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  • Got Eyes On You- Marr [Song Soon To Be Audio]

    i wrote this in 30 minutes today... will be a audio tommorow or sonner... its gunna have tupac's All Eyes On Me beat and the chorus is gunna be similar... im not too imperessed wit the lyrics so dont be like its coo but the lyrics aint great cuz im not tryin to impress u wit em... the song's for me really... not to imperess ya... and i jus dont want a "That was hot... go vote in my battle" cuz i kno u really read it... if u jus gunna say "thats hot" and nottin else then jus do that but i really want constructive critizim or tips or some shit... or tell me what u like and dont...

    Im statin a couple of things and askin one type question
    cuz to me its seems like knowin you so long is a life long blessin
    unlike others, emotions flow around me wit a glimpse of ya eyes
    wit curves and a smile that will make 1 become hypnotized
    those lonely dayz wit out some one to hold and keep in my sight
    emotions that make me toss and turn for hours durin the night
    wit temptations and sins that are worth the consequences
    jus wonderin if i can touch some of those types of places
    sayin things jus to make u smile, keepin it hidden all the while
    to me, bein wit a girl like you is truly a god-sent blessin
    u look past the thug image and see the inner essence
    cuz im speakin straight from my heart, and it wont lie-to-u
    u the 1 girl, the only 1 that im able to look eye-to-eye-to
    u the one that makes me feel like somethin when i am nothin
    and u the one and only girl that i can truly say im lovin
    a rhythmical expression to show the way that i feel inside
    jus one question to answer... are u willin to coincide ???

    [*chorus*]
    Still askin fo a soul-mate, how long will it take ?
    lookin fo a shortie to hold wit nice thick legs

    Got Eyes On You

    Brown eyes, thick thighs, that will ride till i die
    1 to be there when i cry, 1 to hold next my side

    Got Eyes On You

    Still askin fo a soul-mate, how long will it take ?
    lookin fo a shortie to hold wit nice thick legs

    Got Eyes On You

    Brown eyes, thick thighs, that will ride till i die
    1 to be there when i cry, 1 to hold next my side

    Got Eyes On You
    [*chorus*]

    Livin life in the fast lane speedin past envious enimies
    But enuff love to push it aside and make u my center peice
    i'll do what u want, all i need some guidance and patience
    i jus want u to be there when i go to court for violence cases
    use my tongue when u want it,i'll do what u want aslong as u taught it
    dress you in pearls dimonds and riches so u can fluant it
    as long as we do them freaky things then its gunna be all good
    if i got problems jus be there for me and i'll understand u understood
    and i'll be there to dry ya eye, and treat u like it was our last night
    be there to keep ya head up, cuz we live once, there aint no next life
    we'll fly coast to coast in minutes, put our feet up and watch the sun
    drive on dubs and sip on crys, and then ya give birth to my son
    keep u warm under my arm, make u smile wit my charm
    get down on 1 knee, and have the ring hidden in my palm
    trust me girl, my heart lie, im jus sayin how i feel inside
    jus one question... are u willin to coincide ???

    [*chorus*]

    i got eyes on ya, ride wit me, from jersey down to cailfornia
    i tol ya im gunna be wit u foreva girl, i aint gunna eva disown ya
    jus tell me ya dreams, tell me everything, aint nottin gunna in between
    u and me, when i hit them back shots, and make ya moan and scream
    tell me baby girl, yell baby girl, and i'll let u kno u my world
    i gave ya gucci minks boots and leather, and round ya neck ya got a bunch of pearls
    i gave ya keys, cars, jus to show how much i care about you baby
    i kno u sincere, so i aint gunna ever doubt u baby, i couldnt live witout u lady
    its all for you, aint nottin fo me, i jus wanna hold and cuddle in the dark
    i wanna get kno who u are, and maybe do somethin in the backseat of the car
    i wanna wake up and have u there right next me sleepin silent
    we could be like the whitney and bobby jus wit out all the violence
    im writin love letters wonderin if eva gunna write back,
    i kno ya fatha gunna find them but spite that, cuz if we got problems i'll fight back
    come ride wit me and dont eva leve until i die
    jus one question... are u willin to coincide ???


    here we go....
    I'm so far ahead of my time
    I'm about to start another life
    Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



    - Jay-z

  • #2
    Anyways even if your sayin you dont want people sayin' "That's Hot" and shit, I'll go ahead and tell you that it was hot, lol. Nah fo real. I'm eager to hear this in audio.....Oh and good luck fo da audio tourney
    WOOOORD FAM

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    • #3
      thanks man... but i tol swift that im out of it so i concentrate on the crew tourney... if we lose then im down wit the audio tourney....
      I'm so far ahead of my time
      I'm about to start another life
      Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



      - Jay-z

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      • #4
        feelin dis i like the lil concept creative keep elevatin and yeah i am lookin forward to hearing this on audio damn im bout to read it again iight b ez

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        • #5
          Jersey City What UP?!!? haha... thanks... im really apreicatin it....
          I'm so far ahead of my time
          I'm about to start another life
          Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



          - Jay-z

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          • #6
            []_[][]D[]D[][]\[]"....
            I'm so far ahead of my time
            I'm about to start another life
            Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



            - Jay-z

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            • #7
              damn i forgot how it was to get a response here....
              I'm so far ahead of my time
              I'm about to start another life
              Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



              - Jay-z

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              • #8
                told me to peep this and my man ... this is my type of shit
                great work on it! ... flowed perfect!

                unlike others, emotions flow around me wit a glimpse of ya eyes
                wit curves and a smile that will make 1 become hypnotized
                those lonely dayz wit out some one to hold and keep in my sight
                emotions that make me toss and turn for hours durin the night

                that flowed the best ... u statin shit all guys go threw!feelin it

                cuz im speakin straight from my heart, and it wont lie-to-u
                u the 1 girl, the only 1 that im able to look eye-to-eye-to

                love the word play at the end! ... hotness ... every guy used that line on his boo!good shit!

                Brown eyes, thick thighs, that will ride till i die
                1 to be there when i cry, 1 to hold next my side

                I love this part of the chorus ... feels like somethin I would say! nice!

                use my tongue when u want it,i'll do what u want aslong as u taught it
                dress you in pearls dimonds and riches so u can fluant it

                anotha hot flowin bar ... loved this at ease to reed and ill!

                keep u warm under my arm, make u smile wit my charm
                get down on 1 knee, and have the ring hidden in my palm

                thats some romantic shit right there my man ... hotness

                i got eyes on ya, ride wit me, from jersey down to cailfornia
                i tol ya im gunna be wit u foreva girl, i aint gunna eva disown ya

                probably my favourite bar! ... love the way both lines ended!

                i wanna wake up and have u there right next me sleepin silent
                we could be like the whitney and bobby jus wit out all the violence

                hot cause everybody relates to it ... and that would be a perfect relationship!...could choice for compering!

                overall hotness man sorry had to say it ... I feel shit like this
                make sure to tell Brook when this is put up in audio ... sorry for the extremely long post

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                Bro0kLyn

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                • #9
                  EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWww
















































                  HOT SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't sleep on dis people....great song
                  "Playa I was born on Sugar Hill and raise on New Jack City//
                  Grew up as a Boy N the Hood now Ima Menace II Society" //
                  ::Jae Millz::

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                  • #10
                    brook's post is prolly exactly what i wanted... maybe even more... and thanks creep... listen to creep.. DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!! and i like said... this wasnt for ya to to be soo impressed wit it was like a personal thing but i guess i could put it fo show... uppin....
                    I'm so far ahead of my time
                    I'm about to start another life
                    Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



                    - Jay-z

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                    • #11
                      thanks clue... uppin....
                      I'm so far ahead of my time
                      I'm about to start another life
                      Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



                      - Jay-z

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                      • #12
                        Nice ish Marr dawg....Sorry i wasn't around for the crew tourny...I've been doin a lil' audio....and i bruised my knee some...but im aight now...

                        but that was some nice shit ! SJ is gonna make a slow comback and whoop some ass!
                        Jr. Mafia
                        ' SkInZ '
                        Swift


                        Pawned

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                        Roger Rabbit on Yo Ass , Bitch"

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                        • #13
                          word... uppin....
                          I'm so far ahead of my time
                          I'm about to start another life
                          Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



                          - Jay-z

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                          • #14
                            up....
                            I'm so far ahead of my time
                            I'm about to start another life
                            Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



                            - Jay-z

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