who wantz 2 join my crew??

[BulletProof]

if u feel like joinin meh crew all u gotta do iz lay out a good verse

[d12_man]

i do

check dis rhyme i spit/
it aint gon be shit/
fuck wit wit me get hit/
i will use my whole clip/
i spit good rhymes/
u dont wanna c my nine/
im da fuckin entertainer/
im da claimer/
of dis shit i spit/
u get hit/
my ak iz da last thing u c/
b4 u die u gonna bleed/
u will suffer 2 death/
i wont shoot u in da head/
do u wanna b dead?/
when ur dad gives u head(haha)/
im the best/
i dont neva rest/

yo peace out/

[d12_man]

how u like dat shit shadyman

[Coma]

Newest Rapper

I'm sick and tired of these wanna be rappers
People who go to battles just to be clappers
Step if you wanna step, if not step back
But if you run your gunna get a bullet in your ass crack
that why I snap, just lose my head
i go for the gauge and just spray off lead
I put 8 even tho you be dead
There be 2 leaders in our crew, me and Pred
If you wanna live anyother day i sudgest one thing
Next time you come only come wit fist that's all you need to bring
cuz i'll fight you using all my might
And everyone laugh at my rhymes only cuz i'm white?
Fuck you, why you bring race into it?
"Only a white boy is what you said when your throat got slit

[InK]

lol.. when you get it togetha, battle our crew.

[BulletProof]

iight man when we get it 2getha tho

[Fitz]

lol......wow.....idk Insakure.....

[InK]

yeah.. it might be a bit hard

[Fitz]

its like genocide lol

[Soldier_]

yeah iam with insakure battle our crew battle this shit..lol

[ChronicRage]

LoL, hey, he may come up with something good, i may want to join, cuz az for now im crewless...I'm still working on improving to get better with my verses.. lemme drop one real quick

First time I came here, i dropped stupid lines till insakure, told me whats wrong with my rhymes,so i asked for a cure/
He prescribed me something simple, its medication like oxy to clear a pimple, maybe if im good enough i'll be carrying shady's crew symbol/
But since my first verse, i found out I've gone shitty to worse, then from there to kinda good, but my shit still needs some work/
I thank fitz or advice, i can need it more than jus twice, cuz with the help of WCR, I can make the crew battle turn out somewhat nice/

I actually freestyled that whole thing, tell me if its anygood...

[ChronicRage]

oops its supposed to "I Thank Fitz for advice"*

[Fitz]

not bad, thanks for the props....

[InK]

yeah it was alright, put the lines like this instead tho..

First time I came here, i dropped stupid lines to insakure//
told me whats wrong with my rhymes,so i asked for a cure//
He prescribed me something simple, its medication like oxy to clear a pimple//
maybe if im good enough i'll be carrying shady's crew symbol//
But since my first verse, i found out I've gone shitty to worse//
then from there to kinda good, but my shit still needs some work///
I thank fitz or advice, i can need it more than jus twice//
cuz with the help of WCR, I can make the crew battle turn out somewhat nice//


remember to try to stay on flow, cuz as you can see this didn't, it was an alright verse tho, at least you are thinkin about it a bit more, thanks for the props, and work on the flow.

[Chomp On This]

dont get me goin', kid, you betta let me join/
if you dont, dont worry you wont be dreamin'/
youll be getting chased and screamin'/
by this lyrical demon, in a MiChAeL mYeRs MaSk/
pull out my Butcher Knife, ready to Putchyer Life in danger/
go to stab but i missed your wrist, got your cYcLe TiReS sLaShEd/
i'm just fuckin' around, so you can Chomp On This/
I'll quit spittin' this before your comp gets pissed/