonny

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                            • #15
                              oh yeah der ya go better now try stop fuckin ya hand so much den we can talk
                              Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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