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    Yo, im new to the site, and ive posted live 3 verses already at the Freestyle Forum, I just want some more people to rate my shit, so here ya go imma do something real quick, and if ya want to rate me more, then go to the freestyle forum, id appreciate, ok here we go

    No more rhymes at this time can fit in my mental capacity/
    Takin MCs out, my mouth is droppin MCs quite rapidly/
    This ******* rapper, manufactures words to mow ya down like tractors/
    I can never stay on topic, Im attracted to simple distractions/
    Needin meditation, feelin segregated, too much interrogation/
    Im risin and surprising ya like I was suspended in levitation/
    Im tired of the rap game, its full of bitches/
    Gainin riches, rhyming about the same shit, except the beat switches/
    I make incisions into victims organ systems/
    I donít want responsibility, fuck makin important decisions/
    I make miracles, like getting hard in ice cold winters/
    Usin up more ink then Lexmark printers/
    Fuck with me lyrically, actuality, youll be on top/
    Only cuz after the battle, you bitches will be ridin my cock/
    I stop and drop lines at any hip hop shop/
    My switch is to the highest notch, shootin words like I got glocks/
    Im writin and tryin to enlighten, brighten up the future/
    Trippin over 2 hits of Tylenol, my actions are unusual/
    People think I suck, well fuck, the feelings mutual/
    I see your private life, Im an avid fan of the Truman Show/

    This was real quick, if it sucks sorry i disgraced your board. Peace out, gimme your opinions
    The Big 4
    http://youtu.be/NMMUh37BWEE The Truth
    http://youtu.be/PT_j38VUAuE Rondo
    http://youtu.be/yhTKSdWRC0I KG
    http://youtu.be/3VhwzKGkvjg Ray

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    nice spit, good use of multis

    my fav par was:
    I make miracles, like getting hard in ice cold winters/
    Usin up more ink then Lexmark printers/

    keep it up
    FUCK BEING IN A CREW

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    • #3
      Yeah I Agree, Keep Spittin

      Fav Bar;

      Needin meditation, feelin segregated, too much interrogation/
      Im risin and surprising ya like I was suspended in levitation/

      Flow Cud Be Betta There, But I Like The Vocab And Metaphor
      Englishman

      I . O . M

      Illest On Mics

      " Eye Of The Storm, My Tears Fall In The Torrential Downpour//
      The Flood, Ya Deathwish
      WRITTEN IN BLOOD " - Jehst

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