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  • Surviving the Game (FIRST SOLO FULL LENGTH SONG, FEEDBACK IS REALLY IMPORTANT)

    hey ya;ll this is my first full length song so please leave feed back. Peace

    Ya'll ever feel like at some stage that this ain't bout your skill anymore? that it's your rep, that's who you are, and that's how you're treated? this is my Hail Mary to the game, hope ya'll relate:

    When i first came to this board i didn't make a fuss
    i had a nick and some skill, but that's all i was
    i didn't need a buzz, i joine a crew because
    to get heared u need a vet to say he does~
    ~love your skill , and he's giving you props, that's how your cherry pops.
    But then your battle flops, and there go your props
    and your respect just drops, and your exsitence stops.
    The truth is it ain't even about your skill, you take a pill you chill
    you know this next one you will, this mission u got to fullfill
    but still, your win passes as an unnoticed sin
    you act so keen just to find your name in the bin
    you might get some respect, and they might let u in
    but you were down before, and where the fuck have they been?
    so you get hold of a mic , and you look past this shit
    you concentrate and you spit, you take a punch and you hit
    you realize you're just a brand, but then you look aside
    the mic's your only friend, u sing the hook and vibe


    Chorus X2
    Rap and respect start with the same letter
    if you aint got the right one then you'll never matter
    no matter who you win or how much you're better
    it's the rep here u need in order to climb the ladder


    You keep on trying the game, playing the cards you were dealt
    you want the belt, but knowing you'll eventually melt
    there ain't much you can do, you have to subdue
    you got skill, but no one's looking up to you
    all of the sudden you start winning, u get props, but vets say it's just the beginning
    put you on a lower pedestal, like it's a different air they're breathing
    you try the tourneys, but before they end you burn in the furnace
    you think you got this, but dickrders vote for their homies
    they're phonies, you realize you're alone on this
    you take a punch you miss, you stir up some shit, you diss, while others kiss~
    ~up to vets that's how they build their reps
    i rather stay nobody then be one of their pets.
    You see you have to lose some battles if you want to win the war
    but that's just give you enough rep for you to ask for more
    my hand is sore ~ from trying to win this race
    to keep a straight face when ya'll putting down the case
    it's a disgracem thinkin how would you act if this was a vet in my place
    And i don't need my name written under every word
    cant seem to get respect in the game, so i'mma live and die by the sword


    Chorus X2
    Rap and respect start with the same letter
    if you aint got the right one then you'll never matter
    no matter who you win or how much you're better
    it's the rep here u need in order to climb the ladder


    In the end of the day this rap still has hope
    deep inside u know u can make it, because u know you're dope
    you got that inner scope, and then you learn to cope~
    ~with any obstacle that is on your way, you'll keep focused and off this road you'll never sway
    no matter what they say, i'll take it come what may.
    you learn to look past you fight
    for every shoutout you get, cuz you deserve the right
    and you don't sleep at night untill you get this right (correct)
    untill you're Superman, no fear of Kryptonite.
    the truth is you get use and bruised, and then accused and abused
    but u sit back amused, just let them get diffused.
    Behind all the dirt, u'll still find support
    like we 2 teams, but we play the same court
    and i gotta give props to the once who took it past the sport
    Brick and Dom, dawgs you know you're the best in the world
    when i didn't have a rep , ya'll agreed to invest in this pearl
    so here i'm done now this shit is off my chest
    i wont fall down, cuz i will stay the last
    the rep comes, and it could leave as fast
    this is my life, i feel i've just been put to the test


    Chorus X2
    Rap and respect start with the same letter
    if you aint got the right one then you'll never matter
    no matter who you win or how much you're better
    it's the rep here u need in order to climb the ladder


    it is what it is, that's how i felt, that's how a lot of ya'll out there feel, so lets change it, lets bring this respect to a higher level, give everyman his chance, peace i'm out.
    Last edited by sniper113; 04-28-2003, 02:36 PM.
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  • #2
    Sniper rep IOM forever. Matter of fact he is goin to do audio.

    Ill sht man. there is a inside message for some in the IOM but i'm the only one that sees it. Sniper you will run this shit soo dawg
    G.O.A.T.


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    • #3
      thanks dom, means a lot u know . uppin for feedback
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      • #4
        that shits good and it speaks true as well, i liked tha bit bout tha vets being really different to tha rookies, 'breathing different air', it can feel like that dawg, good shit, i think it would be ill as fuck if it were put into audio dawg, hope ya produce some more quality shit like this dawg, you tight!! peace
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        • #5
          Yo thanks a lot Sparxx mad respect, it is in my plans to put this into an audio. it's my first song and i wanted to make something people can relate to, and it's how i felt. so thanks, and uppin.
          Peace
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          • #6
            niiiiiiiice... deeeeeep song man... itz almost like a lose urself type song... liked it a lot...

            cant wait till it hits audio
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            • #7
              thank Izzy, feesback from the crew is alwas dope man.
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              • #8
                uppin
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                • #9
                  uppin
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                  • #10
                    does no one care? lol feedback is welcomes
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                    • #11
                      nice...man...i liked the chorus...hell i liked the whole thing

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                      • #12
                        thanks a lot man, that's dope. uppin for more feedback
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                        • #13
                          dat was a crazy tight song man and i kinda agree wit it cuz its tru and real like dat. props dawg
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                          • #14
                            thanks a lot bro, that was my main objective to make pople feel it , so thaks again, and respect. uppin
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                            • #15
                              Thats a phat rap Snipe
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                              A big Kiss right back at cha Boo (MiLS) Much Love Baby!!!

                              Shouts Out To MiLS, =FLEX=, h2o...HyiGhII, (I Love You Guys) SparkxxMC, rapgame, Dalet2k, Dkonflikt

                              I also wanna say wuzzup to the coolest chick on this site: Shadygirl!


                              Remember back in the time when the only signs we had was pickets...
                              But now in 2003 it be this way something come wicked...
                              G-Ang's killin others for colors...
                              Thangs that we wear for fashion, other people take it for a reason to be blastin..
                              What tha fuck is goin on...
                              Not soft like buttercups, but had enough of singin that same song...
                              See I stayed across tha streets from the projects...
                              Took out yo mama's trash and groceries to her trunk to keep my pockets fat like cellulite...
                              Only been in jail one week...
                              Plus I'm shullbit and I pray to god I won't repeat...
                              I should a pulled it whenI had a chance to...
                              No I shouldn't...
                              Cuz if I did dat...
                              Dat shit that keeps you on yo tippy-tippy toes like a sellout...
                              Not callin no names, but really who's bad?...
                              I go through obsticles all the fuckin time...
                              You can't forget where you come from...

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