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    ok, this is a vers i wrote ages ago for a battle against Tennessee and Dirty Werdz.

    30 lines is all i need to make you bleed
    Tenn’s high on pills and Durty’s got pot, so he’s high off weed
    so while your fucked on drugs, i’ll impregnate ya hoes with my seed
    so take heed, this is the rawest rhyme your ever likely to read
    ***
    why you wanna start beef with me? you don’t fucken know me
    if you don’t like my rhymes homie, you can do what ya mum did and blow me
    yeah, i fucked Tennessee’s mum only, i was about to go and leave her lonely
    when she ran at me flat out, just to shout “Hava, here’s my number, phone me”
    ***
    Durty Wordz, don’t be thinkin’ i forgot ya, nah nah
    i can picture you and Tenn in bed doin’ tha horizontal cha cha
    Durty: “Come on Tenn, take my cum bar”
    Tennessee: “Slow down dawg, don’t stick it in that far”
    oh, the stories i could tell ya, yada yada blah blah
    ***
    dawgs, your rhymes are so tame they make fairy tales sound hardcore
    and when you read ours, you will bleed from every skin pore
    cause when Hava and T.O.Menice spit, we spit raw
    you so poor, just fuck off home, to ya house of boxed cardboard
    ***
    Hava Gess and T.O.Menice will rip ya balls off and play table tennis
    we’re like Dennis tha Menice, be reakin’ havoc with every sentence
    we spit what we like, when we like on who we like
    even if you’re a emcee femcee or a dyke on a bike
    we’ll still rip tha illest shit you ever heard in ya life
    cause i’ll take yous all on, even without my glock or my knife
    i aint like you pussies, ima be somebody and me a wife
    ***
    Durty Wordz, you won’t get a bitch if you keep jackin’ Tenn off with vasaline
    or if you make him scream by bitin’ his dick off tryin’ to get his cream
    i heard Tenn said you’d give him better head if you were toothless
    so fuck you, i’m ruthless when i’m dissin’, i’ll make ya run gutless
    fuck this shit dawg, ima go drink some more Hennessey
    all we gotta do now is beat Durty and Tennessee

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