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  • ChronicRage
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    aight thanks for the feedback...yah i didnt see the flow either when i posted it..
    I thought it did as i was just typing away..oh well.lol

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  • Coma
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    Any good?

    Give me some input on this

    I'm Coma, never mess
    Tell your brother not to try on your momma's hooker dress
    Oh shit, i said something bout your mom, now i'm dead
    Fight me with your fist you pussy, not wit lead
    I'll break not only you face but your head
    Your boy's won't back you cuz they be dead.
    Fuck you man, you little shit stick
    I'm a time bomb with the tick
    I don't give a fuck, Tick-e-tock
    Listen to your momma after the battle on my cock
    Cuz you can't touch a white boy holding a mic
    I know, they don't laugh cuz i'm whack but cuz i'm white
    But whatever, just here to prove white men can't jump
    But you lady is one of the thing ALL whites will hump

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  • Chomp On This
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    dont get me goin', kid, you betta let me join/
    if you dont, dont worry you wont be dreamin'/
    youll be getting chased and screamin'/
    by this lyrical demon, in a MiChAeL mYeRs MaSk/
    pull out my Butcher Knife, ready to Putchyer Life in danger/
    go to stab but i missed your wrist, got your cYcLe TiReS sLaShEd/
    i'm just fuckin' around, so you can Chomp On This/
    I'll quit spittin' this before your comp gets pissed/

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  • InsaKure
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    yeah it was alright, put the lines like this instead tho..

    First time I came here, i dropped stupid lines to insakure//
    told me whats wrong with my rhymes,so i asked for a cure//
    He prescribed me something simple, its medication like oxy to clear a pimple//
    maybe if im good enough i'll be carrying shady's crew symbol//
    But since my first verse, i found out I've gone shitty to worse//
    then from there to kinda good, but my shit still needs some work///
    I thank fitz or advice, i can need it more than jus twice//
    cuz with the help of WCR, I can make the crew battle turn out somewhat nice//


    remember to try to stay on flow, cuz as you can see this didn't, it was an alright verse tho, at least you are thinkin about it a bit more, thanks for the props, and work on the flow.

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  • Fitz
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    not bad, thanks for the props....

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  • ChronicRage
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    oops its supposed to "I Thank Fitz for advice"*

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  • ChronicRage
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    LoL, hey, he may come up with something good, i may want to join, cuz az for now im crewless...I'm still working on improving to get better with my verses.. lemme drop one real quick

    First time I came here, i dropped stupid lines till insakure, told me whats wrong with my rhymes,so i asked for a cure/
    He prescribed me something simple, its medication like oxy to clear a pimple, maybe if im good enough i'll be carrying shady's crew symbol/
    But since my first verse, i found out I've gone shitty to worse, then from there to kinda good, but my shit still needs some work/
    I thank fitz or advice, i can need it more than jus twice, cuz with the help of WCR, I can make the crew battle turn out somewhat nice/

    I actually freestyled that whole thing, tell me if its anygood...

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  • Soldier_
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    yeah iam with insakure battle our crew battle this shit..lol

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  • Fitz
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    its like genocide lol

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  • InsaKure
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    yeah.. it might be a bit hard

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  • Fitz
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    lol......wow.....idk Insakure.....

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  • shadyman_101
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    iight man when we get it 2getha tho

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  • InsaKure
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    lol.. when you get it togetha, battle our crew.

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  • Coma
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    Newest Rapper

    I'm sick and tired of these wanna be rappers
    People who go to battles just to be clappers
    Step if you wanna step, if not step back
    But if you run your gunna get a bullet in your ass crack
    that why I snap, just lose my head
    i go for the gauge and just spray off lead
    I put 8 even tho you be dead
    There be 2 leaders in our crew, me and Pred
    If you wanna live anyother day i sudgest one thing
    Next time you come only come wit fist that's all you need to bring
    cuz i'll fight you using all my might
    And everyone laugh at my rhymes only cuz i'm white?
    Fuck you, why you bring race into it?
    "Only a white boy is what you said when your throat got slit

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  • d12_man
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    how u like dat shit shadyman

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