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  • Rate My Skills From This One Verse

    yah i know its hard to determine with only 1 verse, but i want some oppinions on where you guys think i stand as far as a 1-10 scale...

    heres something i wrote up dissin 2 peeps about 10 min. ago...

    peep this...

    Hobez and Tommy Bizz?, this is more than fuckin ease
    to murder you's i aint even gotta show my expertise
    i just seize, and throw ya'll to your knees
    so the both of you can suck dick, like louise
    geez!! fuckin double team? fuck it, gimme triple, still no gaurantees
    you gon' understand my shit if i move to Bali and speak the Balinease
    you fags are proccessed cheese, im gon' kill you wit a breeze
    im like JESUS, but the opposite, i dont heel, i spread deceace
    ill give you SARS if your healthy... 'specially if you japanese
    or next thing you know, your walkin round wit parkinson's disease
    fuck da both of you, think you can take me? please!
    i gotta better chance passin for chinese
    befo' you can get to me, you need to swim the seven seas
    even when you get here, you still gon suck on deas
    till they purple, cuz i am hard to please
    your mom should know, why dont you ask that sleeze
    fuck dis im tired, im out to catch some z's

    basically i wanna know where you guys think i stand... this shit might be corny, but fuck it... i wanna have some opinions.

  • #2
    thx 4 da opinion... ya, i tried to just keep 1 rhyme and see how far i can get it

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    • #3
      aiight thx...
      peep some more of my shit in the freestyle forum
      im spittin at least once a day in the lyrical circle thread

      ya your right tho GreE, im still a rookie
      been doin dis for about a month or 2 at the most

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      • #4
        yeah, i'd have to give you a 6.5/10.
        keep at it

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        • #5
          uppin

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          • #6
            people dont like readin' shit no more do they?

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            • #7
              shit, tell me about it

              FEEDBACK PEOPLE

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              • #8
                aiight, ima stop freeposting in here,
                i'll leave ya too it,
                peace

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                • #9





                  AKA's Thoughts


                  First off, don't ever make more than 2 words at the end of your lines rhyme, because sometimes, the flow will be off, especially if you have an un-even amount of words that rhyme. Secondly, don't make threats, anybody can do that, if you do make threats, make them worth reading, explain how you'll do, what your say your gonna do. If your not sure it flows, just read it normally back to yourself, and if it doesn't... Make it. Add multies. Multies help smoothin out the flow of a verse, that's why Tenn never has flow problems. But, on my rating, I'll give it a 5/10, because I really didn't see anything, that caught me eye. It was just an average verse, and 5/10 is my rating for average verses. Keep at it though.


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