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  • Sumthin I Wrote...

    this i worte while listenign to nas "one mic"... so ya knwo how it go

    ummm its connected alot to NIRVANA... if ya dont know who that is... go stab yourself

    i actually liked this so....
    READ IT DAMMIT OR DIE
    note: everything in red is like a nirvana song...

    Pull away the curtains of my life so it is on public display//
    Reveal the deepest, darkest part of my life before I die and decay//
    Feelings from being betrayed and led astray some ill take to my grave//
    Knowing so many things that others dont know about me as I rot away//
    Intoxicated with thoughts and words of the great Kurt Cobain//
    Let the music blow my mind with inspiration or yet blow my brains// (ya know how he supposedly shot himself in the head... CORTNEY LOVE DID IT)
    The root of every evil deed or wrongdoing is in a sinners mind//
    Its a temple, a sanctum, a sanctuary, as extraordinary as God is divine//
    Retrace the footsteps of me and Jesus walking in the sand//("footprints" favorite poem)
    Interrogate God for all the answers so finally maybe ill understand//
    Brainwashed by Cobainism so I rape life for all its worthwhile//(cobainism is just a fan term...)
    Maybe for just a smile or two to change my mood that is so versatile//
    I feel like I could just self-destruct with all this inner turmoil//
    So bothered and irritated from my own thoughts that I just boil//
    My mind just explodes when my inspiration is in bloom //
    I want to see the brighter side of things but my life is just gloom//
    Living a life of falling in holes that have bottomless pits//
    Emotionally shredded to bits from being so scared outta my wits//
    I embrace life with open arms but I dont have a grasp on reality//
    So lost and confused in my head that it completely fucks my mentality//
    Bleach my life of every word, mistake just start with a clean slate//
    Soul search till I find myself and still wont be in a safe mindstate//
    Feelings and emotions that could make me scream and break glass//
    So much hurt and pain I doubt it will ever pass it will just forever last//
    How could I be deeply connected with strangers who know how I feel//
    not afraid to tell them anything about me and everything I conceal//

    ^^^^damn right D12 WORLD


    blah blah whatever... yeah finished... didnt feel as if i could keep goin

    tell me whatcha liked or just what ya think
    ặmōů420


    ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
    ... Empty ...
    ... Suicide ...
    ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
    ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
    ... Deceased ...
    ... Reminisce ...
    ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


    AOL: pinkpanther72089
    MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

  • #2
    deep.............feelin it
    "Playa I was born on Sugar Hill and raise on New Jack City//
    Grew up as a Boy N the Hood now Ima Menace II Society" //
    ::Jae Millz::

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    • #3
      deeper than 6 feet... ill ill shit boom... u've grown so much...lol... tight... i fuckin loved it... good vocab nice flow and topic was on point... sick verse... keep it up....
      I'm so far ahead of my time
      I'm about to start another life
      Look behind you, I'm about to pass you twice



      - Jay-z

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      • #4
        ill shit syd,,,,,props,,keep up the hot shit girl

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        • #5
          ya thanks mar!! ya im still da BOOM! yaa thanks to you you taught me lots long time ago.. i neva wouldda knew what a multi was if it wasnt for you lol yeah of course im keepn it up... thankies

          yaa thanks lyricalassasin see what you left when ya left ER??? j/p thanks muchies sweetY!!
          ặmōů420


          ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
          ... Empty ...
          ... Suicide ...
          ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
          ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
          ... Deceased ...
          ... Reminisce ...
          ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


          AOL: pinkpanther72089
          MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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          • #6
            Bleach my life of every word, mistake just start with a clean slate//
            Soul search till I find myself and still wont be in a safe mindstate//

            Yo Yo Yo Yo Yo Yo Yo Yo Yo

            nice shit syd eveen tjoe i'm out the board i still got to tell you that it was nice and that i love you and give you propz

            muah peace out syd and peace out D12
            Lyrical Mafia



            | Capital P | Brooklyn | Deep | Aphyna | Lil magician | Hero| Funk | Famous| Concepts
            | Shadygirl | PurePlaya | Marr | Dgree | Nautical |

            Battle Record
            92 Wins 75 KO's

            Spanxter (5-1)--Spanxster (KO)--Forc1fied (KO)--Yomamas (KO)--Shadylove313 (5-4)--Valley All-Star (KO)--Valley All-Star (5-1)-- Elhada (KO)-- Dirty Irish (KO)--2-Swifty (KO)-- KG The Kid (KO)--Noone (KO)--Skeptikal (KO)-- Young Gotie (5-3)-- Noone (KO)--0oSlim**Miami (KO)--D12 Member (KO)--Hallaatatlanta (KO)--Madicineman (KO)--Hack (KO)--2-Swifty (5-1)--J_Mac (5-1)--Tiger (KO)--Mc Joost (KO)--Dark Blaze (5-1)--Mack Tee(5-1)--Pepino (4-0 ko)--nine eight (3-0)--Big Boy (4-0)--eminem12345--mc dean(10-3)--Da Culprit (5-3)--dominion= (5-3)--The real platoon!=(ko)--Dirteminded82=(5-2)--ChitownsMackM=(ko)--SparxxMC=(KO)--180=(KO)--C.A.L=(KO)--Quiet Riot=(KO)--Tenacity=(4-0)--lost my self=(5-0)--Mc Pyro=(6-1)--Da_Culprit=(5-3)--desertree313=(6-1)--untouchab=(KO)--chitownMackM=(ko)--untouchab=(KO)--Jay' aims=(ko)--dirteminded82=(KO)--Japunka$$=(ko)--Dino=(KO)--hallaatatlanta=(KO)--$money flow$=(ko)--skeptikal=(5-4)--G-Unit_DLT=(7-1)--E.C.A.A.T=(KO)--$money flows$=(ko)--catinthehat=(KO)--Rip~Da~Jacka=(ko)--Elhada=(ko)--Hero=(6-4)--R-P-A=(5-2)--Cutty=(ko)--D12- Jon=(KO)--Pawl Dirty=(6-4)--King Of Qb =(KO)--Jack-Frost=(Ko)--goph dogg=(ko)--KidC=(5-1)--Black Knigh=(ko)--Dgree=(5-4)--Money Maker=(ko)--Div=(ko)--Provokotive=(ko)--The Curse=(5-3)--Hero=(ko)--Da Culprit=(Ko)--G-Unit DLT=(Ko)--ASHYB=(KO)--G-Unit_DLT=(KO)--Div=(KO)--untouchab=(KO)--trioofsixes=(KO)--Shadow Killa=(Ko)--dalet2k=(KO)--hallaatatlanta=(KO)--Kg tha Kid=(4-1)--Lyrical Compact=(Ko)--TheRealPlatoon!=(5-3)

            2 Losses
            Therealplatoon=(KO)--Urban AKA=(4-5)

            ___________________________________________
            D12 WORLD CHAMPION
            ___________________________________________
            Triple T.H. Champions
            **Lil Magician, Tennessee, 2-Swifty**

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            • #7
              My mind just explodes when my inspiration is in bloom //
              I want to see the brighter side of things but my life is just gloom//
              Living a life of falling in holes that have bottomless pits//
              Emotionally shredded to bits from being so scared outta my wits//
              I embrace life with open arms but I dont have a grasp on reality//
              So lost and confused in my head that it completely fucks my mentality//
              Bleach my life of every word, mistake just start with a clean slate//
              Soul search till I find myself and still wont be in a safe mindstate//


              This part i was readin and thinkin damn this girl does alot of hardcore
              thinking. Very impressive. The whole thing was very good.
              Remember Big Proof

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              • #8
                thankies Lit!!!!!

                ima dumbshit but i can actually think if i write sumthin
                ặmōů420


                ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
                ... Empty ...
                ... Suicide ...
                ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
                ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
                ... Deceased ...
                ... Reminisce ...
                ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


                AOL: pinkpanther72089
                MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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                • #9
                  nice shit girl

                  ..::Battle Record::.. ..::19-3::..
                  ..::ExterminateD::..

                  |The Emcee Falcon-KO||SicjonnyB-Ko| |Sho-Gun-KO|

                  |Xternil-5-3||Aphyna-KO||Sho-Gun(round 2)-KO|
                  |Phase1-KO||DirtyDiabolic-5-2||Jay'Anims-KO|
                  |SlimShadyz-5-2||Pistol Whip-KO||$ilk-5-4|
                  |Div-KO||Hallaatatlanta-5-1||japunka$$-KO|
                  |Lit-KO||XLrhymes||Hero|
                  |hero-KO|
                  ==========================
                  ..::Crew Battles::..
                  The Franchize-K0
                  ==========================
                  ..::Props ToThe Illest::..
                  |Assassin| |R-izzy|[|Tennessee||Ems girl|Lil Magician|
                  ==========================
                  ..::My Tracks::..
                  ..Dont Push Me v2.0..Implicit..Nautical feat..Untouchab..A-mode
                  ==========================
                  Da kinky hoe
                  Shortys |Rpg||Untouchab|

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                  • #10
                    thanks untouchab...

                    any mo.. shannon im still waitn lol
                    ặmōů420


                    ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
                    ... Empty ...
                    ... Suicide ...
                    ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
                    ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
                    ... Deceased ...
                    ... Reminisce ...
                    ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


                    AOL: pinkpanther72089
                    MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

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                    • #11
                      "i feel anger in the force" u ok damn u sem a little mad mabe u should sit down for a min and and nice verse liked it
                      Shout to all da ppl i luv and da ppl dat luv me back

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                      • #12
                        hhaaha im aight
                        tho much much anger , i dont got no one to talk to bout shit.. so that peice of paper gets the shit beat outta it
                        Last edited by Famous420; 04-28-2003, 04:58 AM.
                        ặmōů420


                        ... The Perfect Murder Ft. EmsGirl69 ...
                        ... Empty ...
                        ... Suicide ...
                        ... Water & Blood Ft. Capital P ...
                        ... Serial Killers Ft. Punchline ...
                        ... Deceased ...
                        ... Reminisce ...
                        ... Obscurity Ft. Capital P & Dominion ...


                        AOL: pinkpanther72089
                        MSN: colorblinde[email protected]

                        Comment


                        • #13
                          yo that mad deep ma kepp it up
                          JU FUCKIN MARICON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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