open challenge

[lost myself]

im bored and need to battle

[lost myself]

gone for the night, ill spit later if anyones responds

[MTX]

fuck it im bored ill spit first

first to 3 votes wins

damm you lost yourself?your fucken dumb//
more retarted than roofus the bum//(roofus from Bum Fights)
going up against me is like a hex,that you cannot beat//
you battling MTX,who spits nothing but heat//
I spit more fire, than a flame thrower//
You couldn't win if you luck was higher, than a four leaf clover//
My name should be eminence, cause im above all//(eminence means above all)
like Yao Ming in the presence,of midgets 3 feet tall//
now before this continues it course,lets stop and take a poll//
how many of you think ima rip him up worse,than his boyfiend did his asshole//
damm lost yourself that must take its toll//
you probably have it as wide as a cereal bowl//
What ashame, a unaymous vote//
this was stragiht from the brain, aint even shit i wrote//

there it is waitin on yours

[InK]

i don't know how many people have used luck and four leaf clover in the same line in thier shit, but it's gettin real old, real quick

[MTX]

okay, sorry i wont use it anymore! lmao

[InK]

lol i was just sayin, i've had three recent battles and they have all had that line in it...lol...you can use it whenever you want *****.

[MTX]

don't trip, you know it just that im new to this shit so i don't know whats played out!
but thanx for the tip!

im just waitin for this fool to spit so peeps can vote!

so make sure you come back when this fool spits so u can vote

[MTX]

fuck what a fucken pussy, probably read my shit and pussied out!

i fucken hate when people do that, 2nd time this shit happens!

but can somebody please leave some feedback, im new at this shit i would appreciate if you told me how i did!

thanx

[InK]

yeah your shit was good i liked this.
going up against me is like a hex,that you cannot beat//
you battling MTX,who spits nothing but heat//

yeah you got good word play and that, but you just have to keep your bars around the same length because as i was reading it, it didn't flow too well, but other than that you are good. And lost myself did this to me, i had to wait, lol he will probably spit, don't know when tho.

[MTX]

thanx for the feedback kure, ill work on that!

[MTX]

c'mon peeps just leave some feedback, thats all im askin!

[elemental]

i tried to refrain from posting but my heart and fingers got the better of me........ and i just cant help but say gee InsaKure, you seem really nice to be back up MTX and MTX how brave are you? that's so inspiring. do you guys/girls know each other? if you don't i'm blown away----wow-----thats fkn wikd.... i guess a battling site is the most wrong place to be getting mushie but man that just pierced my heart. too kool- but would be intersting to see you both battle after that moment. this is the second battle thing i've checked out... and my first battle experience was from the 8mile movie so yeh uumm i should go, but but i've seen fair few dj battles.

[InK]

farmer burton, are you on crack? i battle all the time, i battle in real life...sometimes, haha ( undefeated, but i've only battled three times ) so umm yeah, i don't see how i was gettin mushie and shit, i was just givin him feed back..

[elemental]

hey insakure, oh no not you getting mushie, i was getting mushie over you both- how you were supporting MTX.

yeh the crack thing------i may as well be!!

[InK]

hahah^^ ok man, lol peace..i just got confused... i always do.